Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Avoid repetition and produce a clear topic sentence followed by one or two supporting details. Use correct grammar (subject-verb agreement) and combine similar ideas to be concise and natural.

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because they are very humorous and make conversations fun. For example, we often joke about awkward situations from university, which helps me relax and feel closer to them.

제안: Start with a direct topic sentence and organize supporting details with linking words. Be specific about topics and correct vague wording and grammar (e.g., 'what we are concerned about').

예시: We usually talk about recent events and our personal experiences. For instance, we discuss movies we watched, funny things that happened during the week, and any concerns about exams or work.

제안: Keep the answer concise: give a clear preference and one or two reasons using linking words. Avoid fillers like 'like' and informal phrasing such as 'be like caring'.

예시: I prefer chatting with one friend because it is easier to focus on the conversation and express personal thoughts. However, I also enjoy group chats occasionally for lively discussions and different perspectives.

제안: Give a clear preference and two specific reasons, using correct comparative and adverb forms (e.g., 'more easily', 'closer'). Remove hesitation and duplicate words.

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication because it is easier to read body language and express emotions more easily. For example, when discussing personal matters, being together makes the conversation feel much closer and more genuine.

제안: Answer directly and give a concise reason with a clear structure. Fix grammatical errors and remove repeated words. Use a linking phrase to explain how you behave in disagreements.

예시: No, I usually avoid arguing with friends because I dislike conflict. Instead, when opinions differ, I tend to listen carefully and try to understand their point of view so we can find a compromise.

× My friends are humorous and sometimes talks with a bit of humor and I like chatting with them.

✓ My friends are humorous and sometimes talk with a bit of humor, and I like chatting with them.

The subject 'My friends' is plural, so the verb must be plural 'talk' not 'talks'. Ensure verb agrees with plural subjects. Suggestion: identify the subject (singular/plural) and use the matching verb form.

× What we saw in recent days and how we felt about it and what we have experienced or something that we find it funny, like we could talk about anything.

✓ We usually talk about what we saw recently, how we felt about it, things we have experienced, or anything we find funny; we could talk about anything.

The original is a run-on with unclear structure and mixed tenses. Reorganize into parallel phrases and use 'recently' for recent time. Keep tenses consistent: 'have experienced' for recent experiences and 'find' for general statements. Suggestion: break long lists with commas or semicolons and keep parallel grammatical forms.

× And what we concern about.

✓ And what we are concerned about.

The verb 'concern' needs a passive/adjectival form 'are concerned' to mean 'what worries us'. The original lacks proper verb form. Suggestion: use 'be concerned about' or 'what concerns us'.

× I'm OK with both situations, but I personally prefer chatting with a friend because it's easier to talk to and I can only focus on one person so I don't have to be like caring about several people at a single time.

✓ I'm OK with both situations, but I personally prefer chatting with a friend because it's easier to talk to, and I can focus on one person so I don't have to care about several people at the same time.

The phrase 'be like caring about' is informal and ungrammatical here. Use 'care about' instead of 'be like caring about'. Also 'at a single time' is awkward; use 'at the same time'. Suggestion: avoid filler 'be like' and use precise verbs; use standard time expressions.

× I like to communicate by face to face because it's easier to talk to and we can show emotions much more easier and it's it feels more closer than talking via social media.

✓ I like to communicate face-to-face because it's easier to talk and we can show emotions much more easily, and it feels closer than talking via social media.

Use the adjective/adverb forms correctly: 'face-to-face' as an adverbial phrase (hyphenated), 'easily' is the adverb of 'easy', and 'closer' does not need 'more'. Also remove redundant 'to' after 'talk'. Suggestion: use 'face-to-face', choose correct adverb forms, and avoid redundant words.

× No, I don't argue with friends because I don't like to face the conflict.

✓ No, I don't argue with friends because I don't like facing conflict.

Use gerund 'facing' after 'like' when describing an activity you dislike. 'Face the conflict' is wordy; 'facing conflict' is more natural. Suggestion: after 'like' use noun or gerund, and omit unnecessary articles when speaking generally.

× So when I when I feel like I am about to go get to counterpart with my friends or we have different opinions than I usually tend to listen to them.

✓ So when I feel like I'm about to confront a friend or we have different opinions, I usually tend to listen to them.

The original contains repetitions ('when I when I'), awkward phrase 'go get to counterpart', and incorrect comparison 'different opinions than'. Replace with 'confront' for 'counterpart' and simplify the clause order. Suggestion: avoid repetition, choose correct verbs like 'confront', and use 'different opinions' with a comma before the result clause.