Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and organized: give a clear topic sentence, then one or two specific supporting details. Avoid fillers and repetition. Use linking words to connect ideas (for example, “so” or “and”).

예시: Yes, I do. I often chat with my friends when I find something interesting, so I can share news quickly. Sometimes we also talk face-to-face, especially when we want a deeper conversation.

제안: Provide a clear topic sentence and expand with specific examples. Replace vague phrases with precise vocabulary and use a linking word to connect topics.

예시: I usually talk about celebrities and my college life. For example, we discuss new movies or celebrity news, and I tell them about exams or projects I’m working on.

제안: Structure your answer: state preference, give one clear reason, and provide a brief example. Correct grammar (avoid confusing phrases) and remove redundant sentences.

예시: I prefer chatting with just one friend because I’m shy and feel embarrassed in groups. For instance, in one-on-one talks I can share personal thoughts without feeling judged.

제안: Give a concise preference, state two clear reasons using accurate vocabulary, and avoid incorrect or unclear words (e.g., “transform button” or “unlikely”). Use linking words like “because” and “so”.

예시: I prefer social media because it’s convenient and allows instant sharing, so I can send photos or messages immediately. However, I still value face-to-face meetings for serious conversations.

제안: Be direct: state frequency, explain how you resolve disagreements with a specific method, and avoid unclear conclusions (e.g., “Then we become less friends again” is confusing). Use linking words like “but” and “so”.

예시: Sometimes we disagree, but we talk calmly about the issue and apologize if needed, so our friendship usually becomes stronger afterwards.

× Yes I do, I chat a lot with my friends.

✓ Yes, I do. I chat a lot with my friends.

Run-on punctuation and sentence boundary: add a comma after 'Yes' and split into two sentences to improve clarity. Use present simple 'chat' correctly for habitual action.

× Every time I know about something fresh or interesting I just send a message to my friend.

✓ Whenever I learn about something new or interesting, I just send a message to my friends.

Use 'whenever' for habitual actions and 'learn' instead of 'know about' for acquiring information. Use 'new' rather than 'fresh' in this context and plural 'friends' to match earlier plural reference (or keep singular if meaning one friend). Add a comma before the subordinate clause.

× Uh, right now. Or just communicate. Communicate with her face to face.

✓ For example, right now I can also communicate with her face to face.

Fragments lacking a main verb were used. Combine fragments into one complete sentence with subject and verb to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× Well, I usually chat the famous celebrities with my friends.

✓ Well, I usually chat about famous celebrities with my friends.

The verb 'chat' requires the preposition 'about' when indicating topic. Also remove the definite article 'the' before 'famous celebrities' unless referring to a specific group.

× Umm, I also share my, uh, academic life in college with them.

✓ I also share my college academic life with them.

Word order improved: 'college academic life' is more natural. The present simple 'share' is appropriate for habitual actions; remove filler sounds for clarity.

× Well, I do prefer to chat with only one friend because it makes me feel really embarrassed to talk with a group of people for I'm very shy.

✓ Well, I prefer to chat with only one friend because I feel embarrassed talking to a group of people since I am very shy.

Avoid redundant 'do prefer' unless emphasizing. Use 'talking to' rather than 'to talk with' for gerund after 'feel embarrassed.' Replace 'for' with 'since' to give the reason; use 'I am' not contraction 'I'm' optional but keep formal clarity.

× However, Chad was chatting with only one friend makes me really relaxed and I can talk a lot about my personal thinking.

✓ However, chatting with only one friend makes me feel relaxed and allows me to talk a lot about my personal thoughts.

Original sentence has mixed subjects and tense errors ('Chad was chatting' is incorrect and unrelated). Use gerund 'chatting' as subject, 'makes me feel relaxed' and 'allows me' for clarity. Replace 'personal thinking' with 'personal thoughts' for natural English.

× Oh well, I prefer communicating with others on social media because it's more convenient and whenever I say something fun I just need to click the transform button then it can be transferred to my friend immediately.

✓ Oh well, I prefer communicating with others on social media because it's more convenient, and whenever I say something fun I just need to click the share button and it is sent to my friends immediately.

Use 'share button' rather than 'transform button.' Maintain tense consistency: 'is sent' or 'it is transferred' both acceptable; use plural 'friends' if sharing with multiple people. Add comma before 'and' to separate clauses.

× Unlikely.

✓ That's unlikely.

Single-word 'Unlikely' is awkward and unclear as a response. Use 'That's unlikely' to form a complete clause conveying meaning.

× Well, uh, sometimes, uh, we may have different opinions on the same stuff, but we can sort it out, uh, later in a very peaceful way.

✓ Well, sometimes we have different opinions about the same things, but we can sort them out later in a peaceful way.

Use 'have' instead of 'may have' for natural frequency when referring to actual occasional occurrences. Use 'about' with 'opinions' and 'things' instead of informal 'stuff.' Replace 'sort it out' with 'sort them out' to match plural 'opinions.' Remove fillers.

× Then we become less friends again.

✓ Then we become friends again.

'Less friends' is ungrammatical; use 'friends again' to express returning to a friendly relationship. 'Become' in present simple is appropriate for habitual outcomes.