Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make your answer more natural and grammatical by using a clear topic sentence, combining related items into one fluent sentence, and avoiding unnecessary repetition. Use linking words and correct verb forms. Also limit to up to 5 sentences and give a brief reason or example to enrich content.

예시: Yes, I enjoy taking photographs of different scenes, especially mountains, birds and flowers. I like these subjects because they offer vibrant colours and interesting shapes, which make photos more appealing. For example, when I visit a hill station I often spend time capturing sunrise over the peaks.

제안: Start with a clear opinion sentence, then support it with specific reasons using linking words. Avoid repeating the same phrase. Use plural/singular agreement and smoother phrasing.

예시: I prefer views in rural areas because they have more unspoiled natural scenery. For instance, you can see open fields, rivers and traditional houses, which feel peaceful and offer more photo opportunities than crowded urban streets.

제안: Give a concise topic sentence stating your preference, then add a specific reason or example. Avoid exaggerated or repetitive phrases and correct article use. Keep answers natural and relevant.

예시: I prefer views in my own country, Bangladesh, because it has a wide variety of natural landscapes. For example, the Sundarbans mangrove forest and green rice fields are unique sights that I feel proud to photograph and show to visitors.

× Mountains, birds, butterfly, small kids, trees.

✓ Mountains, birds, butterflies, small kids, trees.

The list mixes plural and singular forms. 'Butterfly' should be plural to match the other plural nouns in the list. Use plural nouns when listing multiple items of the same kind. Suggestion: Make all items plural when referring to multiple examples (e.g., 'butterflies').

× This kind of things I enjoy to capturing my frame.

✓ These kinds of things I enjoy capturing in my frame.

Several issues: 'This kind of things' mixes singular demonstrative with plural noun—use 'these kinds of' or 'this kind of thing'. 'Enjoy to capturing' is ungrammatical: 'enjoy' is followed by a gerund, not 'to' + verb. Also 'in my frame' is the correct prepositional phrase. Suggestion: Use 'I enjoy capturing' + gerund and agree demonstrative and noun ('these kinds of things' or 'this kind of thing').

× Urban area and rural area has own beauty but in my perspective rural area has natural beauty.

✓ Urban areas and rural areas have their own beauty, but in my perspective rural areas have natural beauty.

The subject 'Urban area and rural area' is compound and plural, so the verb should be 'have' not 'has'. Also 'own beauty' should be 'their own beauty' to show possession for plural subjects. 'Rural area' used again should match plurality. Suggestion: Use plural nouns and plural verbs for general statements about categories (e.g., 'Urban areas and rural areas have their own beauty').

× So I prefer rural area is best and rural area has lots of beauty for nature.

✓ So I prefer rural areas because they are the best and have a lot of natural beauty.

The original mixes structures: 'I prefer rural area is best' is ungrammatical—use 'I prefer rural areas because they are the best' or 'I prefer rural areas; they are the best.' 'Has lots of beauty for nature' is awkward; 'have a lot of natural beauty' is correct. Also ensure subject-verb agreement ('areas... have'). Suggestion: Use clear clause linking (because/and) and natural collocations like 'natural beauty' and 'a lot of'.

× First of all, my country name is Bangladesh and Bangladesh is most beautiful country.

✓ First of all, my country's name is Bangladesh, and Bangladesh is the most beautiful country.

Missing possessive for 'my country name'—use 'my country's name'. Superlative 'most beautiful country' needs the definite article 'the'. Suggestion: Use possessive form and include 'the' before superlatives ('the most beautiful country').

× Everyone called Bangladesh is a mother of beauty because Bangladesh has a most natural beauty.

✓ Everyone calls Bangladesh the 'Mother of Beauty' because Bangladesh has so much natural beauty.

Tense and voice: 'Everyone called Bangladesh' is incorrect—use present simple 'Everyone calls Bangladesh'. The phrase 'a mother of beauty' is unnatural; 'the Mother of Beauty' or 'called the 'Mother of Beauty'' is better. 'Has a most natural beauty' is ungrammatical—use 'has so much natural beauty' or 'has great natural beauty'. Suggestion: Use present simple for general opinions, natural idiomatic expressions, and correct quantifiers ('so much' or 'great').

× That's why I prefer always my country.

✓ That's why I always prefer my country.

Word order: adverbs like 'always' typically come before the main verb (or after auxiliary verbs). 'Prefer always my country' is awkward; move 'always' before 'prefer'. Also 'prefer my country' is clearer than 'prefer my country' with different placement. Suggestion: Place frequency adverbs correctly: 'I always prefer...' or 'I prefer my country most of the time.'