Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammatical accuracy, fluency and conciseness. Begin with a clear topic sentence, correct adjective forms, and avoid repetition. Add one specific example and a linking phrase to make it coherent.

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and stay connected. For example, we often meet for coffee on weekends and talk about our week, which helps me learn new ideas and support each other.

제안: Make the answer more natural and specific. Start with a topic sentence, use linking words, correct noun/verb forms, and provide one concrete example of a topic you discuss.

예시: We talk about a wide range of topics, from new relationships to our careers. For instance, we discuss job interviews and career plans so we can give each other advice and feel more confident about the future.

제안: Good idea but refine grammar and reduce redundancy. Use one clear reason, a linking phrase, and a short specific example of when a group discussion was helpful.

예시: I prefer chatting in a group because it brings many different perspectives and new ideas. For example, when we plan trips together, each person suggests different activities so we create a better itinerary.

제안: Clarify and correct awkward phrasing. Use a clear topic sentence, correct collocations (catch someone's mood), and give a brief reason and example. Remove confusing phrases like 'communication phase two Phase I.'

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication because I can read people's mood and respond instantly. For example, when a friend looks upset in person I can comfort them right away, which is harder over social media.

제안: Work on past tense, vocabulary and clarity. Use correct past tense verbs, clearer nouns (e.g., 'scenery' or 'lake'), and explain the outcome briefly. Keep it concise and natural.

예시: Yes, we sometimes argue. For example, when I visited West Lake in Hangzhou with a friend, we disagreed about how crowded the area was: she thought it was not crowded, but I felt it was much busier. We eventually compromised by walking to a quieter spot.

× I love catching up with my friends because it's very relax relaxing and we always chat after coffee or during our meal.

✓ I love catching up with my friends because it's very relaxing and we always chat after coffee or during our meal.

The adjective 'relax' is incorrect here; the present participle 'relaxing' is required to describe the feeling. Use '-ing' form (a verbal adjective) after 'very' to modify the clause. Suggestion: use 'relaxing' when describing something that causes relaxation.

× We can share our stories and also I always learn things happen to my friends.

✓ We can share our stories and I always learn about things that happen to my friends.

The clause 'things happen to my friends' lacks a relative connector and 'learn' requires the preposition 'about' when followed by a noun phrase. Also add 'that' to link 'things' with 'happen'. This fixes sentence structure and clarity.

× Actually our chat is on very different aspects from new relationship to our current job.

✓ Actually, our chats are about very different topics, from new relationships to our current jobs.

Use plural 'chats' for general habits and 'are about' is the correct present-tense phrase. 'Aspects' is less natural here than 'topics', and count nouns need plural forms ('relationships', 'jobs') to match intended meaning.

× The relationship is help us to get closer and the job is for our future plane.

✓ Relationships help us get closer, and jobs are for our future plans.

Use plural nouns 'relationships' and 'jobs' for general statements. 'Is help us' is ungrammatical; use the verb 'help' directly with the plural subject. 'Plane' is a wrong word choice; 'plans' is correct. Also remove unnecessary 'to' after 'help'.

× I prefer to chat with a group of people because we always have very different perspective and I like to meet new ideas.

✓ I prefer to chat with a group of people because we always have very different perspectives, and I like to hear new ideas.

'Perspective' should be plural 'perspectives' to agree with 'we'. 'Meet new ideas' is unnatural; use verbs like 'hear' or 'learn' with 'ideas'. Also add a comma before the conjunction for clarity.

× And during chatting with a group of people this situation occurs more frequently.

✓ Also, when chatting in a group, this happens more frequently.

The original sentence is wordy and awkward. 'During chatting with a group of people' should be rephrased to 'when chatting in a group'. 'This situation occurs' is unnecessarily formal; 'this happens' is clearer and more natural.

× I prefer communicating face to face because via this method I can catch others mood more immediately and during communication phase two Phase I will be more humorous compared to social media.

✓ I prefer communicating face to face because with this method I can read others' moods more immediately, and during face-to-face communication I am more humorous compared to on social media.

Use 'read others' moods' (possessive and plural) instead of 'catch others mood'. 'Via this method' is awkward; 'with this method' is more natural. 'During communication phase two Phase' is unclear; likely intended 'during face-to-face communication'. Use 'am' for state and 'on social media' for correct preposition.

× For example, last time I went Sihu Hangzhou with a friend of mine, we just argue about the size of silhouette.

✓ For example, last time I went to Xihu, Hangzhou, with a friend of mine, we argued about the size of the silhouette.

The past event requires past tense 'argued' not 'argue'. Include preposition 'to' with place 'went to Xihu'. 'Sihu' likely 'Xihu' (West Lake) — corrected as a proper noun and added commas. Add 'the' before 'silhouette' for specificity.

× She thinks it is big enough, but I said the entry is much more bigger.

✓ She thought it was big enough, but I said the entry was much bigger.

Maintain past tense consistency: 'thinks' should be 'thought' and 'it is' should be 'it was'. 'Much more bigger' is incorrect because 'bigger' already expresses comparative; use 'much bigger' or 'much more big' is wrong. Use 'was' for past description.