Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 用詞和句子結構不夠準確，表達含混且有語法錯誤。回答應更直接並提供具體原因或例子，使用連接詞使語句更流暢。建議改正“videos”為“views/places/photos”，把泛泛的喜好擴展為具體理由（如保存回憶、與朋友分享、記錄光影變化等）。保持最多3–4句，避免重複。

예시: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because it helps me preserve memories and notice small details I might otherwise miss. For example, I often photograph sunsets to remember the colours and atmosphere. I also share some of my favourite shots with friends.

제안: 回答直接但表達簡單且有語法小錯誤，缺乏具體細節。應用主題句開頭，然後用2句支持細節並使用連接詞（because, so, for example）。描述具體的鄉村景色或感受（如寧靜、自然、空氣清新）以豐富內容。

예시: I prefer views in rural areas because they offer peace and fresh air compared with the busy city. For example, I love walking by fields and rivers where I can hear birds and relax. This contrast makes rural scenery more appealing to me.

제안: 語法和表達不清晰，句子結構錯誤且重複詞語。應先給出明確立場，再用1–2個具體原因支援，使用正確的語法（e.g. “most of the time”）。說明為何喜歡本國景色（文化熟悉、便利、特有景觀），並避免模糊不清的總結。

예시: Most of the time I prefer views in my own country because I am familiar with the culture and landscapes, and I can visit them more easily. For instance, I often go to nearby mountains and lakes that remind me of childhood trips.

× Yes, I think it's a good way I can remember these videos. I like this way.

✓ Yes, I think it's a good way to remember these views. I like it.

问题主要是词语用错和句子结构不完整。原句用“I can remember these videos”不合上下文，应为“to remember these views”（不定式作目的）。此外“videos”应为“views”（风景），最后一句话用法更自然为“I like it”。建议：使用不定式表达目的（to + 动词原形）；确认名词意思是否符合语境（view vs. video）。

× I think I like rural areas because we live in city, so rural areas is very different for me. I like this.

✓ I think I prefer rural areas because we live in a city, so rural areas are very different for me. I like them.

问题包括冠词省略和主谓不一致。“we live in city”缺少不定冠词，应该是“in a city”。“rural areas is”主语为复数，谓语应为“are”。最后代词应与复数名词一致，使用“them”而不是“this”。建议：注意单复数一致，名词前根据情况加a/the或不加。

× In most time, I like my country's views, because in every country have very different views, is not only have fresh, fresh air and mountain.

✓ Most of the time, I like my country's views, because every country has very different scenery. It is not only about fresh air but also about mountains.

原句存在多处问题：时间短语应为“Most of the time”；从句缺少主语和谓语，“in every country have”应为“every country has”；句子缺少连接和完整结构，最后部分应改为“It is not only about... but also about...”来表达并列关系。此外“views”与“scenery”更自然，重复“fresh”应避免。建议：使用完整的主谓结构，保证时态和主谓一致；用并列结构表达“不仅...而且...”。