Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答が少し冗長で、文法的な誤りもあります。より自然で効果的な表現にするために、簡潔にし、文法を正しく使うことを意識しましょう。

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me learn new information and ideas. It’s always a pleasant experience for me.

제안: 話の内容が少し曖昧で、文法や語彙の誤りがあります。具体的な話題を明確にし、文をつなぐ接続詞を使って論理的に話しましょう。

예시: I usually talk about new TV programs and movies with my friends. We exchange information about the latest shows and sometimes discuss new actors and actresses, which I find interesting.

제안: 文法の誤りがあり、表現が繰り返されています。接続詞を使って文をつなぎ、より自然で簡潔に話す練習をしましょう。

예시: I prefer chatting with a group of people because it allows me to hear many different ideas and learn a lot of new information. Therefore, I really enjoy group conversations.

제안: 理由の説明が少し不明瞭で、文法的な誤りもあります。理由を明確にし、接続詞を使って論理的に話す練習をしましょう。

예시: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because sometimes social media can be unsafe. People may experience bullying online, so I feel more comfortable talking in person.

제안: 文が不完全で意味が伝わりにくいです。意見を述べる際は、文を完結させ、理由や結果を明確に説明しましょう。

예시: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends when we have different opinions. However, I believe it’s important to share our views respectfully to understand each other better.

× I can get I can get a new information and idea about from the chatting with my friend.

✓ I can get new information and ideas from chatting with my friends.

'Information' is an uncountable noun and should not be preceded by 'a'. 'Idea' should be plural to match the context. Also, 'from the chatting with my friend' is awkward; it should be 'from chatting with my friends' to indicate general activity and plural friends.

× So that's really good for me and I really enjoy chatting with my friend.

✓ So that's really good for me and I really enjoy chatting with my friends.

Since the student refers to chatting with multiple friends earlier, 'friend' should be plural to maintain consistency.

× I usually chat about new timers and TV programs and movies.

✓ I usually chat about new timers, TV programs, and movies.

The sentence is missing commas to separate items in a list, which is a punctuation issue rather than grammar, but 'timers' seems incorrect; possibly 'topics' or 'times' was intended. However, since 'timers' is unclear, it is left as is.

× They we can exchange the information about new movies and TV shows.

✓ We can exchange information about new movies and TV shows.

'Information' is uncountable and does not need 'the'. Also, 'They we' is incorrect; 'We' alone is correct.

× And I also get to know that new actors or actress.

✓ And I also get to know new actors or actresses.

'Actors or actress' should be pluralized consistently as 'actors or actresses' to match the plural form.

× I prefer chat with group of people because I talk with many people.

✓ I prefer to chat with a group of people because I talk with many people.

'Prefer' is followed by the infinitive form 'to chat', not the base form 'chat'. Also, 'group of people' needs the article 'a'.

× I can get to know information, a lot of information and many new ideas.

✓ I can get to know a lot of information and many new ideas.

The phrase 'get to know information' is awkward; 'get a lot of information' is better. Also, 'information' is uncountable and should be preceded by 'a lot of'.

× Social medias via social media, some people easy to get attacked or like bullying so that's why I prefer to communicate face to face, I feel more comfortable.

✓ Social media, some people are easy to get attacked or bullied, so that's why I prefer to communicate face to face; I feel more comfortable.

'Social media' is uncountable and should not be pluralized as 'social medias'. Also, 'some people easy to get attacked' lacks the verb 'are'. 'Like bullying' should be 'bullied' to use the correct verb form.

× Sometimes I feel something don't with my friend they said I need to show I need to tell my opinion to them so I argue with my friends sometimes but we need to share the opinion and.

✓ Sometimes I feel something is wrong with my friend. They say I need to express my opinion to them, so I argue with my friends sometimes, but we need to share opinions.

The original sentence is run-on and lacks clarity. 'Something don't with my friend' is incorrect; it should be 'something is wrong with my friend'. 'They said' should be 'they say' to maintain present tense. 'Show I need to tell my opinion' is awkward; 'express my opinion' is better. The sentence ends abruptly and needs completion.