Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Mejora la precisión gramatical, evita repeticiones y organiza la respuesta en una oración principal seguida de detalles breves y claros. Usa formas verbales correctas (por ejemplo, "I chat with them almost every day" y "I can face difficulties"). Reduce muletillas (uh, like) y limita la respuesta a 3–4 oraciones.

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends. I chat with them almost every day to share what happened in my life and to get their feedback. Their comments, whether positive or negative, help me feel motivated and better prepared to face problems.

제안: Organiza la respuesta empezando por una oración principal clara y luego añade detalles específicos con conectores como "also" o "besides". Evita errores de concordancia ("as a college student", "the main topic"). Reduce muletillas y repite menos la misma idea.

예시: As a college student, I mainly talk about school life with my friends. Besides coursework, we discuss classes, exams and future plans. We also chat about movies we have seen and books we are reading.

제안: Clarifica la idea principal y evita repetir la misma información. Corrige estructuras como "a group of people" y usa conectores para explicar la ventaja. Incluye un ejemplo breve para hacerlo más específico.

예시: I prefer chatting in a group because I get different viewpoints on a topic. For example, when we discuss a project, some friends focus on design while others suggest practical solutions, which broadens my perspective.

제안: Corrige vocabulario inapropiado (por ejemplo, "body language", no "tombs") y simplifica las oraciones. Explica claramente una o dos razones con conectores como "because" o "however". Evita redundancias y errores gramaticales.

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication because I can read people's body language and emotions. However, social media is convenient for quick messages when we are busy.

제안: Mejora la claridad y la corrección gramatical: usa frases más cortas y coherentes, corrige artículos y collocations ("make a sincere apology", "listen to their opinions"). Añade un ejemplo breve para mostrar la situación típica y evitar repeticiones.

예시: No, we usually resolve disagreements calmly. I listen to their opinions and, if I'm wrong, I apologize sincerely. If a friend behaves poorly, I point it out respectfully so we can fix the issue.

× I chat with them almost everyday because I like to share all my daily lives with them and like I'd like to receive any comments from them, uh, whether they are good or bad, but they're very helpful in my daily life.

✓ I chat with them almost every day because I like to share my daily life with them and I'd like to receive comments from them, whether they are good or bad; they are very helpful in my daily life.

The phrase 'everyday' was used incorrectly; use the adverb 'every day'. 'Daily lives' should be 'daily life' to refer to the speaker's routine (singular). 'Any comments' is unnecessary; 'comments' is natural. Remove redundant 'like'. Suggestion: use concise phrases and correct word forms: 'every day' and 'daily life'. Grammar problem type ID: 1

× Whenever I chat with them, I will feel I'm full of energy and I can facing the difficulties again.

✓ Whenever I chat with them, I feel full of energy and I can face difficulties again.

The auxiliary 'will' is unnecessary for habitual actions; use present simple 'feel'. 'I'm full of energy' can be simplified to 'feel full of energy'. 'Can facing' is incorrect: after modal 'can' use base verb 'face'. Suggestion: use simple present for routines and correct verb forms after modals. Grammar problem type ID: 8

× Uh, OK, as a college students, the mainly topic about umm, the chatting is my school life and also my friends.

✓ Uh, OK, as a college student, the main topic of our chats is my school life and my friends.

'A college students' mixes singular article with plural noun; use 'a college student'. 'Mainly topic' is incorrect adjective form; use 'main' or 'main topic'. 'The chatting' is awkward; use 'our chats'. Also 'about' becomes 'of'. Suggestion: match singular/plural and choose correct adjective forms. Grammar problem type ID: 1

× So the most uh, uh, the majority of chatting topics is about uh, our school life.

✓ So the majority of our chat topics are about our school life.

'The majority of chatting topics is' has subject-verb agreement issues and wordiness. 'Majority' refers to a plural noun 'topics' so use plural verb 'are'. Use 'chat topics' or 'our chats' for natural phrasing. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement when using quantifiers like 'majority'. Grammar problem type ID: 14

× But also we do chat about other things like movies we watched before and the books we read recently.

