Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant, but slightly repetitive and has minor grammar issues. Make your response more concise by starting with a direct topic sentence, then add one specific detail and use correct vocabulary (e.g., "especially" not "specially"). Limit to 2–3 sentences and avoid repeating the same idea.

예시: Yes, I do. I especially enjoy photographing sunrises and sunsets because the colours change quickly, so I often go to my terrace in the morning or evening to capture the light.

제안: The main idea is expressed, but grammar errors and repetition reduce clarity. Use a clear topic sentence, correct subject-verb agreement, and provide a specific supporting detail or brief reason. Use linking words for coherence (e.g., "because", "for example"). Avoid vague words like "land"; be specific (fields, hills, farmland).

예시: I prefer rural views because they are peaceful and less crowded. For example, I like photographing rolling fields and small farms since the natural light and open space make better compositions.

제안: Your idea is understandable but contradictory and slightly informal. Start with a direct answer, then explain briefly and consistently. Correct grammar (e.g., "places" plural) and avoid contradictions—if you haven't travelled, say you prefer views abroad based on what you've seen online. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

예시: I prefer views in other countries because I admire landscapes in places like Australia and the United States. Although I haven't travelled there yet, I have seen many beautiful photos on social media that inspire me.

× I really like taking pictures of different views, specially sunset and sunrise.

✓ I really like taking pictures of different views, especially sunsets and sunrises.

The word 'specially' is often used to mean 'for a special purpose'; the correct word here is 'especially' (adverb) to indicate preference. Also 'sunset and sunrise' referring generally should be pluralized to 'sunsets and sunrises' (singular/plural issue). Suggestion: use 'especially' and pluralize when speaking generally about repeated events.

× I go to my terrace and take pictures of sunset.

✓ I go to my terrace and take pictures of the sunset.

When referring to a specific instance of sunset you should use the definite article 'the sunset'. If you mean sunsets in general, pluralize to 'sunsets'. The original omitted the required article before a singular noun. Suggestion: use 'the sunset' for a specific event or 'sunsets' for a habitual action.

× To be honest, I prefer views in rural areas because the view of rural areas are quite peaceful and provide calm and I really enjoy taking photography in rural areas, especially land.

✓ To be honest, I prefer views in rural areas because the views in rural areas are quite peaceful and calming, and I really enjoy taking photographs in rural areas, especially landscapes.

Multiple issues: 'the view of rural areas are' has subject-verb disagreement and incorrect article/pronoun use; use 'the views... are' or 'views... are'. 'Provide calm' is not idiomatic; use 'calming' or 'provide a sense of calm'. 'Taking photography' is incorrect collocation — correct is 'taking photographs' or 'doing photography'. 'Especially land' is unnatural; the intended word is 'landscapes'. Suggestions: ensure subject and verb agree, use appropriate noun forms, and choose idiomatic collocations.

× To be honest, I prefer views in other countries such as Australia and America.

✓ To be honest, I prefer views in other countries such as Australia and the United States.

'America' is ambiguous; 'the United States' is the standard country name. Also when listing countries, include the definite article for 'the United States'. Suggestion: use correct country names and articles where required.

× I never travel in other countries but I saw a lot of views and beautiful place in Internet and social media.

✓ I have never traveled to other countries, but I have seen a lot of views and beautiful places on the Internet and on social media.

Tense consistency: 'I never travel' should be present perfect 'I have never traveled' to describe life experience. 'Travel in other countries' uses wrong preposition — use 'to other countries'. 'I saw' should be present perfect 'I have seen' to match experience. 'Beautiful place' should be plural 'beautiful places'. Use preposition 'on' with 'the Internet' and 'on social media'. Suggestions: use present perfect for life experiences, correct prepositions ('to', 'on'), and pluralize countable nouns when appropriate.