Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar and natural phrasing, give a clearer topic sentence and one or two specific reasons. Use correct verb forms and eliminate redundancy. For example, say you enjoy photographing views to preserve memories and to revisit them later when you want to relax. Keep it to 2–3 sentences and use linking words like “because” or “so”.

예시: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views because they help me preserve memories. I often look through my gallery when I want to relax or feel inspired.

제안: Clarify the topic sentence and correct vocabulary and grammar (e.g. “rural areas”, not “waves”, remove repetition). Provide specific supporting details with linking words such as “for example” or “because”. Limit to 2–3 sentences and avoid vague phrases like “much more”.

예시: I prefer views in rural areas because there is more varied natural scenery. For example, I enjoy photographing forests and mountains, which offer different colours and textures throughout the year.

제안: Make the response direct and grammatically correct. State your preference clearly, then give specific reasons. Replace vague adjectives with concrete descriptions and use linking words like “because” and “also”. Keep it concise and natural (2–3 sentences).

예시: I prefer views in my own country because the landscapes are familiar and diverse. I especially love the wide, unspoilt areas and feel proud to capture scenes that reflect my national identity.

× I like to take the picture of different views because I can save it in my gallery and look at it when I had boring time.

✓ I like to take pictures of different views because I can save them in my gallery and look at them when I have boring times.

Errors: 'the picture' should be plural 'pictures' to match general meaning (Grammar problem type 1 singular/plural); 'had' is past tense but the context requires present 'have' (present tense issue, type 6); 'it' refers to plural 'pictures' so use 'them' (pronoun use, type 12). Suggestion: Use plural nouns for general habits, use present simple for habitual states, and match pronouns to noun number. Note: Corrected to plural nouns and present tense to fit the question about current preferences.

× I prefer the waves in a rural rural areas because there is a much more to look and take in the picture.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because there is much more to see and photograph.

Errors: 'the waves' seems wrong—context needs 'views' (word choice but treated as sentence structure, type 26); duplicate 'rural rural' is repetition (type 26); 'in a rural rural areas' mixes singular 'a' with plural 'areas' (singular/plural type 1 and article error type 22); 'there is a much more' is ungrammatical—use 'there is much more' or 'there are many more' (there be issue type 3 and quantifier type 14); 'to look and take in the picture' should be 'to see and photograph' or 'to look at and take pictures of' (verb + -ing form/type 8 and preposition 'at' needed type 11). Suggestion: Use 'views in rural areas', correct number agreement, use 'there is much more to see', and prefer verbs 'see' and 'photograph' for clarity.

× There is many forests, many mountains and just the view of nature overall.

✓ There are many forests, many mountains, and just the overall view of nature.

Error: 'There is' with plural subjects is incorrect; use 'There are' for plural nouns (there be issue type 3 and subject-verb agreement type 27). Also word order 'just the view of nature overall' improved to 'the overall view of nature'. Suggestion: Match 'there is/are' to countability and plural nouns; place 'overall' where it modifies 'view'.

× I prefer rave in my country because we have more, much wider and natural that I love to be because I feel it's my country and I feel proud of it.

✓ I prefer views in my country because we have more and wider natural areas, which I love because I feel it is my country and I am proud of it.

Multiple errors: 'rave' is likely 'views' (word choice/structure type 26); 'we have more, much wider and natural' is ungrammatical—needs parallel structure and nouns, e.g. 'more and wider natural areas' (adjective order/type 18 and quantifier/type 14); 'that I love to be' is incorrect use of relative clause and verb 'be'—use 'which I love' (incorrect conjunction/structure type 16/26); contraction 'it's' acceptable but 'I feel proud of it' better as 'I am proud of it' for clarity (verb tense/type 6). Suggestion: Use parallel adjective-noun phrases, correct relative clause 'which I love', and use 'I am proud of it' to express current feeling.