Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答は直接的で内容も適切ですが、曖昧な語句（uh, they have）や繰り返しが多く、流暢さに影響しています。また具体例や理由を一つ加えるとより良くなります。改善ポイントは：1) フィラー（uh, um）を減らす。2) 繰り返しを避けて簡潔に話す。3) 支持理由を具体的に一つ付け加える。

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because they have different hobbies and often share useful information. For example, one friend taught me tips for cooking that I now use every week.

제안: 内容は適切ですが、発音ミスや言い間違い（"mountain climbing mountain", "prong"）があり、意味が不明瞭になっています。改善ポイント：1) 言いたい語を事前に整理して明確にする。2) 語彙を正しく使う（"part", "aspect", "route"など）。3) 1〜2文で簡潔に具体例を示す。

예시: We usually talk about our hobbies, especially mountain climbing. For example, we discuss routes, equipment and our plans for weekend hikes.

제안: 構文や語彙の誤り（"hesitate to Catherine the conversations"）が大きく意味を損なっています。改善ポイント：1) 主語と動詞の一致を確認する（"I like to speak"）。2) 正しい表現を使う（"intervene in"や"interrupt"）。3) 理由を簡潔に述べる。

예시: I prefer talking to just one friend because I feel uncomfortable interrupting conversations in a group. It's easier to express my thoughts one-on-one.

제안: 意見は明確ですが、流暢さが低く、フィラーの多用と文法ミス（"prefer communicate"→"prefer to communicate"）があります。改善ポイント：1) 不要なつなぎ言葉を減らす。2) 不定詞の使い方を確認する。3) 理由を具体的に一つ追加する。

예시: I prefer to communicate via social media because it's more convenient and saves time. For instance, I can reply quickly between classes without arranging a meeting.

제안: 簡潔で明確ですが、フィラーの繰り返しがあり、詳細が欠けています。改善ポイント：1) フィラーを減らす。2) 理由や短い説明を加えて会話を豊かにする（例：価値観が似ている、意見を穏やかに話す等）。

예시: No, I don't usually argue with my friends because we share similar values and prefer to resolve disagreements calmly.

× Yes, I like chatting with my friends because they have uh, they have their own hobbies and and give me a lot of information I don't know.

✓ Yes, I like chatting with my friends because they have their own hobbies and they give me a lot of information that I don't know.

The original sentence omits the relative pronoun 'that' before the clause 'I don't know,' making the clause unclear. Also there is a repetition 'they have uh, they have' and duplicated 'and'. Use 'they' once and add 'that' to introduce the information clause. Suggestion: remove filler repetitions and include 'that' for clarity: 'they give me a lot of information that I didn't know' if referring to past knowledge.

× Yeah, uh, I usually chat with my friends on our hobbies.

✓ Yeah, I usually chat with my friends about our hobbies.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect for discussing topics in English; use 'about' to indicate the subject of conversation. Also remove excessive fillers for clarity.

× For example, I like mountain climbing mountain and uh, I, I speak with my friends on the prong of mountain climbing.

✓ For example, I like mountain climbing, and I talk with my friends about the pros of mountain climbing.

The original has word duplication ('mountain climbing mountain'), incorrect word choice ('prong' should be 'pros'), and incorrect preposition 'on'. Also 'speak with' is acceptable but 'talk with' is more natural here. Fix by removing duplication, choosing correct vocabulary, and using 'about' to introduce the topic.

× I like speak with, uh, only one friend because, uh, I hesitate to Catherine the conversations between other people.

✓ I like to speak with only one friend because I hesitate to join the conversations between other people.

'I like speak' is missing the infinitive marker 'to' (third person singular rule not directly but verb form issue) and the verb 'hesitate' should be followed by the infinitive 'to join' rather than 'to Catherine' which appears to be a misused word. 'Catherine' is incorrect; replace with 'join'. Also remove unnecessary commas and fillers.

× I much prefer communicate by social media because it it it is not time consuming compared to face to face communication.

✓ I much prefer communicating via social media because it is not time-consuming compared to face-to-face communication.

After 'prefer', use the gerund 'communicating' or the infinitive with 'to' (prefer to communicate). 'By' is acceptable but 'via' or 'on' is more natural. 'Time consuming' should be hyphenated when used as a compound adjective: 'time-consuming.' Also remove repeated 'it' and hyphenate 'face-to-face.'

× No, I I I don't argue with my friends. We are good friends.

✓ No, I don't argue with my friends; we are good friends.

The original contains repeated filler 'I I I' which should be reduced to a single 'I.' Use appropriate punctuation to connect the two related clauses (a semicolon or separate sentences). Remove fillers for clarity.