Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Устраните паузы и повторения, сформулируйте основную мысль кратко и добавьте одно-два конкретных пояснения. Работайте над плавностью речи (меньше «uh/um») и используйте связку для примера.

예시: Yes, I enjoy photographing different landscapes. I especially like capturing waterfalls because their motion and light create dramatic images, and I often experiment with slow shutter speeds to highlight the water's flow.

제안: Сведите к минимуму повторения и заполнители, начните с прямого ответа, затем приведите конкретную причину и пример. Используйте связки («because», «for example», «so») для логики высказывания.

예시: I prefer rural views because they feel more peaceful and unspoiled. For example, when I go hiking in the mountains I often stop to photograph wildflowers and distant ridgelines, which give my photos a sense of scale.

제안: Отвечайте прямо, избегайте бессвязных фраз и лишних слова-маркеров. Дайте сравнительную мысль и конкретный пример, используя связки («both», «because», «for example») для ясности.

예시: I like photographing landscapes both in my own country and abroad because each place offers unique features. For example, at home I focus on familiar coastline scenes, while in other countries I enjoy capturing distinct architectural or cultural landscapes.

× Yes, of course, of course I'd like to take, uh, to take pictures of the, uh, different landscapes. For example, I love uh, taking, uh, take photos of the natural, uh, waterfalls.

✓ Yes, of course. I'd like to take pictures of different landscapes. For example, I love taking photos of natural waterfalls.

The sentence shows inconsistent verb forms: 'I'd like to take' is correct but the speaker repeats 'to take' and mixes 'taking' and 'take'. Use the gerund 'taking' after 'love' and the infinitive 'to take' after 'I'd like'. Remove filler words and duplicate phrases to make the sentence fluent. Suggestion: Practice choosing the correct verb form for each verb (infinitive after 'would like', gerund after 'love').

× I prefer taking, uh, photos of the rural areas, uh, which are very natural and beautiful, uh, beautifully, uh, beautiful.

✓ I prefer taking photos of rural areas, which are very natural and beautiful.

The speaker repeats 'beautiful' and uses both adjective and adverb forms ('beautifully') incorrectly. Here 'beautiful' is the adjective modifying 'areas'. Remove redundancy and use the adjective only. Suggestion: Use a single adjective to describe a noun and avoid inserting adverbs that don't fit the structure.

× And, uh, for example, I, uh, when I go hiking on the mountains, I take a lot of photos.

✓ For example, when I go hiking in the mountains, I take a lot of photos.

The phrase 'on the mountains' is a preposition error and present-tense usage is fine but preposition should be 'in the mountains' to indicate being within mountainous area. Also remove unnecessary fillers for clarity. Suggestion: Use 'in the mountains' or 'on a mountain' depending on context.

× In my opinion, I like photographing the landscapes of the boss, uh, my own country and the other countries, uh, because, uh, in every country has its own, uh, specialized features and, uh, it's very interesting and, uh, fascinating.

✓ In my opinion, I like photographing the landscapes of my own country and other countries because every country has its own distinctive features, which is very interesting and fascinating.

'The boss' is irrelevant and likely an error; remove it. 'The other countries' is better as 'other countries'. The clause 'because, in every country has its own' is missing a subject structure; change to 'because every country has its own distinctive features'. 'Specialized features' is odd; 'distinctive features' or 'unique features' is more natural. Combine clauses to avoid fragmented speech. Suggestion: Omit unrelated words, use correct noun phrases ('other countries'), and ensure subordinate clauses have clear subjects.