Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make your answer grammatically correct, more concise, and add a clear supporting detail. Use a topic sentence, then one or two specific reasons with correct tense and plural forms. Avoid repetition. Use linking words like "because" or "so".

예시: Yes, I do. I often take quick photos because they help me record memories when I travel. For example, I usually photograph my friends and family at landmarks so I can look back on those moments later.

제안: Clarify your position and use coherent sentences. Start with a direct answer (e.g., "It depends") then explain reasons with correct pronouns and verb forms. Use linking words (e.g., "however", "because") and avoid unclear phrases like "he fell onto shopping".

예시: It depends on my mood. After a busy week I prefer rural scenery because it helps me relax and enjoy nature; however, if I want shopping or nightlife, I choose an urban area where there are many shops and activities.

제안: Give a direct answer and organize reasons clearly. Correct repetition and use specific country names correctly. Use linking words (e.g., "but", "for example") and provide one clear contrast between home and abroad.

예시: It depends on the type of scenery. I prefer modern urban views in my own country because the architecture and facilities are familiar, but I also enjoy rural landscapes abroad; for example, I like the quiet countryside in Canada for its wide-open spaces and fresh air.

× I think take quick pictures can record the memories and every time when I traveled I always take pictures of my of my friends and my families.

✓ I think taking quick pictures can record memories, and every time I travel I always take pictures of my friends and my family.

The verb 'take' should be in the -ing form after 'think' when used with a noun phrase ('think taking...') and to express a general habit use the simple present ('I travel', 'I always take'). 'The memories' is better as 'memories' without the definite article in this context. 'of my of my' is a repetition error and 'families' should be singular 'family' when referring to one's family as a group. Suggestion: use gerunds after verbs like 'think' when they function as noun phrases, and use simple present for habitual actions.

× We're not getting tired after busy work.

✓ We are not tired after busy work.

The original uses a progressive form 'are getting' which is unnecessary here; the intended meaning is a state rather than a temporary action. Use the simple adjective predicate 'are not tired'. Suggestion: use simple present to describe general states.

× I want to relax down and view some rural sceneries.

✓ I want to relax and view some rural scenes.

The verb 'relax' does not need the particle 'down' here; 'relax' alone is correct. 'Sceneries' is nonstandard; use 'scenery' (uncountable) or 'scenes'. Suggestion: drop unnecessary particles and use uncountable 'scenery' or plural 'scenes'.

× But he fell onto shopping and mostly go to a urban city.

✓ But he prefers shopping and mostly goes to an urban city.

The phrase 'fell onto shopping' is incorrect; use 'prefers shopping' or 'is into shopping'. The verb must agree with subject 'he' ('goes' not 'go'). Use the article 'an' before 'urban' because it begins with a vowel sound. Suggestion: choose correct verbs for preferences and ensure subject-verb agreement and correct article choice.

× Actually it depends.

✓ Actually, it depends.

Add a comma for natural pacing; grammatically this sentence is acceptable. No verb form change needed. Suggestion: include the comma after introductory adverbs for clarity.

× I think I prefer the the modern scenery the the urban scenery in my country, but I also like the rural scenery in like Canada and some North America, some country North America.

✓ I think I prefer the modern, urban scenery in my country, but I also like the rural scenery in Canada and other parts of North America.

Remove repeated 'the the'. Use adjective order and punctuation: 'modern, urban scenery'. 'In like Canada and some North America' is ungrammatical—use 'in Canada and other parts of North America'. 'Some country North America' is incorrect; replace with 'other parts of North America'. Suggestion: avoid repetition, use correct adjective coordination with commas, and use clear geographical expressions.