Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Избегайте использования слов-паразитов и старайтесь делать ответы более структурированными и лаконичными. Например, "You know" и "umm" делают речь менее естественной и отвлекают слушателя. Также стоит избегать излишне длинных предложений без пауз.

예시: I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and feel accepted. We often discuss politics since sharing similar beliefs is important to me.

제안: Избегайте повторов и старайтесь использовать связующие слова для плавного перехода между идеями. Также стоит уточнять и конкретизировать детали, чтобы ответ был более содержательным и логичным.

예시: We talk about various topics, mainly related to our studies, such as homework, teachers, and aspects of the curriculum we dislike. Additionally, politics is important to us, so we often discuss our views to ensure we share similar opinions.

제안: Избегайте неясных выражений и старайтесь завершать мысли. Фразы типа "I can't charge just for one person for the love of me" неясны и сбивают с толку. Также избегайте незаконченных предложений.

예시: I prefer chatting with a group of people because I feel more comfortable and confident. When I talk to just one person, I tend to get nervous and forget what I want to say.

제안: Старайтесь избегать грамматических ошибок и использовать связующие слова для более плавного изложения. Например, в начале предложения пропущено подлежащее "it". Также можно добавить конкретные примеры для обогащения ответа.

예시: Although I value both face-to-face and social media communication, I find it easier to communicate via social media because I don't have to worry about my facial expressions or gestures. For example, I can take my time to think before replying.

제안: Избегайте неуместных или неясных выражений, таких как "old people sometimes argue" в данном контексте. Старайтесь делать ответы более конкретными и логичными, используя связующие слова.

예시: Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends because we have different opinions. However, I always try to stay calm and respectful to avoid hurting anyone's feelings.

× For me, it's source of relaxation, umm, of that feeling of acceptance and being loved and admired.

✓ For me, it's a source of relaxation, umm, of that feeling of acceptance and being loved and admired.

The noun 'source' is singular and requires an article 'a' before it to be grammatically correct in this context.

× Also, I do tend to discuss politics with my friends because it is of a paramount importance for me that we share the same beliefs.

✓ Also, I do tend to discuss politics with my friends because it is of paramount importance to me that we share the same beliefs.

The phrase 'of a paramount importance' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'of paramount importance'. Also, 'for me' should be 'to me' to correctly express personal importance.

× Well, there are really different topics we chat about.

✓ Well, there are really different topics that we chat about.

The sentence is missing the relative pronoun 'that' to connect the clause properly, improving clarity and grammatical correctness.

× we usually chat about homework or teachers or what we do on don't like in our curriculum.

✓ we usually chat about homework or teachers or what we do or don't like in our curriculum.

The phrase 'do on don't like' is incorrect; it should be 'do or don't like' to correctly express contrasting actions.

× I can't charge just for one person for the love of me.

✓ I can't chat just with one person for the love of me.

The word 'charge' is incorrect in this context; the correct verb is 'chat'. Also, 'just for one person' should be 'just with one person' to correctly express the idea of chatting with someone.

× I definitely feel it's much easier for me to communicate with different people and it's much easier when there are there is a lot of.

✓ I definitely feel it's much easier for me to communicate with different people and it's much easier when there are a lot of them.

The phrase 'there are there is a lot of' is incorrect and incomplete. It should be 'there are a lot of them' to correctly express the presence of many people.

× While both face to face and social media communication are important for me, is much easier to communicate via social media because I do not need to mind my facial expressions or gestures.

✓ While both face-to-face and social media communication are important for me, it is much easier to communicate via social media because I do not need to mind my facial expressions or gestures.

The sentence is missing the subject 'it' before 'is much easier'. Also, 'face to face' should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face' when used as an adjective.

× Well, I mean old people sometimes argue with friends.

✓ Well, I mean, people sometimes argue with friends.

The word 'old' is unnecessary and changes the meaning. Removing it makes the sentence more general and appropriate.