Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 答えは簡潔ですが不自然な文や文法ミスがあり、理由の説明も曖昧です。改善点：1) 文法を正しくし、完全な文で答える（主語＋動詞＋目的語）。2) 理由を具体的に述べる。3) つなぎ言葉（because, so, therefore）を使って論理的に説明する。例："I don't often take pictures because I'm not very interested in photography, so I usually just use my phone occasionally when something special appears." のようにすると自然です。

예시: I don't take pictures of different views very often because I'm not really into photography. Instead, I prefer to enjoy the scene with my eyes, so I usually only snap a photo when something special or unusual happens.

제안: 答えはあいまいで、支援となる具体例や理由がありません。改善点：1) 直接的なトピック文で立場を示す（prefer both / prefer urban / prefer rural）。2) それぞれの理由を1〜2文で具体的に述べる。3) 接続詞（however, because, for example）を使って構成を明確にする。例："I like both, because cities offer vibrant architecture while the countryside gives peaceful landscapes." のようにすると良いです。

예시: I actually like both urban and rural views. For example, urban areas have interesting architecture and lively streets, while rural areas offer peaceful landscapes and fresh air, so I enjoy different things about each.

제안: 発音や語彙の誤り（"beers"や"see you"）があり、理由も不十分です。改善点：1) 語彙を正しく使う（views, experiencesなど）。2) 明確な理由を提供し、具体例を添える。3) 一文を簡潔にし、接続詞で補足説明をつける。例："I prefer views in other countries because they offer new experiences and different cultures to explore."

예시: I prefer views in other countries because they offer new experiences and different cultures. For instance, seeing historical sites abroad or unfamiliar landscapes helps me learn more and makes trips more exciting.

× I don't take picture of different view because.

✓ I don't take pictures of different views because.

The nouns 'picture' and 'view' need to be plural to match the general statement. Use 'pictures' and 'views' when talking about things in general. Suggestion: Use plural with 'different' and general statements (e.g., 'I don't take pictures of different views.').

× I don't take a picture a lot.

✓ I don't take pictures very often.

The original sentence has unnatural word order and article use. 'A lot' should not follow 'take a picture' in this context. Use the adverbial phrase 'very often' to indicate frequency and plural 'pictures'.

× Uh, actually I prefer both because, umm, both is good. You in, uh, in. Each way and yes.

✓ Uh, actually I prefer both because both are good in their own way.

The original uses incorrect pronoun/reference and fragmented phrases. 'Both' refers to 'views in urban areas and rural areas' and should take a plural verb 'are'. 'In their own way' is the correct idiomatic phrase. Suggestion: Keep sentence complete and use subject-verb agreement ('both are').

× I prefer beers in another country because, uh.

✓ I prefer views in another country because...

The student likely meant 'views' not 'beers'; 'beers' is an incorrect noun here. Replace with 'views' to answer the question about scenery. Also continue the sentence to explain why.

× It's very new experience and I like to see you something new.

✓ It's a very new experience and I like to see something new.

Missing article: use 'a very new experience'. 'See you something new' is ungrammatical; correct phrase is 'see something new'. The phrase 'I like to see something new' clearly expresses the preference. Suggestion: Use 'a' before singular countable nouns and remove the incorrect pronoun 'you'.