Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Give a longer, more natural reply that briefly explains why and offers an alternative. Use a clear topic sentence, one linking phrase and one specific reason or example. Keep it under five sentences.

예시: Not really — I’m not very interested in photography because I prefer experiencing a scene in person rather than through a camera. For example, when I visit a park I like to relax and enjoy the atmosphere instead of trying to frame shots. However, I sometimes take quick photos on my phone to remember special moments.

제안: Make the topic sentence clearer and correct vocabulary/grammar. Give one or two specific reasons with linking words to support your preference (e.g., architecture, nightlife, convenience). Keep sentences concise and natural.

예시: I prefer urban views because I enjoy the architecture and lively atmosphere of cities. For instance, living in Megapolis I love the skyline, the public art and the variety of cafés, and these features make the cityscape more interesting to me.

제안: Answer directly and provide specific details and a linking word to explain why. Correct grammar (use "prefer views in my country"). Mention a concrete example or comparison to make the answer more vivid.

예시: I prefer views in my own country because we have beautiful natural scenery and many mountains near my city. For example, weekends on the nearby trails give me dramatic panoramas that I haven’t found when I travel abroad, so I usually choose local destinations for sightseeing.

× No, I don't like it because I am not interested in taking pictures.

✓ No, I don't like taking pictures because I'm not interested in them.

The original sentence is mostly grammatical but awkwardly repeats 'taking pictures.' Change to 'I don't like taking pictures' for conciseness and replace 'it' with 'taking pictures' or use 'them' to refer back to the plural noun. Also use contraction 'I'm' for natural speech. Grammar problem type ID:6

× I prefer urban views because I like the cities mega policies and I'm living in Megapolis and it's very beautiful view I think.

✓ I prefer urban views because I like the city's megapolis policies, and I live in Megapolis, which I think is very beautiful.

Multiple issues: 'cities mega policies' is incorrect adjective/noun order and missing possessive: use 'the city's megapolis policies' or better 'Megapolis' policies. 'I'm living in' is grammatically okay but simple present 'I live in' is more natural for a permanent situation. 'it's very beautiful view' is ungrammatical; use 'which I think is very beautiful' or 'which is very beautiful.' Also add commas and conjunctions for clarity. Grammar problem type ID:13

× I prefer use in my country because here very beautiful nature and a lot of mountains around my city.

✓ I prefer to travel within my country because we have very beautiful natural scenery and many mountains around my city.

Problems fixed: 'prefer use in my country' is ungrammatical — use 'prefer to travel within my country' or 'prefer places in my country.' 'here very beautiful nature' lacks a verb and article; use 'we have very beautiful natural scenery' or 'there is very beautiful nature.' 'a lot of mountains' is acceptable but 'many mountains' is more natural. This correction addresses pronoun/structure errors and article/verb omissions. Grammar problem type ID:12