Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 문법과 어휘 선택에 주의하세요. 간단한 문장으로 명확히 답하고 이유를 자연스럽게 연결하는 연습을 하세요. 예: 'I like taking pictures because I want to remember moments from my life'와 같이 'recommend my life' 대신 적절한 표현(remember, capture)을 사용하세요. 또한 연결어(for example, because)를 사용해 이유를 더 명확히 설명하고, 중복 표현(always, always)을 피하세요.

예시: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures because I like to capture memories from my life. For example, I often photograph natural scenery like mountains and beaches to look back on special moments.

제안: 명확한 입장을 먼저 말한 다음 이유와 구체적 예를 구조적으로 제시하세요. 문법적으로는 주어-동사 일치를 확인하고, 어색한 표현(sometime I'm sometime, be very better) 대신 정확한 표현을 사용하세요. 연결어(However, because, for example)를 사용해 대비를 명확히 하고 'various'의 구체적 이유(architecture, lights, atmosphere)를 덧붙이세요.

예시: I prefer rural views slightly more because they are peaceful and have natural landscapes. However, city views can also be attractive due to diverse architecture and vibrant street scenes, so it depends on my mood.

제안: 좀 더 정확한 어휘와 문장 구조를 사용하세요. 'my neighborhood' 대신 'my home country' 또는 'my hometown' 중 하나로 통일하고 'many sea, many beach'는 복수와 단어 형태를 바로잡아 'many beaches and the sea'처럼 표현하세요. 또한 이유를 하나 더 추가해 설명을 풍부하게 하세요.

예시: I prefer the views in my hometown because there are many beaches and beautiful mountains nearby. For instance, I can often walk along the coast to watch the sunset, which makes the scenery special to me.

× Yes, I really like Take Pictures because I want to recommend my life always, always.

✓ Yes, I really like taking pictures because I want to record my life, always.

The verb after 'like' should be in the -ing form (present participle), so 'take pictures' becomes 'taking pictures'. 'Recommend my life' is incorrect idiomatic use; the intended meaning is likely 'record my life.' Also remove redundant 'always, always' or reduce to a single 'always'. Use commas to separate clauses properly.

× And I like nature, the scenery is very good.

✓ I like nature; the scenery is very beautiful.

Using 'very good' to describe scenery is not idiomatic; 'beautiful' or 'lovely' is more appropriate. Use a semicolon or conjunction to connect closely related sentences. Also avoid starting with 'And' in formal responses.

× This question very difficult to me because sometime I'm sometime rural area be very better than city view, but sometimes city view is very beautiful but because very various ****.

✓ This question is very difficult for me because sometimes rural areas are better than city views, but sometimes city views are very beautiful because they are more varied.

Multiple structural errors: missing verb 'is' after 'This question'; use 'for me' not 'to me'; 'sometime' should be 'sometimes'; subject-verb agreement: 'rural areas are'; 'be very better' is incorrect — use 'better'; 'city view' should be 'city views'; unclear phrase 'because very various' should be 'because they are more varied.' Remove filler 'I'm' in wrong place.

× I really like my neighborhood because there are many sea, many beach and and beautiful mountains.

✓ I really like my neighborhood because there are many seas, many beaches, and beautiful mountains.

Countable nouns 'sea' and 'beach' need plural forms when referring to multiple: 'seas' and 'beaches.' Remove duplicate 'and.' Use commas to separate list items.

× Umm, I really like my hometown scenery.

✓ I really like the scenery of my hometown.

'Hometown scenery' is understandable but 'the scenery of my hometown' is more natural. No -ing required here; restructure for natural English. Omit filler 'Umm' in formal answers.