Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 答案总体清晰且有内容，但存在语法与表达不够自然的问题。应注意主谓一致（makes → make）、冠词与复数用法（different perspective → different perspectives），并简化冗长结构以更自然流畅地表达。可以把长句拆成两部分，并用连接词自然衔接，最多控制在4-5句内。

예시: Yes, I love taking photos from different perspectives. I especially enjoy finding uncommon or fresh angles that turn a scene into a novel composition, because getting the right shot gives me a real sense of accomplishment.

제안: 回答表达了明确偏好，但存在用词不当与句子衔接问题（ubiquitous 与 literally 的使用不准，’views photography’语序错误）。建议使用更准确的词汇并用连词连接对比句，同时补充具体细节（为什么更自由、能找到哪些拍摄对象）。保持句子简洁，不超过五句。

예시: I prefer rural areas because urban scenes often look very similar and predictable. In the countryside I find more varied landscapes and unusual features, so I have more freedom to explore different subjects and angles.

제안: 观点明确且有比较，但存在拼写与语法错误（aboard → abroad，where → and/or such as）、以及例子结构不完整。建议修正拼写并把例子说完整，提供具体对比理由（如建筑风格、文化氛围、保存程度），并用连接词使逻辑更清晰。

예시: I prefer views in other countries because many tourist spots at home have become overdeveloped and similar due to commercialization. For example, rural landscapes in New Zealand often feel untouched, and historical towns in Europe preserve unique architecture that you rarely see at home.

× Yes, I'm a big fan of taking pictures in different perspective.

✓ Yes, I'm a big fan of taking pictures from different perspectives.

错误类型：动词现在分词/词组搭配问题。问题在于介词短语和名词形式不当：应使用介词短语 from different perspectives 表示“从不同角度/视角拍照”，并且 perspective 应为复数 perspectives 才能匹配不同的角度。建议：使用固定搭配 from different perspectives 或 use different perspectives；将 perspective 变为复数。

× Especially the uncommon and fresh angles in making the pictures into a totally novel composition could makes me feel a sense of accomplishment.

✓ Especially uncommon and fresh angles that make the pictures into a totally novel composition could make me feel a sense of accomplishment.

错误类型：动词现在分词及主谓一致问题。原句中使用了 in making… 结构不自然，并且谓语 could 后面不应加第三人称单数 makes，应为 make。建议把从句改为 that make… 或省略介词短语改为动词从句；注意 could 后动词用原形。

× I prefer views in rural areas because urban areas are ubiquitous where the views photography are literally similar and there is nothing new for me to explore.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because urban views are ubiquitous — the photographs are often very similar and there is nothing new for me to explore.

错误类型：量词/词汇搭配与句子结构错误。原句中 the views photography 用法不正确，名词搭配混乱，且 ubiquitous 修饰对象不明确。建议把主语和名词搭配理顺：urban views 或 urban areas；photographs 或 photography 单独使用；句子可用破折号或分句分开。

× But rural scenery is more varied and I can have more freedom to find.

✓ But rural scenery is more varied and I have more freedom to explore.

错误类型：句子结构错误/动词搭配不当。原句 use 的动词 find 后缺少宾语且搭配不自然，native 表达为 have more freedom to explore 或 have more freedom to find subjects/places。建议使用 explore 或 find + 名词。

× I prefer views in other countries. In my experience, many tourist spots in China have become overdeveloped and quite similar because of commercialisation, whereas places aboard often feel more authentic and diverse.

✓ I prefer views in other countries. In my experience, many tourist spots in China have become overdeveloped and quite similar because of commercialisation, whereas places abroad often feel more authentic and diverse.

错误类型：介词使用错误。单词 aboard 意为“在船上/在飞机上”，而要表示“国外”应使用 abroad。建议记住 abroad 用于“在国外”，aboard 不可替代。

× For example, the rural landscapes in New Zealand where historical towns in Europe.

✓ For example, the rural landscapes in New Zealand and the historical towns in Europe.

错误类型：句子结构错误。原句缺少谓语或连接词，造成残缺句（片段）。应把两类举例并列连接，例如 using and 连词：the rural landscapes in New Zealand and the historical towns in Europe。