Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more natural and specific. Start with a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, avoid vague phrases like “that thing,” and add one or two brief supporting details (why you like it or when you do it). Keep it under five sentences and use simple linking words if needed.

예시: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. I especially like photographing landscapes when I travel because they help me remember the place’s atmosphere. For example, I often take photos at sunrise to capture the light and colors.

제안: Good direct answer but expand slightly with a reason and a brief example. Use a linking word to connect your preference with the reason (e.g., because, since). Keep it concise and natural.

예시: I prefer rural areas because they are quieter and offer more natural scenery. For instance, I enjoy photographing fields and rivers, which feel more peaceful than crowded city streets.

제안: This answer is unclear and contains errors. Give a clear, direct response (own country, other countries, or both) and explain briefly why, using specific examples. Avoid listing places without structure. Use one or two concise supporting sentences.

예시: I prefer views in other countries because I like discovering new cultures and architecture. For example, I loved photographing the streets of Shinjuku in Tokyo because the neon lights and busy scenes were very different from home.

× Yes, every time I do that thing.

✓ Yes, I take pictures of different views every time.

The original sentence 'Yes, every time I do that thing.' is vague and has an awkward structure. It does not clearly repeat the action asked (taking pictures). This is a sentence structure error because the object and verb placement are unclear. Suggest explicitly restating the activity: 'I take pictures of different views every time.' This provides a clear subject-verb-object order and fits the question's meaning.

× Like I said before, I prefer rural areas.

✓ Like I said before, I prefer rural areas.

This sentence is grammatically correct. There is no subject-verb agreement or other error to correct. Keep the present simple 'prefer' to express a general preference. No change needed.

× All the countries owned countries, Japan, Cure, Tokyo, everywhere Shinjuku.

✓ I prefer views in many countries, such as Japan — for example Tokyo and Shinjuku.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear: 'All the countries owned countries, Japan, Cure, Tokyo, everywhere Shinjuku.' This is a sentence structure error and possibly word-choice errors. The speaker seems to mean they like views in other countries and gives examples. Rephrase to a clear, grammatical sentence: 'I prefer views in many countries, such as Japan — for example Tokyo and Shinjuku.' Use 'such as' to introduce examples and provide proper place names. Also ensure correct nouns (Tokyo is a city in Japan; Shinjuku is a district in Tokyo). If the speaker meant 'my own country and others,' an alternative: 'I prefer views in other countries, for example Japan (Tokyo, Shinjuku).'