Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cevap doğrudan soruya kısa ve net olmalı; mevcut cevap belirsiz kelimeler (uh, um) ve alakasız ifadeler içeriyor. Konuşma sırasında gereksiz duraksamaları azaltın ve nedenini kısaca açıklayın. Örneğin: önce açık bir konu cümlesi (“Not really, I don’t usually take photos of views.”), ardından bir sebep ve bir kısa detay ekleyin. Bağlaçlar (because, so) kullanarak cümleleri bağlayın ve maksimum 3-4 cümlede kalın.

예시: Not really — I don’t usually take photos of views because I prefer enjoying the moment rather than photographing it. When I travel I tend to relax and have a drink with friends, so I don’t focus on taking pictures.

제안: Cevap doğrudan fakat çok kısa ve yüzeysel; “more easy” gibi dilbilgisi hatası var. Net bir konu cümlesi kuralım, ardından iki kısa destekleyici neden verin ve uygun bağlaçlar kullanın. “Easier” doğru karşılıktır. Örneğin: bir tercih, sonra sebep(ler) ve bir kısa örnek.

예시: I prefer urban views because I enjoy the energy and variety of city streets. For example, there are interesting buildings and lively markets that are easy to explore, so I find cities more stimulating than quiet countryside.

제안: Cevap anlaşılması zor ve tutarsız; alakasız ifadeler (teeth, shame) konudan sapmış. Önce net bir tercih belirtin, sonra nedeni açıklayın ve bir kısa örnek verin. Gereksiz konuşma bozukluklarını ve uygunsuz ifadeleri çıkartın. Bağlaçlarla düşünceleri düzenleyin ve basit, doğru dil bilgisi kullanın.

예시: I usually prefer views in other countries because I find new cultures and landscapes more exciting. For instance, I loved the coastline I saw abroad last year, which was very different from the scenery at home.

× Umm, personally, I'm not into it. Uh, I'm angry. We most uh, uh, calm and drink at the time.

✓ Umm, personally, I'm not into it. Uh, I'm not sure. We usually stay calm and have a drink at that time.

The original contains unclear and incorrect phrases ('I'm angry' contradicts context, 'We most uh, uh, calm and drink at the time' is ungrammatical). Fixes: replace 'I'm angry' with 'I'm not sure' to reflect hesitation if intended; use adverb 'usually' for habitual action (sentence structure error) and proper verbs 'stay calm' and 'have a drink'. Suggestion: plan sentence before speaking, use simple subject-verb-object order and common adverbs like 'usually' or 'often'.

× I prefer urban areas. Uh, I think it's more easy for me.

✓ I prefer urban areas. Uh, I think it's easier for me.

'More easy' is incorrect; comparative form of the adjective 'easy' is 'easier' (third person singular not relevant but this is comparative adjective error classified under third person singular issue ID here). Use 'easier' instead of 'more easy'. Suggestion: learn irregular comparative forms (easy → easier) and use subject + think + clause with correct adjective form.

× It's changing, I think other countries the most beautiful then always with my teeth, but my teeth very cute. I'm shame on myself.

✓ It changes. I think other countries are more beautiful. Sometimes I worry about my teeth, but they are actually cute. I'm ashamed of myself.

Original is highly ungrammatical and mixes ideas. Corrections: 'It changes' or 'It varies' for shifting preference; include verb 'are' for 'other countries are more beautiful' (there be/verb omission); express worries about teeth with proper verbs and adjectives ('I worry about', 'they are cute'); 'I'm shame on myself' should be 'I'm ashamed of myself'. Suggestion: separate different ideas into clear sentences, include necessary verbs (especially 'be'), and use correct adjective forms (ashamed).