Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 답변을 더 자연스럽고 명확하게 구성하세요. 주제문으로 바로 답을 하고, 이유와 구체적인 예를 덧붙이되 문장은 간결하게 유지하세요. 또한 문법(시제, 주어·동사 일치)과 전치사, 동사 형태 오류를 고치고 불필요한 반복을 줄이세요. 예: ‘I like chatting with my friends. I usually use Instagram DMs because it’s convenient and I can reply anytime. For example, I often message classmates about homework or weekend plans.’

예시: I enjoy chatting with my friends. I usually use Instagram DMs because it’s convenient and I can reply whenever I have time. For example, I often message classmates about homework or make plans for the weekend.

제안: 주제문으로 시작하고, 주요 주제들을 순차적으로 제시한 뒤 구체적 예시를 추가하세요. 모호한 표현(‘society’)은 더 구체적으로 설명하고, 문장 끝의 끊김을 피하세요. 연결어를 사용해 문장 흐름을 좋게 만드세요.

예시: We usually talk about school life and our mutual friends. Sometimes we discuss social issues like local events or news. Recently, we have been talking a lot about the upcoming vacation and our plans for it.

제안: 의견을 먼저 명확히 말한 뒤 이유를 1–2개로 간결하게 설명하세요. 반복과 말더듬(umm)은 피하고, 문법(단수/복수, 동사 형태)을 고치세요. 연결어로 이유를 자연스럽게 이어가세요.

예시: I prefer chatting with just one friend. It’s easier to follow the conversation and avoid confusion, because group chats can be noisy and people often talk over each other.

제안: ‘It depends’라는 답을 확실히 한 뒤 상황별 선호를 구체적으로 설명하세요. ‘strange people’보다 ‘people I don’t know’처럼 자연스러운 표현을 쓰고, 문법(동명사 vs to-infinitive, 전치사)을 수정하세요.

예시: I think it depends on the situation. When I talk to people I don’t know, I prefer communicating online because it feels safer. However, with my closest friends I prefer face-to-face conversations because they feel more personal.

제안: 간결하게 직접 질문에 답한 뒤 이유를 분명히 설명하세요. 현재 표현은 의미 전달이 어렵고 문법 오류가 많습니다. ‘not that much’로 시작해 이유(온라인 채팅의 비동기성)와 구체적 예시를 덧붙이세요.

예시: Not usually. Because most of our conversations are online and asynchronous, we have time to calm down and misunderstandings are less likely to turn into arguments. If something is serious, we prefer to discuss it in person.

× I usually use Instagram to DM my friends or my friends and we usually chatting Instagram meeting to talk about.

✓ I usually use Instagram to DM my friends, and we usually chat on Instagram to talk.

The original sentence incorrectly uses the gerund 'chatting' after 'we usually' where the base verb 'chat' is required (rule: after subject + adverb of frequency use base form for present tense). Also preposition use: 'on Instagram' is correct rather than 'Instagram meeting'. Use a conjunction and punctuation to join clauses clearly. 한국어 설명: 주어+빈도부사 다음에는 현재 일반 동사의 기본형을 사용해야 합니다. 'we usually chatting'은 잘못된 형태이고 'we usually chat'으로 수정해야 합니다. 또한 'on Instagram'이 올바른 전치사입니다.

× We usually chat about school and friends and sometimes we talk about society and.

✓ We usually chat about school and friends, and sometimes we talk about society.

The original ends with an extra 'and' creating an incomplete clause. Use proper punctuation and complete the sentence. Present simple is correct for habitual actions; just remove the trailing conjunction. 한국어 설명: 문장 끝에 불필요한 'and'가 있어 문장이 불완전합니다. 습관을 나타낼 때는 현재 단순형을 유지하며 불필요한 접속사를 제거해야 합니다.

× These days we usually talk about vacation because tomorrow is my school vacation.

✓ These days we usually talk about vacations because tomorrow is my school vacation.

Count noun 'vacation' in general contexts can be plural when speaking about topics; both 'vacation' and 'vacations' can work, but 'vacations' sounds more natural when referring to general conversations. Maintain present simple for habitual action. 한국어 설명: 일반적인 주제로서 'vacation'을 복수형 'vacations'로 쓰는 것이 자연스러울 수 있습니다. 현재 단순시제를 그대로 유지합니다.

× I usually prefer just have weights only one friends because when we chat we group of people is umm messy and we can't understand who is talking about and it's hard.

✓ I usually prefer to chat with just one friend because group chats are messy, and we can't tell who is speaking, so it's hard.

Multiple errors: infinitive 'prefer to chat' is needed, 'just one friend' requires singular 'friend', 'weights' is irrelevant and removed, 'group of people is messy' should be 'group chats are messy' for naturalness, and 'we can't understand who is talking about' should be 'we can't tell who is speaking'. Correct subject-verb agreement and word choice. 한국어 설명: 'prefer' 다음에는 'to' 부정사 사용, 단수 대상일 때 'one friend'로 표기해야 합니다. 'weights'는 문맥상 불필요한 단어로 제거합니다. 'group chats are messy'처럼 자연스러운 표현과 동사 일치를 적용해야 합니다.

× I think it depends on situation.

✓ I think it depends on the situation.

Missing definite article 'the' before 'situation' is required when referring to a specific situation context. Present simple 'depends' is correct. 한국어 설명: 'situation' 앞에 특정 상황을 가리킬 때 관사 'the'를 넣어야 합니다.

× When I talk with strange people I usually prefer to chatting and when I talk with my best friends I usually prefer to face to face.

✓ When I talk with strangers I usually prefer chatting, and when I talk with my best friends I usually prefer face-to-face conversations.

Use noun 'strangers' instead of 'strange people'. After 'prefer' you can use gerund 'chatting' or 'to' + verb; here choose gerund for parallelism. 'Prefer to face to face' is ungrammatical; use 'prefer face-to-face conversations' or 'prefer to meet face to face'. 한국어 설명: 'prefer' 뒤에는 동명사도 올 수 있습니다('prefer chatting'). 'strangers'가 더 자연스러운 표현이며 'face-to-face'는 형용사로 명사와 함께 사용해야 합니다.

× Not that much when we chatting in online is not directly checking, so we talked each other when the time is passed and the argument is also decreased.

✓ Not that much. When we chat online, it's not checked directly, so we talk to each other later and the arguments decrease.

Multiple issues: 'we chatting' needs present simple 'we chat'. 'in online' should be 'online' or 'on online platforms'. 'is not directly checking' is ungrammatical; rephrase to 'it's not checked directly'. Use 'talk to each other' and 'later' rather than 'when the time is passed'. Use present simple for habitual actions: 'arguments decrease.' 한국어 설명: 'we chatting'은 잘못된 형태이므로 'we chat'로 수정해야 합니다. 'online'은 전치사 없이 쓰거나 'on online platforms'로 쓰고, 'talk to each other'와 같은 자연스러운 표현으로 바꿔야 합니다.