Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is understandable but needs clearer structure, grammatical accuracy and concise expression. Start with a direct topic sentence stating your preference, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct grammar (e.g., verb forms, articles) and avoid repetition. Try to keep it within 3–4 sentences.

예시: No, I usually don’t take photos of views. When I go out on an outing I prefer to simply look at the scenery because the natural beauty is breathtaking. For example, at a recent hike I focused on enjoying the moment instead of taking pictures.

제안: Good content but improve grammar, coherence and use linking words. Begin with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then give specific reasons (e.g., clarity, peace) and an example. Use correct noun–verb agreement and articles. Limit to 2–4 sentences.

예시: I prefer views in rural areas rather than urban ones. Rural scenery is clearer and much more peaceful, so I feel relaxed there. For instance, I often go to nearby fields to enjoy quiet walks and fresh air.

제안: Your idea is good but phrasing and specificity need improvement. Start with a direct statement of preference, then give concrete reasons and an example. Use precise vocabulary (diversity, scenic spots, cultures) and correct articles and plurals. Keep it concise and cohesive with linking words.

예시: I prefer the views in my own country because it offers great diversity in landscapes and cultures. For example, I enjoy visiting different states to see unique traditions and scenic spots that are very photogenic.

× No, I don't like to take the pictures of different views.

✓ No, I don't like taking pictures of different views.

The verb pattern after 'like' should use the -ing form when describing a general preference. Use 'taking' instead of 'to take the' and omit the definite article 'the' because we mean pictures in general, not specific pictures.

× When I came out to for outing I really forget.

✓ When I went out for an outing I really forgot.

The past-tense context requires 'went' (past of 'go') rather than 'came out', and 'forget' must be in the past tense 'forgot'. Remove the incorrect preposition 'to' after 'out' and use 'for an outing' with the article.

× I just see the natural beauty.

✓ I just saw the natural beauty.

This sentence describes a past event, so the verb should be in the past tense 'saw' instead of present 'see' to match the surrounding past-tense narrative.

× It was breathtaking and I just enjoy it.

✓ It was breathtaking and I just enjoyed it.

Because the speaker describes a past experience ('It was breathtaking'), the second clause should also use past tense 'enjoyed' rather than present 'enjoy' for tense consistency.

× Not I just don't like to take the pictures from it.

✓ No, I just don't like taking pictures of it.

Use 'No' instead of 'Not' to negate, use the -ing form 'taking' for preferences, and use the preposition 'of' to indicate what the pictures are of. 'From it' is unnatural here.

× I really live in a rural area and I prefer the views of rural area because it is very clear and overall the nature are so peaceful and I really like to be in a rural area for the views.

✓ I live in a rural area and I prefer the views of rural areas because they are very clear and overall the natural surroundings are so peaceful, so I really like being in a rural area for the views.

Remove the unnecessary adverb 'really' at sentence start (optional) and use consistent tense 'live'. Use plural 'rural areas' when speaking generally. Subject-verb agreement: 'views...they are'; 'nature' should be 'natural surroundings' or 'nature is'—here 'surroundings are' fits. Use gerund 'being' after 'like' for preference.

× I like the views of my country because we have a large diversity in my country and lot of different culture.

✓ I like the views in my country because we have great diversity and many different cultures.

Avoid repetition 'in my country' twice. Use 'great diversity' or 'a large diversity' and 'many different cultures' (plural) for countable 'cultures'. 'Lot of' should be 'a lot of' or 'many'.

× I really like to go different states for enjoying their cultures and getting a different spots for the photogenic.

✓ I really like to visit different states to enjoy their cultures and find different photogenic spots.

Use 'visit' instead of 'go' for places, add 'to' before the infinitive 'enjoy', and use 'find' rather than 'getting'. Use plural 'spots' and place adjective 'photogenic' before noun: 'photogenic spots'. Also remove the definite article 'the' before 'photogenic' and correct word order.