Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 用词和语法需改进，句子结构应更自然简洁。回答时先直接回应（topic sentence），然后用1–2句具体理由或例子支持。注意动词形式（take → taking），以及更自然的表达如“broaden my perspective”、“capture different shapes and details”。避免冗长重复。

예시: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views because it broadens my perspective. For example, shooting from various angles helps me capture unique shapes and details that I would miss otherwise.

제안: 时态和单复数要注意（prefer, urban areas）。描述要具体且用词准确。先直接回答偏好，然后用2个具体、相关的理由支持，使用连接词（for example, also）让表达更连贯。避免不准确或生造词如“sky creeps”。

예시: I prefer views in urban areas because cities offer diverse architecture and vibrant street life. For example, I enjoy photographing modern skyscrapers and the busy crowds, and sometimes interesting cars add character to the scene.

제안: 表达要更清晰、用词准确（traditional culture 而非 traditional control；mystery → mysterious）。先给出直接回答，再说明具体原因和举例。避免模糊或夸张的句子，说明你想探索哪些方面（architecture, customs, landscapes）。

예시: I prefer views in my own country because our traditional culture has a long history and unique features. For instance, I love photographing ancient temples and local festivals because they reveal interesting customs and details I want to explore.

× Yes, I actually like take pictures in different views because in my perspective I think take photos in different views is able to ensure my visual perfect and I can see many shape of this thing.

✓ Yes, I actually like taking pictures from different viewpoints because, in my opinion, taking photos from different viewpoints can improve my visual sense and I can see many shapes of things.

句中动词“like”之后应使用动名词，因此“like take”应改为“like taking”。同样，短语“in my perspective I think take photos”中也需要动名词“taking photos”。另外，“in different views”更自然表达为“from different viewpoints”，“ensure my visual perfect”不是英语表达，改为“improve my visual sense”。“many shape of this thing”应为“many shapes of things”。建议：记住“like/ enjoy/ avoid”等动词后接动名词，用更地道的表达替换直译短语。

× I definitely preferred views in urban area because I like so many elements in the city.

✓ I definitely prefer views in urban areas because I like the many elements in the city.

题目是询问偏好的一般事实或现在时，不能使用过去式“preferred”，应使用一般现在时“prefer”。同时“urban area”应为复数“urban areas”或加定冠词“the urban area”，但这里更自然为复数。建议：表达现在习惯或喜好时使用一般现在时。

× For example, the sky creeps, some beautiful cars and many group of people.

✓ For example, skyscrapers, some beautiful cars, and many groups of people.

“the sky creeps”为错误直译，可能想表达“skyscrapers”（摩天大楼）。“many group of people”应为复数“many groups of people”或“many groups of people”/“many people in groups”。注意名词复数形式与数量词搭配。建议：复数名词与数量词匹配，避免逐字直译。

× I prefer views in my country because in my opening, our traditional control is very wonderful with long history and very mystery.

✓ I prefer views in my country because, in my opinion, our traditional culture is wonderful, has a long history, and is very mysterious.

“in my opening”是错误表达，应为“in my opinion”。“traditional control”应为“traditional culture”。句子中时态应为一般现在时，描述事实或观点时使用现在时。形容词使用错误，“very mystery”应为“very mysterious”。并且“with long history”更自然为“has a long history”。建议：使用固定搭配“in my opinion”；形容词与名词或动词搭配要注意语法结构。

× Just like more and more secrets, I want to explore and innovate.

✓ There are more and more secrets, and I want to explore and innovate.

“Just like more and more secrets”不是完整或自然的表达。如果想说“就像有越来越多的秘密”，更合适的结构是引入“there are”。句子需要主语和谓语，原句缺乏明确主谓关系。建议：确保句子有完整主语和谓语，使用“there are”表存在。