Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 句子有主旨，但表达不够自然且有语法与用词错误（如 "deeper touch with the word"、重复的 "I love to find"）。建议：1) 开头直接回应问题并给出理由；2) 避免重复，使用连接词（e.g. "because", "so"）使句子更连贯；3) 注意词汇搭配（use "get a deeper sense of the place" 而不是 "deeper touch with the word"）；4) 控制在最多五句内，用更准确的词汇和例子。

예시: Yes, I do. I enjoy photographing different viewpoints of the same place because it helps me get a deeper sense of the atmosphere. For example, I often shoot the same street at different times of day to capture how light and activity change.

제안: 回答直接但表达不自然且有多处语法和词汇问题（e.g. "for its beautiful garden and silent parking lot" 不够合逻辑，"makes me feel securely" 用词错误）。建议：1) 明确陈述偏好并给出合理理由；2) 使用连接词（e.g. "because", "so"）衔接细节；3) 注意名词单复数和形容词/副词形式（"securely" 应为 "secure" 或 "safe"）；4) 用具体例子说明为何喜欢城市景观，同时避免矛盾或奇怪的搭配。

예시: I prefer urban views because cities offer a variety of interesting scenes, such as parks, cafés and historic streets. For instance, I like walking through a quiet city parking square at sunset because the calm atmosphere and surrounding architecture feel safe and relaxing.

제안: 回答表达了想法但语法和用词不准确（如 "There must be other countries"、"the views I never get"、"so many imagination"、"experiment by myself"）。建议：1) 直接回答并给出清晰原因；2) 用正确的短语表达期待（e.g. "I prefer views abroad"、"I imagine"、"experience them myself"）；3) 加入具体细节说明想看哪些景观或文化差异；4) 保持回答简洁且逻辑连贯。

예시: I prefer views in other countries because I want to see landscapes and cultures that are new to me. For example, I’d love to photograph traditional markets and coastal villages abroad to capture different colours and lifestyles.

× I love to find different views of the same place so I can get deeper touch with the word.

✓ I love finding different views of the same place so I can get a deeper connection with the world.

句子结构和用词不当：原句中不定式短语“to find”可改为动名词“finding”使表达更自然；“get deeper touch with the word”中有多个错误：1）“deeper touch”搭配不当，英语中更常用“a deeper connection/contact”；2）“the word”拼写应为“the world”（世界），原词是拼写错误。建议用“a deeper connection with the world”。

× I love to find something more interesting to refresh myself.

✓ I love finding something more interesting to refresh myself.

动词形式问题：在表示喜好时，英语中习惯用动名词（finding）而不是不定式（to find），两者都可，但在前一句使用了相同结构，保持一致且更自然地用动名词。

× I prefer urban areas for its beautiful garden and silent parking lot.

✓ I prefer urban areas for their beautiful gardens and quiet parking lots.

代词和数一致问题：urban areas为复数，代词应为their而不是its；garden和parking lot也应与areas一致使用复数形式（gardens, parking lots）。此外，silent用于形容环境不太自然，改为更常用的quiet。

× Yeah, it's really strange but I enjoy the time in parking lot which makes me feel securely.

✓ Yeah, it's really strange but I enjoy the time in parking lots, which makes me feel secure.

形容词/副词使用错误：1）securely是副词，用于修饰动词，句中需形容感受所以应使用形容词secure；2）parking lot应与前文复数形式保持一致为parking lots；3）添加逗号和which引导非限制性定语从句更符合书写习惯。

× There must be other countries because I think the best is the views I never get.

✓ There must be other countries to visit because I think the best views are the ones I have never seen.

结构和时态问题：原句表达不清，“There must be other countries”后面需要宾语或目的（to visit）；“the best is the views I never get”中“get”用法不当且时态/形式错误，应改为“the best views are the ones I have never seen”来表示未曾见过的景色，使用现在完成时强调经验上的缺乏。

× I have so many imagination to the views overseas.

✓ I have so many imaginations about the views overseas. (更自然：I have so many imaginings about overseas views. 或更常用：I imagine so many things about overseas views.)

名词和介词使用错误：imagination通常为不可数名词表示想象力或想法集合，因此用法不当。可以改为可数形式imaginations或更自然地使用动词imagine。介词应为about而非to。建议改为“I imagine so many things about overseas views.”以更地道表达。

× I'm looking forward to experiment by myself.

✓ I'm looking forward to experimenting by myself.

动词形式错误：短语“look forward to”后面必须接名词或动名词（-ing），不能接动词不定式，因此应使用“experimenting”。