Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cải thiện: Giảm tiếng ỳ và loại bỏ lặp từ (ví dụ “the the”, “uh”), thêm câu chủ đề rõ ràng và câu phụ cụ thể hơn. Bạn nên nói tối đa 3–4 câu, dùng liên từ để mạch lạc và dùng từ vựng phù hợp (e.g., “share advice”, “personal issues”). Thực hành phát âm rõ ràng và kiểm soát ngắt quãng.

예시: I really enjoy chatting with my close friends. We usually discuss our daily routines and interesting news, and we often share advice when one of us has a problem.

제안: Cải thiện: Tránh lặp từ (“our our”), sửa ngữ pháp (ví dụ “which give us” nên là “which give us topics”), và tổ chức câu rõ ràng: câu chủ đề + 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể. Dùng liên từ như “for example” hợp lý, và sửa động từ cho phù hợp.

예시: I usually talk with my friends about school news and everyday events. For example, we often share funny incidents from class and discuss upcoming school activities that give us things to laugh about.

제안: Cải thiện: Sắp xếp ý: bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề, sau đó so sánh ngắn gọn giữa hai lựa chọn. Loại bỏ tiếng lắp (“uh”), sửa ngữ pháp (“many a people” → “many people”, “hearing different perspectives”), và rút gọn sao cho tối đa 4 câu.

예시: It depends on the situation. In a group chat I enjoy socializing with many people and hearing different perspectives, which often inspires new ideas. But in a private chat I can share my feelings and express myself more honestly.

제안: Cải thiện: Sửa cấu trúc câu và từ sai (“I prefer communicate” → “I prefer to communicate”, “I stole Facebook expression” unclear). Nêu rõ lý do cụ thể cho lựa chọn face-to-face (eye contact, tone) và nêu một ví dụ ngắn. Tránh từ không chính xác và dùng “a misunderstanding” số ít khi cần.

예시: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because I can see non-verbal cues like facial expressions and tone of voice, which help me respond appropriately. Social media is convenient for staying in touch, but it can sometimes cause misunderstandings.

제안: Cải thiện: Tránh lặp (“resolve it, resolved it”), sửa ngữ pháp (“a strong disagreements” → “strong disagreements” or “a strong disagreement”), và tổ chức câu: câu chủ đề + ví dụ + kết luận. Dùng trạng ngữ phù hợp như “for instance” và tránh lắp tiếng.

예시: Yes, I sometimes argue with friends, especially when there are strong disagreements or misunderstandings. For instance, during a group debate we disagreed on a topic, but we quickly resolved it through calm, respectful communication.

× I love chatting with my close friend.

✓ I love chatting with my close friends.

The noun 'friend' should be plural because the student later mentions talking with friends generally; use 'friends' for general statements about social activity.

× We often talk about our daily routines, some interesting news or share the the advice if we have some, uh, problems.

✓ We often talk about our daily routines, some interesting news, or share advice if we have some problems.

Remove the duplicate 'the the' and do not use 'the' before 'advice' in this general context. 'Advice' is an uncountable noun so no article is needed. Also add a comma before 'or' for clarity.

× I usually chat with friends about school news and things that happen in our our daily life.

✓ I usually chat with friends about school news and things that happen in our daily lives.

Use the plural 'lives' after 'daily' to match 'our' (plural possessive). Also remove the duplicated word 'our'.

× For example, we talk about funny incidents in class or upcoming school events which are give us topics to laugh about and how they update each other.

✓ For example, we talk about funny incidents in class or upcoming school events which give us topics to laugh about and help us update each other.

Remove the incorrect 'are' and change 'are give' to 'give' (verb agreement). 'How they update each other' is awkward; change to 'help us update each other' to make the meaning clear.

× It depends on situation.

✓ It depends on the situation.

'Situation' needs the definite article 'the' in this fixed expression 'depends on the situation'.

× In a group chat, I can enjoy socializing with a many a people and uh, hearing different perspective, uh, which is fun and helps uh, uh, help me new ideas.

✓ In a group chat, I can enjoy socializing with many people and hearing different perspectives, which is fun and helps me get new ideas.

Remove extra articles ('a many a people'). 'Many' already implies plural; use 'people' without 'a'. 'Perspective' should be plural 'perspectives'. 'Helps help me new ideas' is incorrect; use 'helps me get new ideas'.

× In a private chat, I can share my feelings and express my self honestly.

✓ In a private chat, I can share my feelings and express myself honestly.

'My self' is incorrect; use the single-word reflexive pronoun 'myself'. Also 'express myself honestly' is the correct collocation.

× I prefer communicate face to face because I can see the non verbal cues like I stole Facebook expression and tones which help me respond approximately.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because I can see nonverbal cues like facial expressions and tones which help me respond appropriately.

'Prefer' is followed by 'to' + infinitive: 'prefer to communicate'. 'Non verbal' should be 'nonverbal' and 'I stole Facebook expression' is incorrect; likely intended 'facial expressions'. 'Approximately' is wrong in meaning; use 'appropriately'.

× Uh, social media is convenient for keeping in touch, however it can cause a misunderstandings.

✓ Social media is convenient for keeping in touch; however, it can cause misunderstandings.

Do not use the article 'a' before the plural/unaccountable noun 'misunderstandings'. Also add proper punctuation: a semicolon or period before 'however' and a comma after it.

× Yes, I sometimes argue with friends, especially when we have a strong disagreements or misunderstandings.

✓ Yes, I sometimes argue with friends, especially when we have strong disagreements or misunderstandings.

'A strong disagreements' mixes singular article with plural noun; remove 'a' and make 'strong' agree with plural 'disagreements'.

× For instance, during a group debate we had different opinions of a topic, but we quickly resolve it, resolved it by calmly, by calm, uh, communication.

✓ For instance, during a group debate we had different opinions on a topic, but we quickly resolved it by calm, respectful communication.

Use past tense 'resolved' to match 'we had'. Change 'opinions of a topic' to 'opinions on a topic'. Remove duplicate 'resolve it, resolved it' and use 'calm, respectful communication' for natural phrasing.