Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear but has several grammar and word-choice mistakes and is a bit repetitive. Improve by using a concise topic sentence, correct nouns and prepositions, and one supporting detail. For example, say you enjoy photographing nature, mention specific locations and why, and avoid repeating phrases. Focus on correct forms like "mountain" and "scenery" and include a linking word for coherence.

예시: Yes, I enjoy photographing natural scenery, especially when I’m outdoors. For example, I often take pictures in forests and on mountain trails because I like capturing light filtering through trees and dramatic landscapes.

제안: Your answer answers the question but is disfluent, wordy and unfinished. Make a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words (for example, "because" and "so"). Correct plural/singular forms ("rural areas" not "urban area") and avoid filler words.

예시: I prefer rural areas rather than urban ones because nature is more visually interesting. For instance, I like shooting forests and fields since they offer varied textures and peaceful atmospheres.

제안: The idea is understandable but grammar and fluency need work. Use a conditional correctly ("If I had the chance"), choose correct collocations ("travel abroad"), and make complete sentences. Give a brief reason and one specific example (e.g., iconic landmarks or different landscapes).

예시: If I had the chance, I would travel abroad to photograph foreign natural scenery and iconic landmarks. For example, I’d love to capture coastal cliffs in Ireland or mountain ranges in New Zealand because they look very different from landscapes at home.

× I like to captivate the natural sceneries, especially when I'm outdoors and mostly in a forest or in a mount on the mountain out.

✓ I like to capture natural scenery, especially when I'm outdoors, mostly in a forest or on a mountain.

The learner used 'captivate' (a verb meaning to attract) instead of 'capture' (to take a photo) and 'natural sceneries' which is uncountable as 'natural scenery'. Word choice and article/preposition use were incorrect. Also 'in a mount on the mountain out' is ungrammatical; use 'on a mountain' or 'in a forest'. Suggestion: use correct verb 'capture', treat 'scenery' as uncountable, and use standard prepositions 'in a forest' and 'on a mountain'. (English (Mongolia))

× I like take pictures.

✓ I like to take pictures.

Missing 'to' in the infinitive after 'like'. This is not a plural issue per se but fits the allowed list under Singular and plural issue category because form error; however correction adds the infinitive marker. Suggestion: after 'like' you can use 'to' + verb (I like to take) or gerund (I like taking). Use one of these forms consistently. (English (Mongolia))

× I prefer natural sceneries or views, which means I would choose rural areas, uh, rather than urban area for photo shooting because uh, I usually umm, the nature itself is appealing and I use.

✓ I prefer natural scenery or views, which means I would choose rural areas rather than urban areas for taking photos because nature itself is appealing and I use it as my subject.

'Natural sceneries' should be 'natural scenery' (uncountable). 'Urban area' should be plural to match 'rural areas'. 'Photo shooting' is awkward; use 'taking photos'. The sentence ended with 'I use' missing an object; add 'it as my subject'. Suggestion: use uncountable 'scenery', match number between paired nouns, use natural expressions like 'taking photos', and complete verbs with objects when needed. (English (Mongolia))

× Uh, if, if I had chance then I would prefer to travel in abroad and take a photo of foreign countries natural scenery, uh. Iconic landmarks.

✓ If I had the chance, I would prefer to travel abroad and take photos of foreign countries' natural scenery and iconic landmarks.

Use 'had the chance' with article 'the'. 'Travel abroad' not 'in abroad'. 'Foreign countries natural scenery' needs possessive: 'foreign countries' natural scenery' or better 'foreign countries' natural scenery'. 'Take a photo' can be plural 'take photos' to match general preference. 'Iconic landmarks' should be part of the sentence not a fragment. Suggestion: include articles where needed, use 'abroad' without 'in', use possessive for noun phrases, and avoid sentence fragments. (English (Mongolia))