Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is relevant and gives a clear reason and example, but fix grammar (subject-verb agreement and articles), avoid minor redundancies, and keep sentences concise (max 5). Add a linking word for clarity.

예시: Yes, I do. I enjoy photographing scenery because it refreshes my mind and makes me feel closer to nature. For example, when I go hiking I often take pictures of sunsets and mountain views, since they always calm and inspire me.

제안: Your answer communicates preference but has several grammatical errors, repetition, and awkward phrasing. State the topic directly, use correct prepositions/articles, avoid repetition, and add a linking phrase to compare both settings. Keep it within 3–4 concise sentences.

예시: I prefer rural areas because they are more spacious and closer to nature. As a result, I feel calmer and more relaxed there. In contrast, urban areas are often congested, so I usually leave the city for the weekend to enjoy the countryside.

제안: Your response addresses the question but is unclear and contains hesitations and grammar mistakes. Give a direct topic sentence (state preference), explain reasons with specific examples, avoid filler words, and use correct verb forms and articles.

예시: It depends on the scenery, but I usually prefer views in my own country. India has many states with diverse natural landscapes, such as the Himalayas and Western Ghats, which offer spectacular mountain and forest views that I love photographing.

× I take pictures of scenery that amaze me because it refresh my mind and help me feel closer to nature.

✓ I take pictures of scenery that amaze me because they refresh my mind and help me feel closer to nature.

Subject-verb and pronoun agreement: 'scenery' here refers to multiple scenes so the pronoun should be 'they' not 'it'; 'refresh' must agree with plural subject 'they'. Use plural pronoun and verb to match the plural sense of 'scenery'. Suggestion: Use 'they refresh' when referring back to multiple scenes or 'it refreshes' if you mean 'the scenery' as an uncountable singular.

× I often photograph sunsets and mountains views when I go hiking because they make me feel calm and inspired.

✓ I often photograph sunsets and mountain views when I go hiking because they make me feel calm and inspired.

Word form and noun compound: 'mountains views' is incorrect; use 'mountain views' as the correct compound noun. 'Mountain' acts as a modifier for 'views'. Suggestion: Use 'mountain views' or 'views of mountains'.

× Yes, I do prefer to rural areas that are more spacious and closer to nature.

✓ Yes, I do prefer rural areas that are more spacious and closer to nature.

Incorrect verb pattern and unnecessary 'to': 'prefer' is followed directly by a noun phrase or 'to' + verb, not 'to' + noun. Remove 'to' before 'rural areas'. Suggestion: Say 'prefer rural areas' or 'prefer to live in rural areas'.

× That helps to me stay calm and relaxed.

✓ That helps me stay calm and relaxed.

Incorrect object placement: 'help' is followed by the object directly, not 'to' plus pronoun. Use 'helps me' not 'helps to me'. Suggestion: Use 'helps me stay' or 'helps me to stay' (both acceptable), but do not place 'to' between 'helps' and the pronoun.

× On the other hand, urban areas to congested and that's why I plan to move out.

✓ On the other hand, urban areas are too congested, and that's why I plan to move out.

Verb 'to be' missing and word choice: 'to congested' is wrong; need the auxiliary verb 'are' and 'too' for 'excessively'. Insert 'are' and correct 'to' to 'too'. Suggestion: Use 'are too congested' to describe a present state.

× I I plan to leave city during weekend.

✓ I plan to leave the city during the weekend.

Repetition and missing article and preposition: Duplicate 'I' is a typo. English requires the definite article 'the' before 'city' when referring to a specific city, and 'during the weekend' needs 'the'. Suggestion: Say 'I plan to leave the city for the weekend' or 'I plan to leave the city during the weekend.'

× It's really depend on the nature and the site mostly.

✓ It really depends on the nature and the site mostly.

Subject-verb agreement: 'it' requires the third person singular verb 'depends', not 'depend'. Suggestion: Use 'depends' to match the singular subject 'it'.

× I prefer to see mountains and uh, nature's uh, scenery that is more popular in India.

✓ I prefer to see mountains and natural scenery that are more common in India.

Word choice and agreement: 'nature's scenery' is awkward; 'natural scenery' is natural. Also 'scenery' treated as plural 'are' when referring to different types or places; use 'are more common' or keep 'is more common' if treating scenery as uncountable. 'More popular in India' is unclear; 'more common in India' or 'more prevalent in India' is better. Suggestion: Use 'natural scenery that is more common in India' or 'natural scenes that are more common in India.'

× There's varied states which has a many umm, natural places that are more popular on the other.

✓ There are various states that have many natural places which are very popular with visitors.

Multiple errors: 'There's' (there is) should be 'there are' for plural 'states' (plural verb agreement). 'Varied states' is awkward; 'various states' or 'different states' is better. 'Which has a many' is wrong: use 'that have many' to match plural subject. 'More popular on the other' is unclear; clarified to 'very popular with visitors.' Suggestion: Say 'There are various states that have many natural places which are very popular with visitors' or 'There are several states with many popular natural sites.'