Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời tự nhiên nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp (ví dụ: "it's make" phải là "it makes") và nhiều tiếng lấp đầy (uh). Nên mở đầu trực tiếp, sửa lỗi động từ, dùng một đến hai câu bổ sung ngắn gọn giải thích lợi ích cụ thể (ví dụ: kết nối cảm xúc, cập nhật tin tức). Hạn chế lặp từ và loại bỏ từ thừa để rõ ràng hơn.

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends because it makes me feel comfortable and helps me stay updated quickly. For instance, we can share news or funny moments instantly without meeting in person.

제안: Nội dung khá rõ nhưng có lỗi từ vựng và ngữ pháp ("send routes" không rõ, "discuss about" nên là "discuss" hoặc "talk about", "our the future goals" sai trật tự). Nên nêu một chủ đề chính và bổ sung ví dụ cụ thể, dùng từ chính xác và câu ngắn gọn (2–3 câu).

예시: I usually share short videos and messages with friends. We also talk about our daily lives and future goals, such as career plans or travel ideas.

제안: Ý tưởng rõ ràng nhưng có lỗi cấu trúc ("chatting to with"), nhiều tiếng ngập ngừng và diễn đạt lặp. Nên dùng câu chủ đề trực tiếp, giải thích lý do bằng ví dụ cụ thể (ví dụ: riêng tư, thoải mái chia sẻ). Giữ 2 câu tối đa và dùng liên từ để liền mạch.

예시: I prefer chatting one-on-one because some conversations are private and I feel more comfortable sharing personal thoughts. For example, I might discuss family matters or sensitive plans only with a close friend.

제안: Câu trả lời có ý tốt nhưng bị rườm rà và ngữ pháp sai ("some communicate face to face on as many advantages" không rõ nghĩa, "I prefer like exchange" sai cấu trúc). Nên nói trực tiếp lựa chọn của bạn, sau đó nêu 1–2 lý do cô đọng với liên từ (e.g., "although..., I prefer... because...").

예시: Although face-to-face communication helps improve interpersonal skills, I prefer using social media because it is faster and more convenient for daily updates and arranging plans.

제안: Ý định của bạn không rõ ràng: câu có mâu thuẫn và cấu trúc sai ("I really argue... because I don't want some everything to be serious"), khiến người nghe bối rối. Nên trả lời rõ ràng là thường/không thường xuyên cãi nhau, giải thích lý do ngắn gọn và đưa ví dụ về cách giải quyết mâu thuẫn. Tránh câu phức tạp nếu không chắc chắn về ngữ pháp.

예시: I don't often argue with my friends because we try to resolve disagreements calmly. For example, if we disagree about plans, we discuss our preferences and find a compromise.

× I love chatting because it's make me feel very comfortable and it's very fast and I don't need to meet my friends face to face in order to, uh, exchange information.

✓ I love chatting because it makes me feel very comfortable and it's very quick and I don't need to meet my friends face to face in order to exchange information.

The verb 'make' should be in third person singular form 'makes' to agree with the subject 'it' (present simple). Replace 'very fast' with 'very quick' or keep 'very fast' but 'quick' sounds more natural here. Remove the filler 'uh' and the unnecessary comma before 'exchange information' for fluency. Suggestion: use subject-verb agreement and reduce fillers. Grammar problem type ID:2

× Well, I suppose that I usually send routes and short videos.

✓ Well, I suppose that I usually send routes and short videos to my friends.

The original sentence omits the recipient of 'send'; typical English uses 'send something to someone.' Add 'to my friends' for clarity. Also 'routes' may be intended as 'routes' (if directions) or 'photos'—confirm vocabulary if wrong. Grammar problem type ID:11

× Also we usually discuss about each other, daily life and our the future goals.

✓ Also we usually discuss each other's daily life and our future goals.

In English, 'discuss' does not take the preposition 'about' (use 'discuss something' not 'discuss about something'). Use the possessive form 'each other's' and remove the extra article 'the' before 'future goals'. Grammar problem type ID:11

× I would say that I prefer chatting to with one person rather than chatting in the group because, uh, some information.

✓ I would say that I prefer chatting with one person rather than chatting in a group because sometimes there is information

The phrase 'prefer chatting to with' is incorrect; use 'prefer chatting with.' Use 'in a group' or 'in groups' rather than 'in the group' unless a specific group is meant. The fragment 'because, uh, some information.' is incomplete; it needs completion such as 'because sometimes there is information I want only that person to know.' Remove filler 'uh' and finish the clause. Grammar problem type ID:11

× I say I want just only that person to know, and I don't want to be public for everybody.

✓ I mean I want only that person to know, and I don't want it to be public for everybody.

Use 'I mean' (clarification) instead of 'I say' for naturalness. 'Just only' is redundant; pick one ('only'). 'I don't want to be public for everybody' is ungrammatical; use 'I don't want it to be public to everybody' or 'I don't want it to be public.' Ensure the pronoun 'it' refers to the information. Grammar problem type ID:12

× As far as I'm concerned, some communicate face to face on as many advantages such as it would improve our communication skills, but I prefer like exchange information via social media because it's very fast and convenient.

✓ As far as I'm concerned, face-to-face communication has many advantages, such as improving our communication skills, but I prefer exchanging information via social media because it's very fast and convenient.

The original sentence has word order and structure problems: 'some communicate face to face on as many advantages' is ungrammatical. Use 'face-to-face communication has many advantages.' Use the gerund 'improving' after 'such as.' 'I prefer like exchange' is incorrect; use 'I prefer exchanging.' Overall, fix word order and verb forms. Grammar problem type ID:26

× And I really argue with my friends because I don't want some everything to be serious and I just want to play peacefully.

✓ No, I don't usually argue with my friends because I don't want everything to be serious and I just want to get along peacefully.

The original starts with 'And I really argue' which contradicts intended meaning; likely answer should be negative. 'Some everything' is incorrect; use 'everything.' 'Play peacefully' is unnatural for relationships; use 'get along peacefully.' Use simple present for habitual actions: 'I don't usually argue.' Grammar problem type ID:6

× That is on each one will treat nicely together.

✓ That means everyone will treat each other nicely.

The sentence is ungrammatical and uses wrong words/order: 'on each one' should be 'everyone' and 'treat nicely together' should be 'treat each other nicely.' Use 'that means' to explain cause and ensure correct object for 'treat.' Grammar problem type ID:13