Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make your answer more concise and grammatically correct. Start with a direct topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details. Correct verb forms and plurals, and avoid repeating similar ideas.

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends, especially Anisha. We have been friends for four years, and our conversations make me feel relaxed and understood. For example, we often discuss our career plans and share personal thoughts about graduate school.

제안: Answer directly and use clearer word choice and grammar. Use linking words to explain why the topic is important and give one specific example. Correct collocations (e.g., "apply for a master's degree").

예시: We usually talk about practical matters, such as applying for a master's degree. For instance, we discuss which universities to apply to, entry requirements, and how a master's would help improve my career prospects.

제안: Give a short clear opinion first, then give two concise reasons with correct grammar and linking words. Avoid repetitions and incorrect articles ("an introvert").

예시: I prefer chatting with one friend because I'm an introvert. I feel more comfortable sharing personal thoughts in a private conversation, and I find group chats can be overwhelming and less sincere.

제안: Respond with a clear preference and give specific reasons using linking words. Fix grammar ("face-to-face", "effective way to talk", avoid extra words). Provide a brief example of a situation.

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication because it's more effective for emotional support. For example, if a friend is upset, I can comfort her in person and read her body language, which is difficult over social media.

제안: Give a clearer, more natural response: state whether arguments happen often and why, using correct grammar and linking words. Use specific examples of topics you might disagree about and say how you resolve conflicts.

예시: Yes, we sometimes argue because we have different personalities and opinions. For example, we might disagree about study plans, but we usually resolve it by listening to each other and finding a compromise.

× We are friends for four years and chatting with her make me feel peaceful, comfortable and I feel free with her and we share with each other about our thoughts, opinion and plans for future.

✓ We have been friends for four years, and chatting with her makes me feel peaceful and comfortable; I feel free with her, and we share our thoughts, opinions, and plans for the future.

Errors: 'are friends for four years' uses simple present where present perfect is needed for an action continuing to the present (use 'have been friends'). 'chatting with her make' has subject-verb agreement and should be 'makes'. 'opinion' should be plural 'opinions' to match 'thoughts'. 'plans for future' needs the definite article 'the'. Suggestions: Use present perfect for durations continuing to now, ensure verbs agree with singular/plural subjects, pluralize countable nouns when appropriate, and include articles where required.

× We are friends for four years and chatting with her make me feel peaceful, comfortable and I feel free with her and we share with each other about our thoughts, opinion and plans for future.

✓ We have been friends for four years, and chatting with her makes me feel peaceful and comfortable; I feel free with her, and we share our thoughts, opinions, and plans for the future.

Error: 'chatting with her make me feel' — 'chatting' is a gerund here functioning as subject, so it requires the correct verb form 'makes'. Suggestion: When a gerund phrase is the subject, use a singular verb if the gerund is singular in meaning.

× It is very prominent for me because I gave a bachelor degree and now I want to upgrade my career way.

✓ It is very important to me because I earned a bachelor's degree, and now I want to advance my career.

Errors: 'gave a bachelor degree' incorrectly uses past verb 'gave' and is passive/incorrect actor — the student received the degree, so use 'earned' or 'received'. 'bachelor degree' requires possessive form 'bachelor's degree'. 'upgrade my career way' is unidiomatic; use 'advance my career'. Suggestions: Use correct verbs to reflect receiving qualifications, use standard noun forms, and choose idiomatic collocations for career progression.

× We usually chat with my friends about essential things like applying to the university for master degree.

✓ We usually chat with my friends about important things, like applying to university for a master's degree.

Errors: 'applying to the university' — 'to' can be omitted in general statements; 'for master degree' lacks article and possessive: use 'a master's degree'. Also 'essential' is better as 'important' here. Suggestions: Use 'applying to university' or 'applying to the university' depending on specificity, and correct degree phrasing to 'a master's degree'.

× and chatting with her make me feel peaceful, comfortable and I feel free with her

✓ and chatting with her makes me feel peaceful and comfortable, and I feel free with her

Error: 'make' should be 'makes' because the subject 'chatting with her' (a singular gerund phrase) requires third-person singular verb. Suggestion: Ensure verb agrees with singular gerund subjects.

× We usually chat with my friends about essential things like applying to the university for master degree.

✓ We usually chat with my friends about important things, like applying to university for a master's degree.

Error: 'We usually chat with my friends' mixes 'we' and 'my' awkwardly; better to say 'I usually chat with my friends' or 'We usually chat among ourselves'. Suggestion: Keep pronouns consistent: if speaker is describing their own actions, use 'I' and 'my'; if describing a group including the speaker, use 'we' with plural possessives.

× I prefer to chat with only one friend because I'm a introvert person.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because I'm an introvert.

Errors: 'a introvert' should be 'an introvert' (vowel sound). 'introvert person' is redundant—'an introvert' suffices. Suggestion: Use correct article before vowel sounds and avoid redundant nouns.

× I and I don't like a group of people because I don't believe to everyone that I can feel relaxed or share my thoughts or opinion.

✓ I don't like groups because I don't trust everyone enough to feel relaxed or to share my thoughts or opinions.

Errors: 'I and I don't like' is duplicated; 'a group of people' is better as 'groups'; 'believe to everyone' is incorrect — use 'trust everyone' or 'believe everyone' without 'to'. 'opinion' should be plural to match 'thoughts'. Suggestion: Remove duplication, choose correct verb for interpersonal trust ('trust'), and match noun plurality.

× I prefer to communicate face to face because it is more effective way to to talk with my friend because on social media if she has any problem she can't share her problems with me but face to face it is more. Good way.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because it is a more effective way to talk with my friend; on social media, if she has a problem she may not share it with me, but face to face it is easier.

Errors: 'more effective way to to talk' has doubled 'to' and misses the article 'a'. 'because on social media if she has any problem she can't share her problems with me' is awkward — use modal 'may not' and singular 'a problem' with pronoun reference. 'it is more. Good way.' is fragmented. Suggestion: Use articles correctly, avoid repeated words, use modals to indicate possibility, and join ideas into coherent sentences.

× Yes I do, I always argue with my friend because as I know we we all have a different character, we all have a different opinions or thoughts from each other and it is norm I argue about my opinion or and one special thing.

✓ Yes, I do. I sometimes argue with my friends because, as far as I know, we all have different personalities and opinions, and it is normal for me to argue about my point of view sometimes.

Errors: Run-on sentence, duplicated 'we we', 'a different character' should be 'different personalities', 'a different opinions' has article/number mismatch, 'it is norm' should be 'it is normal', 'and one special thing' is unclear. Suggestions: Break into sentences, remove duplication, use correct collocations ('different personalities'), ensure noun and article agreement, and clarify meaning by choosing precise phrases.