Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise, use correct tense and improve sentence structure. Start with a clear topic sentence, follow with one or two brief supporting details, and avoid repetition and filler words (uh, very). Use past/present consistently: say when you chat (now or in the past).

예시: I enjoy chatting with my friends. I usually talk to them when I’m bored, and we cover many topics like school and hobbies, so it’s easy to keep the conversation going.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence and then specific examples. Use linking words (for example, such as) and avoid vague phrases like 'convenient and simple things.' Be concise and finish your sentence clearly.

예시: We usually chat about our studies and personal lives. For example, we talk about homework, exam preparation, weekend plans, and any problems we’re facing so we can give each other advice.

제안: State your preference clearly and give concise reasons using linking words (because, so). Avoid awkward phrasing and repetition. Use correct articles and plural forms.

예시: I prefer chatting with one friend rather than a group because one-on-one conversations feel more relaxed and private. For example, it’s easier to avoid misunderstandings and have deeper discussions with a single person.

제안: Give a clear opinion and support it with two specific reasons. Avoid absolute statements like ‘fake’ without explanation. Use linking words (because, for example, therefore) and correct word order.

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to read body language and build trust. For example, meeting in person makes it easier to understand emotions, whereas social media can be impersonal and misleading.

제안: Answer directly and clearly: say whether you argue often or rarely, then give reasons or an example. Use correct grammar (it depends on) and avoid confusing phrases like 'in unmeasurable.' Keep to two or three sentences maximum.

예시: Sometimes I argue with friends, but not often. It usually happens when our opinions differ strongly—for example, we disagreed about how to split project tasks—though we normally resolve disagreements by talking calmly.

× Yes, uh, I usually like chatting with my friends when I was bored, I chat with my friends and there are too many topics with us so that we can, we can chatting our friends very easily, very easily.

✓ Yes, I usually like chatting with my friends when I am bored. I chat with them about many topics, so we can talk very easily.

The sentence mixes past tense 'was' with present habitual 'usually', so use present 'am' for consistency. 'There are too many topics with us' is awkward; use 'I chat with them about many topics'. 'We can, we can chatting' is incorrect: modal + base verb is required, so use 'we can talk'. Remove repeated fillers and simplify for clarity.

× And I am very uh, enjoy it and I like it very much.

✓ I enjoy it very much.

The phrase 'I am ... enjoy' incorrectly combines 'be' + verb; use the simple verb 'enjoy'. Remove filler 'uh' and redundant 'I like it very much' to make one clear sentence.

× Uh, actually I will do different things, uh, usually chat about my friends.

✓ Actually I usually do different things and chat about my friends.

'I will do' implies future but context is habitual, so use present 'I usually do'. Combine clauses correctly and remove unnecessary fillers.

× Our topic is so convenient and simple things, but uh, we are talking about our study and our personal life so, so that we can share our daily life with my friends.

✓ Our topics are simple; we talk about our studies and personal lives, so we can share our daily experiences with friends.

Use plural 'topics' to match 'are'. 'Study' should be plural or 'studies'. 'Share our daily life with my friends' mixes possessives; use 'share our daily experiences with friends'. Simplify connector usage and fix noun forms.

× So I usually do it in.

✓ So I usually do that.

The preposition 'in' is incomplete and unnecessary. Use 'that' to refer back to chatting.

× I prefer to chat only one friend because group is a huge number of people's activities so that I don't like it.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because a group involves many people, and I don't like that.

Use 'with only one friend' and add article 'a' before 'group'. The phrase 'a huge number of people's activities' is awkward; simplify to 'a group involves many people'. Use 'that' to refer to the situation.

× I don't like quarrel so that I like only one friend who I whom I chat with them.

✓ I don't like quarrels, so I prefer to chat with just one friend.

'Quarrel' should be plural noun 'quarrels'. The relative clause is incorrect ('who I whom I chat with them'); simplify to 'chat with just one friend'. Avoid redundant pronouns 'them'.

× I prefer to chat only one friend.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend.

Missing preposition 'with' and article use was okay but structure needed 'with only one friend' for correct English.

× I prefer to communicate face to face because face to face communicator communicate is better for social media.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because face-to-face communication is better than social media.

Use noun 'communication' rather than 'communicator communicate'. Hyphenate 'face-to-face' as an adjective. Compare properly: 'better than social media'.

× Social media right now is a fake media.

✓ Social media right now is often fake.

'Fake media' is awkward and repetitive; 'social media' is uncountable, so say 'often fake' to express opinion. Avoid duplicate 'media'.

× I think so because we don't know uh, a random person without face to face communicate, so that I prefer to communicate face to face.

✓ I think so because we don't know a random person without face-to-face communication, so I prefer face-to-face interaction.

Use 'face-to-face communication' or 'interaction' instead of verb 'communicate'. Remove filler 'uh' and fix article usage 'a random person'. Improve flow and word choice.

× Yes, is all depend on my thinking and when my theory and my friends theory is similar so that I can agree with them and when their theory and my theory in unmeasurable so that I can agree with my friends.

✓ Yes, it all depends on my thinking. When my views and my friends' views are similar, I can agree with them; when their views and mine are not comparable, I may not agree.

Use 'it all depends' for impersonal subject. 'Theory' is wrong word here; use 'views' or 'opinions'. Subject-verb agreement: 'views are'. 'In unmeasurable' is incorrect; 'not comparable' or 'very different' is clearer. Use modal 'may' for possibility.

× So it's all depend on my mind.

✓ So it all depends on my mind.

Use present tense 'depends' to agree with subject 'it'. Remove contraction/apostrophe placement: 'it's' can be 'it' depending; correct is 'it all depends'.