Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two supporting details using correct grammar and linking words. Avoid repetition and short fragments. Focus on verb forms and prepositions (e.g., 'keen on', 'when I am free').

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends because it helps me relax. When I have free time, I usually call one or two close friends and we talk about our day, share funny stories, and unwind together.

제안: Be specific and organize ideas with linking words. Avoid repeating words and use correct noun phrases (e.g., 'daily tasks', 'college life'). Give one or two concrete examples to make the answer informative.

예시: We usually talk about daily tasks and college life, such as upcoming assignments or classes. We also exchange jokes and funny anecdotes, which helps me relax during my free time.

제안: State your preference clearly, then provide specific reasons with linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Keep sentences complete and avoid unclear fragments. Use singular/plural consistently ('a group', 'groups').

예시: I prefer chatting with one friend because it allows me to focus and have deeper, clearer conversations. Group chats often become noisy and it is harder to follow everyone's opinions.

제안: Give a direct answer and explain with clear reasons and examples. Use correct phrases ('face to face', 'nonverbal cues', 'express themselves'). Avoid awkward phrasing like 'have a several doubts'.

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication because it feels more personal and I can read facial expressions and body language. For example, when discussing something important, seeing gestures helps me understand their feelings better.

제안: Answer directly and give a clear explanation with examples. Use correct tense and remove stuttering/repetition. Explain why arguments happen and how you handle them to show maturity.

예시: Yes, we sometimes argue when we disagree about opinions or plans. For instance, we once disagreed about where to study for exams, but we resolved it by listening to each other and compromising on a location.

× Indeed, I am keen of chatting and it also relax my mind.

✓ Indeed, I am keen on chatting and it also relaxes my mind.

Use of preposition: the correct collocation is 'keen on' not 'keen of'. Also subject-verb agreement: 'it' (singular) requires 'relaxes' (adds -s). Suggestion: learn common verb + preposition collocations and check subject-verb agreement for third person singular.

× When I was free.

✓ When I am free,

Fragment: 'When I was free.' is a subordinate clause and cannot stand alone. The context discusses habitual action, so present tense 'When I am free,' introduces the main clause. Suggestion: attach a main clause after time clauses or use full sentence: 'When I am free, I usually chat with friends.'

× I mostly do a chatting with my friend and I am I.

✓ I mostly chat with my friends and myself.

Awkward quantifier and noun phrase: 'do a chatting' is incorrect; use the verb 'chat' and plural 'friends' if general. 'I am I' is unclear; likely meant 'myself' as reflexive or 'I' unnecessary. Suggestion: use 'chat with my friends' or 'chat with a friend' and avoid 'do a chatting'.

× We talk about the daily things.

✓ We talk about everyday things.

Word choice and adjective order: 'daily things' is unnatural; 'everyday things' is the idiomatic adjective-noun pair. Suggestion: use common collocations like 'everyday things' or 'daily activities'.

× I usually chat about the daily daily task of about about college and some daily chit chats and it also cracking jokes and it also regenerates my mind in free time.

✓ I usually chat about daily tasks, college, and small talk; we also crack jokes, which refreshes my mind in my free time.

Multiple issues: repetition ('daily daily', 'about about'), incorrect verb forms ('cracking jokes' needs auxiliary or rephrase to 'we also crack jokes'), and subject-verb agreement ('it also regenerates' unclear; 'which refreshes my mind' fits). Suggestion: remove repetitions, use parallel structure for list items, and match verbs to subjects.

× I mostly prefer to chat with one friend as it gives me proper focus and give proper clarity of to talk on a top to talk on a normal topic.

✓ I mostly prefer to chat with one friend as it gives me proper focus and provides clarity when talking about a normal topic.

Subject-verb agreement: 'it gives' is correct but 'give proper clarity' should be 'provides clarity' to agree with singular subject and be idiomatic. Also fix awkward phrases ('to talk on a top'). Suggestion: use consistent verbs matching subject and simpler phrasing like 'provides clarity when talking about a topic.'

× But on the other side I don't like to chat with in a groups.

✓ But on the other hand I don't like to chat in groups.

Preposition and article errors: 'on the other side' should be 'on the other hand'; 'chat with in a groups' is incorrect order and 'groups' should be plural without 'a'. Suggestion: use set phrase 'on the other hand' and 'chat in groups' or 'chat with groups' appropriately.

× It does not. It also makes some talks and have.

✓ It doesn't suit me; conversations can be disorganized.

Fragments and unclear phrasing: 'It does not.' is incomplete and 'It also makes some talks and have.' is ungrammatical. Rephrase to clear meaning: express that group chats are unsuitable and disorganized. Suggestion: state the effect clearly in a complete sentence.

× Well, I mostly tend to communicate face to face, it gives real experience to me and also have a several doubts and also shows front persons gestures that how they think about me.

✓ Well, I mostly tend to communicate face to face; it gives me a real experience, allows me to clear several doubts, and shows the other person's gestures so I can see how they feel about me.

Tense and verb form issues: 'gives real experience to me' should be 'gives me a real experience'; 'have a several doubts' is incorrect—use 'allows me to clear several doubts' or 'I have several doubts I can clear'. 'shows front persons gestures' should be 'shows the other person's gestures'. Suggestion: use parallel structure for list of benefits and correct noun phrases.

× Of course, I often argue with my friends on some topics that we we don't we don't accept it or and we don't have one topic on yet, so it's not it's a common thing.

✓ Of course, I often argue with my friends about some topics that we don't agree on yet, so it's not uncommon.

Redundancy and incorrect phrasing: repeated words ('we we don't we don't'), awkward 'accept it or and we don't have one topic on yet'. 'Don't agree on yet' expresses disagreement. 'so it's not it's a common thing' should be 'so it's not uncommon' or 'it's common'. Suggestion: remove repetitions, use 'agree on' for topics, and choose concise phrasing.