Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答要更直接和简洁，先给出明确的主题句，然后用一两句具体原因或例子支持。注意语法（主谓一致、代词使用）和词汇搭配，避免重复表达。可以练习用简单句和连接词（because, so, for example）来组织答案。

예시: Yes, I do. I enjoy photographing different scenes because each picture can express a part of my personality. For example, I often take photos of busy markets to show my energetic side, and of quiet parks to show that I also appreciate calm and nature.

제안: 回答要直接指出偏好并给出清晰理由，避免无关或模糊的信息（例如‘On April 4’看起来是错误）。注意时态和句子完整性，用连接词（because, since, so）把原因连起来。可以用一两句具体例子说明喜欢城市或乡村的哪些特征。

예시: I prefer urban views because I grew up in the city and feel comfortable with its culture and climate. For example, I like photographing city streets at night because the lights and crowded squares create lively scenes.

제안: 回答要明确比较两者并给出具体原因，避免含糊或重复表达。先说明偏好（own country or other countries or both），然后用细节支持（例如文化特色、纪念意义）。尽量减少填充词（uh, um）并使用连词（and, but, however）。

예시: I mostly prefer taking photos in my own country because I want to share its culture and landscapes with others. However, when I travel abroad I also take pictures to record my experiences and prove I have visited those places.

× Yes, I'd like to take pictures of different views because I want to other people know who I am just by show my person in different views and I think each could let others know my characteristics.

✓ Yes, I'd like to take pictures of different views because I want other people to know who I am just by showing myself in different views, and I think each photo can let others know my characteristics.

本句主要问题是不正确的动词形式和不定式用法： - “want to other people know” 应为 “want other people to know”，英语中动词 want 后面接宾语 + to + 动词原形（宾语不定式）。 - “by show my person” 应为 “by showing myself” 或 “by showing my face/personality”。使用 by 引导的方式状语要用动名词（-ing 形式），且反身代词 myself 用来指代“我自己”。 - “each could let” 更自然为 “each photo can let” 或 “each one can let”，需明确指代并调整情态动词与语气以表达可能性或能力。 建议：熟记常见动词后面接动词不定式还是动名词的用法；使用 by + -ing 表示方式；反身代词用于强调动作作用于主语自身。

× On April 4 views in urban areas because I'm living in the urban city since I'm a child and I know the urban areas culture and. Umm, climate.

✓ I prefer views in urban areas because I've been living in the city since I was a child and I know the urban culture and climate.

本句存在多个问题，符合主谓一致与词语使用错误： - 原句开头 “On April 4 views” 无意义且词序错误，意为“我更喜欢城市景观”，应使用 I prefer views in urban areas。 - “I'm living in the urban city since I'm a child” 时态不正确，应使用现在完成时表示从过去到现在持续发生的动作：I've been living in the city since I was a child（注意 since 后常接具体时间或过去的时间点/事件，用过去式 was）。 - “urban areas culture and. Umm, climate.” 中缺少连词和名词结构，应为 “urban culture and climate”。 建议：用现在完成进行时或现在完成时表达从过去持续到现在的状态；注意 since 后用过去式；整理句子避免多余词（如 urban city 重复）。

× Yes, that's sure. Uh, in my country I like to take photos because I want to, uh, show the other people, uh, how my country is. And in the other countries I like to take a photo just to confirm I have lived in here.

✓ Yes, certainly. In my country I like to take photos because I want to show other people what my country is like. In other countries I like to take photos to prove that I have been here.

本句主要问题是代词和动词形式使用不当： - “that's sure” 更自然为 “certainly” 或 “that's for sure”。 - “show the other people, uh, how my country is” 应为 “show other people what my country is like” 或 “show other people how my country is”，更地道的结构是 what ... is like 表示某地的样子。去掉不必要的定冠词 the。 - “in the other countries” 多余定冠词，改为 “in other countries”。 - “take a photo just to confirm I have lived in here” 时态和表达不准确：如果想表达“证明我来过这里”应使用现在完成时/progressive 或完成式短语，且不与 here 连用 have lived in here；更自然为 “to prove that I have been here” 或 “to show that I have visited here”。 建议：注意定冠词的使用（other countries 不用 the）；使用 what ... is like 表达“是什么样的”；证明来过某地常用 I have been here / I have visited here。