Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make your answer more natural and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (e.g., "contact" usage and articles), and avoid redundancy. Add one specific example and a linking phrase. Limit to 2–3 sentences.

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me stay connected, especially with those who live abroad. For example, I video-call a friend in Spain every weekend to catch up and share news.

제안: Provide a clearer topic sentence and specific details. Fix grammar and word choice (e.g., "it makes me feel relaxed" not "mentally unwanted"). Use a linking word to list topics and give a short example of a funny topic.

예시: I usually talk about my studies and future plans, and sometimes light topics to lift my mood. For instance, we often share funny stories or memes about our school experiences to cheer each other up.

제안: Answer directly and correct grammar: use a clear statement of preference and give a concise reason with a specific example. Avoid unclear phrases like "I it here" and "understand his every lessons."

예시: I prefer chatting one-on-one with my closest friend because conversations are deeper and more supportive. For example, when I have a problem with schoolwork, my close friend gives me practical advice and I can ask detailed questions.

제안: Make a clear comparative sentence with reasons and use linking words (e.g., "however", "because"). Reduce hesitation words and be specific about why you prefer social media sometimes.

예시: I like both, but I prefer social media for everyday contact because it's fast and convenient; however, I value face-to-face meetings for important conversations because they feel more personal.

제안: Give a direct but natural response, correct phrasing (e.g., "we sometimes argue about"), and provide a brief reason or result of arguing. Add one specific example of a typical disagreement topic.

예시: Yes, we sometimes argue about small things, such as who knows more about geography or which animal is stronger. For example, we once debated whether the elephant or the rhinoceros is more powerful, but it was friendly and helped us learn more facts.

× Absolutely, I'm very fond of chatting with my friends because it helps me to stay connected with them and also I try to contact with my long distance friends like a foreign friends.

✓ Absolutely, I'm very fond of chatting with my friends because it helps me stay connected with them and I also try to contact my long-distance friends, such as friends who live abroad.

Preposition and article use: 'contact with' is incorrect; use 'contact' without 'with'. 'Long distance' as a modifier should be hyphenated 'long-distance'. 'Like a foreign friends' is ungrammatical: use 'such as friends who live abroad' or 'foreign friends' and match number. Remove unnecessary 'to' after 'helps me'. Ensure articles/plural agreement. Grammar problem type ID:11

× Actually, I usually chat about with my friends, about my education, purpose as well as when I want to lift my mood.

✓ Actually, I usually chat with my friends about my education, my goals, and when I want to lift my mood.

Incorrect use of preposition and word order: 'chat about with' is redundant; use 'chat with ... about'. 'Purpose' is vague; 'goals' is more natural. List items should be parallel and connected by 'and'. Grammar problem type ID:8

× I enjoy chatting about funny topics with my friends and it feels me relax and mentally unwanted.

✓ I enjoy chatting about funny topics with my friends because it makes me feel relaxed and improves my mental well-being.

Wrong verb and adjective use: 'feels me relax' is incorrect; natural expression is 'makes me feel relaxed'. 'Mentally unwanted' is nonsensical; use 'improves my mental well-being' or 'relieves stress'. Maintain correct verb causative structure. Grammar problem type ID:13

× Actually pretty much both, but mostly I guess enjoy chatting with my closest friend because I it here helps me a lot and provide a lots of advices in my life so I can understand his every lessons.

✓ Actually, pretty much both, but mostly I enjoy chatting with my closest friend because it helps me a lot and provides a lot of advice in my life, so I can learn from his experiences.

Multiple issues: unnecessary words ('I guess' removed for clarity), misplaced 'it here', subject-verb agreement ('provide' should be 'provides'), article/quantifier errors ('a lots of advices' -> 'a lot of advice' or 'many pieces of advice'), and awkward phrase 'understand his every lessons' changed to 'learn from his experiences'. Reorder for clarity and correct agreement. Grammar problem type ID:26

× Actually I prefer both communicate face to face and social media.

✓ Actually, I prefer both communicating face to face and using social media.

Verb form and preposition: after 'prefer' when listing activities use gerunds: 'communicating' and 'using'. Also 'face to face' is better hyphenated as 'face-to-face' when used as adjective, but 'face to face' is acceptable in this context. Grammar problem type ID:11

× Uh, communicate face to face is highly beneficial, but mostly I enjoy using social media.

✓ Communicating face to face is highly beneficial, but I mostly enjoy using social media.

Use gerund 'Communicating' as the subject, not base verb 'communicate'. Also adjust word order for natural adverb placement: 'I mostly enjoy'. Grammar problem type ID:8

× Of course, I frequently argue with my friends based on several topics like geography as well as wild animals and also any competition.

✓ Of course, I frequently argue with my friends about various topics such as geography, wildlife, and competitions.

Preposition: 'argue based on' is awkward; use 'argue about'. 'Wild animals' is better as 'wildlife' in this list. 'Any competition' should be plural 'competitions' and list items should be parallel. Use 'various' instead of 'several' for natural phrasing. Grammar problem type ID:11