Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make your answer grammatical, concise and use clear linking words. Start with a direct topic sentence, then add two brief supporting details with correct grammar and specific examples. Avoid repetition and limit to 2–4 sentences.

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends. It helps strengthen our relationships because we share personal experiences, like weekend trips or funny moments. Also, talking to them helps me relax when I feel stressed about studying.

제안: Answer directly and give specific, natural examples. Use correct verb forms and connect ideas with linking words (for example, such as). Keep sentences clear and avoid vague phrases like "may" or redundant statements.

예시: I usually talk about things that happen to me, such as sightseeing or interesting places I visit. For example, when I see a beautiful landscape on a trip, I send photos and tell them how it made me feel, which makes our conversations lively and brings us closer.

제안: State your preference clearly and give two specific reasons with coherent linking. Use correct word choices (introverted, prefer, one friend) and avoid unclear or nonsensical phrases. Limit to 2–3 sentences.

예시: I prefer chatting with one friend rather than a group because I am more introverted and feel more comfortable in one-on-one conversations. In one-to-one talks we can discuss things in depth and really understand each other's thoughts.

제안: Give a clear preference and explain reasons with correct grammar and linking words. Mention specific benefits of face-to-face communication and keep sentences natural and concise.

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to read body language and tone of voice. For example, during meetings or personal conversations I can better understand people's emotions and react more appropriately.

제안: Answer directly and explain how arguments are handled. Use clearer grammar and linking words (however, instead) and give a short example of a resolution. Keep it positive and concise.

예시: Yes, we sometimes argue when we have different opinions about studies or life choices. However, these discussions are constructive because they help us see each other's perspectives, and usually we resolve them by listening and compromising.

× Firstly, is an essential way to solidified our relationship by sharing our moment.

✓ Firstly, it is an essential way to solidify our relationship by sharing our moments.

Missing subject 'it' and wrong verb forms. 'Is' needs a subject (it). 'Solidified' is past tense/participle but present infinitive 'to solidify' fits the general statement. 'Moment' should be plural 'moments' to match 'sharing' multiple experiences. Suggestion: include subject, use base verb after 'to', and match plural nouns appropriately.

× Secondly, is a essential way to help me unwind when I feel stressful about my study.

✓ Secondly, it is an essential way to help me unwind when I feel stressed about my studies.

Missing subject 'it' and incorrect article 'a' before vowel sound; should be 'an' if kept, but better to include 'it is an'. 'Stressful' describes a thing; to describe a feeling use adjective 'stressed'. 'Study' as a general activity should be plural 'studies'. Suggestion: add subject, use 'stressed', and change to 'studies'.

× Oh, actually, I often shares my moments.

✓ Oh, actually, I often share my moments.

Subject 'I' requires base verb form without -s. 'Shares' is third person singular form and incorrect here. Suggestion: use 'I share'.

× For instance, if I encounter the majestic landscape, I tend to share with them which they can in high spirits.

✓ For instance, if I encounter a majestic landscape, I tend to share it with them so they can feel uplifted.

Missing article 'a' before 'majestic landscape'. The clause 'share with them which they can in high spirits' is ungrammatical: 'which' incorrectly placed and 'in high spirits' needs a verb ('feel') and clearer connector ('so'). Suggestion: add article, use object pronoun 'it', and express purpose/result with 'so they can feel uplifted'.

× May is an essential way to solidify our relationship, you know.

✓ This is an essential way to solidify our relationship, you know.

Sentence begins with 'May' which is incorrect here; likely intended 'Maybe' or 'This'. 'This is' fits context. Suggestion: replace 'May' with 'This' to refer to the previous idea.

× You know I'm internal weighted person so I prefer luck to chat with only one friends.

✓ You know I'm an introverted person so I prefer to chat with only one friend.

'Internal weighted' is incorrect; correct adjective is 'introverted' or 'introvert'. Missing article 'an' before noun. 'Prefer luck to' is wrong; use 'prefer to'. 'Friends' should be singular 'friend' after 'only one'. Suggestion: use 'an introverted person', 'prefer to chat with only one friend'.

× Chat with only one friends is essential way to get a better understanding of each other.

✓ Chatting with only one friend is an essential way to get a better understanding of each other.

Use gerund 'Chatting' as subject. 'Friends' should be singular 'friend' after 'one'. Missing article 'an' before 'essential way'. Suggestion: start with 'Chatting', use singular 'friend', and include 'an'.

× We can understand deeply.

✓ We can understand each other more deeply.

Sentence lacks object 'each other' and comparative adverb structure. 'Understand deeply' is vague; 'understand each other more deeply' clarifies meaning. Suggestion: add 'each other' and 'more'.

× What's more, you often be wonderful than.

✓ What's more, you often become better.

Unclear and ungrammatical phrase. 'You often be' should be 'you often become' or 'you often feel'. 'Wonderful than' is incomplete ('than' needs a comparison object). I changed to 'become better' to convey improvement. Suggestion: use complete comparative or different verb.

× I'd like to communicate with others by face to face communication.

✓ I'd like to communicate with others face to face.

Redundant phrase 'by face to face communication' is wordy. Use 'face to face' as an adverbial phrase. Suggestion: simplify to 'communicate with others face to face'.

× I recommend face to face communications.

✓ I recommend face-to-face communication.

Plural 'communications' is unnecessary; use uncountable 'communication'. Hyphens in 'face-to-face' when used as adjective. Suggestion: use 'face-to-face communication'.

× Provide a channel to and now what they think because you can know the body language they contain.

✓ It provides a channel to know what they think because you can see their body language.

Sentence missing subject and has several incorrect phrases: 'to and now' is garbled; 'you can know the body language they contain' is wrong—people 'show' or 'use' body language. Suggestion: add subject 'It', use 'know', and 'see their body language'.

× Yes, I often argue with my friends even when we have different opinions on our study or our life.

✓ Yes, I often argue with my friends even when we have different opinions about our studies or our lives.

Preposition 'on' is less natural here; use 'about'. 'Study' and 'life' as general areas sound better in plural 'studies' and 'lives'. Suggestion: use 'opinions about our studies or our lives'.

× Instead of lasting contradiction, I recommend this is essential way to experience we can think from each other points of view.

✓ Instead of prolonged arguments, I think disagreements are an essential way to understand each other's point of view.

Original is ungrammatical and unclear. 'Lasting contradiction' awkward; 'prolonged arguments' fits. 'I recommend this is essential way to experience we can think from each other points of view' is broken—rephrased to express that disagreements help understand others' perspectives. Suggestion: use clearer nouns and restructure sentence.