Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Give a direct, natural response with correct grammar and a clear topic sentence. Avoid repetition and use a short explanation with one supporting detail. Include linking words if you add more than one idea.

예시: Yes, I do. I enjoy photographing a variety of views because it helps me capture different moods and lighting. For example, I like taking photos at sunrise to catch soft colors and at night to capture city lights.

제안: Answer clearly which you prefer and give specific reasons and examples. Use correct grammar (e.g., “I prefer…,” “because…”). Use linking words like “because” or “however” when giving reasons or contrasts.

예시: I prefer rural views because I enjoy open landscapes and natural scenery, such as fields and forests. However, I also appreciate urban views for their interesting buildings and street life, especially for architectural photography.

제안: State a clear preference or say you like both and explain why. Use comparative language correctly and provide a specific reason or example. Keep your answer concise and natural (max 3–4 sentences).

예시: I like both, but I slightly prefer views in other countries because they offer unfamiliar landscapes and cultural scenes that inspire me. That said, I also love views in my own country because they feel familiar and sentimental, such as the coastal cliffs near my hometown.

× Yes, yes, I like taking pictures in another views.

✓ Yes, yes, I like taking pictures of different views.

The student used the wrong preposition 'in' and the word 'another' incorrectly with plural noun 'views'. Use 'take pictures of' to indicate photographing something, and use 'different' instead of 'another' when referring to multiple views. Suggestion: say 'taking pictures of different views'. Grammar Problem Type ID: 11

× I like another areas in this trees and buildings.

✓ I like other areas with these trees and buildings.

The student used 'another' incorrectly with a plural noun and wrong preposition 'in' plus incorrect determiner 'this' for plural. Use 'other' for plural nouns ('areas') and 'with' to indicate features present in those areas. Also change 'this trees' to 'these trees'. Suggestion: 'I like other areas with these trees and buildings.' Grammar Problem Type ID: 11

× I like another countries and I like very my country.

✓ I like other countries, and I really like my country.

Several mistakes: 'another' is incorrect with plural 'countries'—use 'other'. 'I like very my country' is ungrammatical: use adverb 'really' before the verb phrase and the correct word order 'like my country'. Also add a comma before 'and' for clarity. Suggestion: 'I like other countries, and I really like my country.' Grammar Problem Type ID: 11