Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be concise and correct grammar: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetitions, correct verb forms and articles, and give one brief supporting reason. Use linking words if adding detail.

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it makes me feel relaxed and I can explain my ideas clearly. However, I’m not very comfortable with face-to-face conversations since I’m quite introverted, so I prefer online chats where I can think before I reply.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence and use specific, correctly used vocabulary. Avoid vague phrases like 'what was gone'; instead mention topics (plans, past events). Use linking words to connect ideas.

예시: We usually talk about recent events and our plans for the future. For example, we discuss what we did over the weekend and what tasks we need to complete next, and sometimes we share Instagram reels about trips or career ideas.

제안: Begin with a direct answer, then give two brief specific reasons using linking words. Correct grammar (use articles, verb agreement) and avoid repetition.

예시: I prefer chatting with just one friend because I’m not an extrovert. For instance, I feel more comfortable sharing personal matters with my best friend since she knows me well, and I don’t like discussing private issues in a group.

제안: Answer directly, then give concise reasons with correct grammar and linking words. Avoid long, repetitive clauses; use clear phrases like 'it allows me time to think' and fix verb forms.

예시: I prefer communicating via social media because it gives me time to think and phrase my ideas clearly. Also, as an introvert, I feel less pressure online than in face-to-face conversations.

제안: Start with a direct, natural answer, then briefly describe a specific example using clear sequencing and correct tense. Avoid quoting awkward lines and improve coherence by using linking words like 'for example' and 'because'.

예시: Not usually. For example, once I argued with my best friend Tanveer about our homework deadline because she forgot it. I reminded her she should note important dates in her notebook, and we resolved it by agreeing to set reminders.

× I like chatting with my friends because I when I chatting with my friends I feel comfortable and I clearly explain my point.

✓ I like chatting with my friends because when I chat with them I feel comfortable and I can clearly explain my point.

The student incorrectly used the -ing form 'chatting' after 'when I' instead of the base verb 'chat'. Use 'when I' + base form (simple present) for habitual actions. Also add 'can' to indicate ability and replace the repeated phrase with 'them' to avoid redundancy.

× In contrast, I do not I don't have like a face to face conversation because I am not a extra 1.

✓ In contrast, I don't like face-to-face conversations because I am not extroverted.

The sentence contains repetition and incorrect word order ('I do not I don't have like'). Remove the repetition and use 'don't like' + noun phrase 'face-to-face conversations'. Use the adjective 'extroverted' rather than 'extra 1', which is incorrect.

× I usually chat with my friends about what was gone and what I have to do next, and I also share some reels on Instagram about our future.

✓ I usually chat with my friends about what has happened and what I have to do next, and I also share some Instagram reels about our future.

'What was gone' is ungrammatical for past events; use present perfect 'has happened' to indicate past events relevant now. 'Share some reels on Instagram' is acceptable but 'Instagram reels' is a more natural word order.

× I prefer only one friend because I'm not extrovert.

✓ I prefer one-on-one conversations because I'm not extroverted.

'Only one friend' is understandable but 'one-on-one conversations' fits the question. Use the adjective 'extroverted' and include 'not' correctly. Also hyphenate 'one-on-one' for clarity.

× I do not want to share my life story to everyone.

✓ I do not want to share my life story with everyone.

Use the preposition 'with' after 'share' when indicating people receiving something. 'Share ... to' is incorrect.

× I want only want to share with my best friend because she know me best.

✓ I only want to share with my best friend because she knows me best.

Remove the duplicated 'want'. Use third person singular present 'knows' for subject 'she'.

× So I always prefer to make a chat with my friend.

✓ So I always prefer to chat with my friend.

'Make a chat' is unnatural; use the verb 'chat' directly. Keep simple present 'prefer to chat' for habitual action.

× I prefer to via social media because through social media I can clearly explain my point of view, what I want to say, and I also think before speaker in the face conservations, I do not have it that type of confidence because I am an introvert.

✓ I prefer to use social media because through it I can clearly explain my point of view and think before speaking; in face-to-face conversations I don't have that kind of confidence because I am an introvert.

'Prefer to via' is incorrect: use 'prefer to use' or 'prefer via'. 'Think before speaker' should be 'think before speaking' (verb + -ing). 'Face conservations' should be 'face-to-face conversations'. 'I do not have it that type of confidence' is ungrammatical; use 'I don't have that kind of confidence'.

× I do not think what I have to say in the face to face. I get time.

✓ I don't know what to say in face-to-face situations; having more time helps me.

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. Use 'I don't know what to say' for the idea of not knowing content. 'In the face to face' should be 'in face-to-face situations'. 'I get time' is vague; rephrase to 'having more time helps me' or 'I need time to think'.

× Not at all. Sometimes I remember once a time I argue with my friend, best friend Tanveer she about our homework.

✓ Not at all. I remember one time I argued with my best friend Tanveer about our homework.

'Sometimes I remember once a time' is redundant and incorrect; use 'I remember one time'. Use past tense 'argued' for a past event. Remove the extra subject 'she' which makes the clause ungrammatical.

× She does not remember what the deadline of our assignment.

✓ She didn't remember the deadline for our assignment.

Use past tense 'didn't remember' to match the past event. Use 'deadline for our assignment' or 'the deadline of our assignment' with 'the' and correct word order.

× And I argue with them.

✓ And I argued with her.

Match pronoun and number: 'them' is plural but the friend is singular ('her'). Use past tense 'argued' to match the narrative.

× How you forget this? Why you do not write the data of the telly in your notebook?

✓ 'How could you forget this?' and 'Why didn't you write the TV program details in your notebook?','explanation':'Questions need auxiliary verbs: use 'How could you forget this?' or 'How did you forget this?'. 'Why you do not write' should be 'Why didn't you write'. 'The data of the telly' is unnatural; use 'the TV program details' or 'the show's information'.

Questions need auxiliary verbs: use 'How could you forget this?' or 'How did you forget this?'. 'Why you do not write' should be 'Why didn't you write'. 'The data of the telly' is unnatural; use 'the TV program details' or 'the show's information'.