Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời đúng trọng tâm nhưng còn ngắn và thiếu chi tiết. Nên thêm một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, dùng từ vựng phong phú hơn và một ví dụ cụ thể để làm phong phú câu trả lời. Tránh lặp từ (ví dụ: 'chat with friends' lặp nhiều).

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends. I usually message them every day to catch up on how their day went or to share funny moments. For example, yesterday we exchanged stories about a funny incident at work, which made us laugh.

제안: Nội dung trả lời phù hợp nhưng thiếu cụ thể và có lỗi ngữ pháp (số ít/số nhiều, thiếu mạo từ). Nên dùng liên kết đơn giản và cung cấp một ví dụ chi tiết hơn. Giữ độ dài tối đa 4-5 câu tự nhiên.

예시: I usually talk about everyday life and funny stories. For instance, we often discuss our plans for the weekend, work or school updates, and share amusing anecdotes from our day. This helps us stay connected and lift each other's mood.

제안: Câu trả lời rõ ràng và có lý do nhưng cần phát triển thêm bằng ví dụ hoặc so sánh ngắn để thuyết phục hơn. Có thể sử dụng liên từ để nối ý mạch lạc hơn.

예시: I prefer chatting one-on-one because we can talk about many things and understand each other better. For example, in one-on-one conversations we can discuss personal problems in depth, which is harder to do in a group where people interrupt or change topics quickly.

제안: Ý chính đã nêu nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc gây khó hiểu ('cannot confident'). Cần sửa ngữ pháp, dùng liên từ và mở rộng nêu ví dụ cụ thể khi nào dùng phương thức nào. Tránh lỗi phát âm/điều chỉnh ngữ pháp như 'I am not confident'.

예시: I prefer to communicate via social media because I feel shy speaking face-to-face and I'm not very confident in real-time conversations. However, I sometimes meet friends in person for important talks, since face-to-face communication can be more personal.

제안: Câu trả lời có nội dung nhưng câu đầu hơi lủng củng ('Friends, no I don't'). Nên mở đầu trực tiếp, sửa ngữ pháp và bổ sung chi tiết ngắn về cách giải quyết xung đột để câu trả lời cụ cụ thể hơn.

예시: No, I don't argue with my friends often because we understand each other well and try to avoid hurting one another. If a disagreement happens, we usually talk it through calmly and try to find a compromise so the relationship stays strong.

× Yes I do, I usually chat with friends every day.

✓ Yes, I do. I usually chat with friends every day.

Missing punctuation and sentence separation; combine 'Yes I do' and the following clause into two sentences and add commas. Use a comma after Yes and a period to separate independent clauses.

× I usually chat with my friend about daily life and funny story.

✓ I usually chat with my friends about daily life and funny stories.

Number agreement with 'friend' and 'story' is incorrect. Use plural 'friends' and 'funny stories' to match 'usually' (general habit) and to be grammatically correct.

× I prefer to chat with only one friend because we talk about many things and understand each other better.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because we talk about many things and understand each other better.

This sentence is correct; no grammar change needed. It matches the intended meaning and grammar. (No correction applied because it does not meet listed error types.)

× I prefer to communicate via social media because I'm shy when speaking face to face, I cannot confident.

✓ I prefer to communicate via social media because I'm shy when speaking face to face; I am not confident.

'I cannot confident' is ungrammatical. Use the adjective 'confident' with a copular verb: 'I am not confident.' Also separate clauses properly using a semicolon or period instead of a comma splice.

× Friends, no I don't because we understand each other very well and I don't want hurt each other.

✓ No, I don't. We understand each other very well and I don't want to hurt them.

'Friends, no I don't' has awkward word order; start with 'No, I don't.' 'I don't want hurt each other' is incorrect: after 'want' use infinitive 'to hurt'. 'Each other' refers mutually and is odd with 'I don't want'; better to use 'them' to refer to friends. Alternatively: 'I don't want to hurt each other' should be 'we don't want to hurt each other.'