Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar and fluency: correct verb forms and article use, avoid redundancy, and keep sentences concise (max 4–5 sentences). Also use a clearer linking phrase for the example.

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me stay connected, especially with those who live abroad. For example, I usually video-call them at the weekend to catch up and share news.

제안: Focus on correct tense and pronouns, and organise ideas with a linking word. Be specific about topics and give one brief example.

예시: Usually I talk with my friends about my studies and our future plans. In addition, we often share funny school stories to cheer each other up, such as the time we accidentally swapped lab reports.

제안: Correct word order, use proper connectors and finish the sentence. Give a specific reason and an example of help received. Avoid repetition and ensure complete sentences.

예시: I prefer one-on-one conversations with my closest friend because they are more personal and focused. For instance, when I have trouble with homework, my friend explains difficult parts step by step.

제안: Clarify preference with confident language, correct subject-verb agreement, and give a brief reason using a linking phrase. Keep it concise.

예시: I use both methods, but I prefer social media because people are often busy and it is easier to arrange quick conversations or send messages whenever convenient.

제안: Use correct verb forms and pronouns, avoid repetition, and explain why arguments can be positive using a linking word. Provide a clear concise example.

예시: Sometimes I argue with my close friends about study topics or current events, and I like it because their different opinions help me learn new perspectives. For example, debating an essay topic improved my critical thinking.

× Absolutely, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me to connected with them, specially with those who live abroad.

✓ Absolutely, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me to connect with them, especially with those who live abroad.

The phrase 'to connected' incorrectly uses the past participle 'connected' after 'to'; the infinitive 'to connect' is required. Also 'specially' is commonly used to mean 'in a special manner'; 'especially' is correct for emphasis. Suggestion: use the base verb after 'to' (to connect) and use 'especially' for emphasis.

× For instance, I try to talk with them on the weekends by video calls.

✓ For instance, I try to talk with them on the weekends by video call.

'By video calls' is awkward: when describing the medium, use 'by video call' or 'via video calls'. The present sentence mixes plural 'calls' with 'by'. Suggestion: use 'by video call' or 'via video calls' to sound natural.

× You Usually I chat with my friends about my studies as well as future plans.

✓ Usually I chat with my friends about my studies as well as my future plans.

The original repeats an adverb and misorders words ('You Usually'). This is a sentence structure/word order error. Also 'future plans' should be specified with 'my' for clarity. Suggestion: start with 'Usually' then subject then verb, and include possessive for parallel structure.

× Apart from that, sometimes I shared our school funny stories with him to cheer up.

✓ Apart from that, sometimes I share our school's funny stories with him to cheer him up.

'Shared' is past tense but the rest of the answer is general/habitual, so present simple 'share' is correct. Also 'school funny stories' needs possessive 'school's' and 'to cheer up' needs an object 'him'. Suggestion: use present simple for habitual actions and include necessary possessive and object.

× Actually I prefer chat with one-on-one my closest friend and it it is very beneficial in various ways.

✓ Actually I prefer to chat one-on-one with my closest friend, and it is very beneficial in various ways.

The sentence misorders infinitive and 'one-on-one' placement; also repeats 'it'. This is a sentence structure/word order error. Suggestion: use 'prefer to + verb' and place 'one-on-one' before 'with' phrase, and remove repeated words.

× Especially when I face any problem with in my homework, my friend helps me and.

✓ Especially when I have any problem with my homework, my friend helps me.

'face any problem with in my homework' mixes 'with' and 'in' incorrectly; use 'have a problem with my homework' or 'face a problem with my homework'. Also the sentence ends with an extra 'and'—remove it. Suggestion: use 'have/face a problem with' and complete or close the sentence properly.

× Actually pretty much both, but mostly I guess enjoy interacting through social media because these days everyone stay quite busy with their schedule.

✓ Actually pretty much both, but mostly I guess I enjoy interacting through social media because these days everyone stays quite busy with their schedules.

Missing subject 'I' before 'enjoy' is a sentence structure/present tense issue; 'stay' should be 'stays' to agree with singular 'everyone', and 'schedule' should be plural 'schedules' to match 'everyone'. Suggestion: include the subject 'I', use correct subject-verb agreement, and pluralize 'schedules' for natural expression.

× Sometimes I argue with my closest friends about study as well as any topics and I enjoy argue with them because he he has known about about several topics and I can learn from him.

✓ Sometimes I argue with my closest friends about studies as well as other topics, and I enjoy arguing with them because they know about several topics and I can learn from them.

Multiple issues: 'about study' should be 'about studies' (noun form) or 'my studies'; 'enjoy argue' needs gerund 'enjoy arguing'; 'he he' is repeated and pronoun 'he' is incorrect for plural 'friends'—use 'they'; 'has known about about' is wrong: use present simple 'know about' and remove duplicate 'about'. These are present tense, gerund, and pronoun errors. Suggestion: use gerund after 'enjoy', match pronouns to plural noun, and use simple present for general truths.