✓ We also chat about other things, like movies we've watched and books we've read recently.

Tense consistency: 'movies we watched before' is awkward; use present perfect 'we've watched' to connect past experiences to present. 'Do chat' is unnecessary emphatic form; simple present 'chat' is fine. Suggestion: use present perfect for recent experiences and keep tense consistent. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× I'd like to chat with group of people because whenever I do so, I can receive different comments about one topic.

✓ I'd like to chat with a group of people because whenever I do so, I can receive different comments about a topic.

Missing article 'a' before 'group'. 'One topic' is better as 'a topic' for general statements. Suggestion: include articles with countable nouns. Grammar problem type ID: 1

× I talk to them whether I can receive both positive and negative, uh, points both positive and negative opinions about the thing.

✓ I talk to them because I can receive both positive and negative opinions about a topic.

Sentence is repetitive and pronoun 'the thing' is vague; replace with 'a topic'. 'Whether' is misused; use 'because' to explain reason. Remove duplicated phrases. Suggestion: avoid repetition and use clear pronouns. Grammar problem type ID: 12

× So that can help me to open my mind and have different perspective.

✓ That can help me open my mind and gain a different perspective.

'Open my mind' is fine but 'help me to open' can omit 'to'. 'Have different perspective' needs article: 'a different perspective'. Suggestion: include articles before singular nouns and prefer natural collocations like 'gain a perspective'. Grammar problem type ID: 13

× I'd like to communicate face to face because whenever I talk to my to others face to face, I can feel their emotions and see their body languages and to presume their attitudes towards the topic.

✓ I'd like to communicate face to face because when I talk to others in person, I can feel their emotions, see their body language, and infer their attitudes toward the topic.

Remove redundant 'my to'. Use 'in person' instead of repeating 'face to face'. 'Body languages' should be 'body language' (uncountable). 'To presume' is awkward; 'infer' or 'gauge' is better. Suggestion: avoid repetition, correct collocations and use correct verb forms. Grammar problem type ID: 12

× But if I just talk to them through the social media, I can't imagine their tombs or their movements, so maybe that will affect their attitude.

✓ But if I just talk to them through social media, I can't imagine their tones or their movements, so that may affect my perception of their attitude.

'The social media' should be 'social media' without article. 'Tombs' is a wrong word; likely 'tones'. 'Maybe that will affect their attitude' is unclear; better to say it may affect 'my perception of their attitude'. Suggestion: choose correct vocabulary and clarify subject of 'affect'. Grammar problem type ID: 11

× No, I'd like to say it proudly because whenever we have a disagreement then we just talk calmly and I will listen their opinion about this topic and in the situation if I made some mistake I will honestly talk to them and make an sincere make a sincere apology.

✓ No, I'd like to say that proudly because whenever we have a disagreement we just talk calmly and I listen to their opinions about the topic, and if I make a mistake I will honestly tell them and make a sincere apology.

Use 'say that proudly' for clarity. Remove unnecessary 'then'. 'I will listen their opinion' needs 'listen to' and plural 'opinions'. Tense consistency: 'if I made some mistake' should be 'if I make a mistake'. 'Make an sincere'—use 'a sincere' (article for pronunciation rule: 'a' before consonant sound). Remove duplicate phrase. Suggestion: use correct verb patterns ('listen to'), maintain tense consistency and article use. Grammar problem type ID: 4

× Hope they can forgive me but if they are do something wrong I just pointed out.

✓ I hope they can forgive me, but if they do something wrong I just point it out.

Sentence missing subject 'I' at start; add 'I hope'. 'They are do something wrong' is ungrammatical; use 'they do something wrong'. 'I just pointed out' mixes past; use present 'point it out' for habitual action. Suggestion: maintain subject, correct verb forms and tense consistency. Grammar problem type ID: 12