Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答が冗長で文法的な誤りが多いです。より自然で簡潔な表現を心がけ、文法の正確さを向上させましょう。例えば、"I like chatting with my friends because I can share my thoughts and learn new things from them."のように言い換えられます。

예시: Yes, I like chatting with my friends because it allows me to share my thoughts and learn new things from them.

제안: 文法と語彙の誤りが目立ち、意味が伝わりにくいです。話題を明確にし、正しい時制と単語を使いましょう。例えば、"I usually chat with my friends about movies or TV shows, and I learn about new releases from them."のように表現できます。

예시: I usually chat with my friends about movies or TV shows, and I learn about new releases from them.

제안: 文が途切れ途切れで意味が不明瞭です。完全な文を作り、情報を整理して伝えましょう。例えば、"I prefer chatting with a group because I can get many ideas and information from different people."のように言えます。

예시: I prefer chatting with a group because I can get many ideas and information from different people.

제안: 文が途中で終わっており、意味が不明確です。理由を明確に述べ、文を完結させましょう。例えば、"I prefer face-to-face communication because social media can sometimes be unsafe due to online attacks."のように表現できます。

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication because social media can sometimes be unsafe due to online attacks.

제안: 意味が伝わりにくく、文法的にも不正確です。簡潔で明確な表現を使い、意見を述べる理由を説明しましょう。例えば、"I don't argue often, but if I feel something is wrong, I express my opinion to my friends honestly."のように言えます。

예시: I don't argue often, but if I feel something is wrong, I express my opinion to my friends honestly.

× I can express my reading to with my friend

✓ I can express my feelings to my friend

The phrase 'express my reading to with my friend' is incorrect because 'reading' is not the appropriate noun here and the prepositions 'to with' are misused. The correct phrase is 'express my feelings to my friend' where 'to' correctly indicates the direction of expression.

× I also I can get the new knowledge from my friends

✓ I can also get new knowledge from my friends

The sentence has redundant pronouns 'I also I' which is incorrect. The correct structure places 'also' after the subject 'I' and removes the extra 'I' to form 'I can also get new knowledge from my friends'.

× I usually checked with my friends about the movie or TV show

✓ I usually chat with my friends about movies or TV shows

The verb 'checked' is incorrect in this context; 'chat' is appropriate. Also, 'about the movie or TV show' should be pluralized to 'about movies or TV shows' to indicate general topics.

× through Sir chatting with my friend, I can get to know the new information about the new movie and good tower from them

✓ Through chatting with my friends, I can get to know new information about new movies and good actors from them

The phrase 'Sir chatting' is incorrect and likely a mishearing or typo. 'Friend' should be plural 'friends' to match 'them'. 'Good tower' is likely a mispronunciation of 'good actor'. Also, 'the new information' should be 'new information' as 'information' is uncountable.

× I prefer to chat with group of people because I can get to. I can run many information and. New idea from many people to talk with a group of

✓ I prefer to chat with a group of people because I can get a lot of information and new ideas from many people when talking with a group

The phrase 'group of people' needs the article 'a'. 'Many information' is incorrect because 'information' is uncountable; 'a lot of information' is correct. 'New idea' should be plural 'new ideas' to match 'many people'.

× I prefer to communicate face to face because I feel sometimes scared to be the social media cause some people get get attack the people in the social media so I prefer the

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because I sometimes feel scared to be on social media since some people get attacked on social media, so I prefer that

The phrase 'scared to be the social media' is incorrect; it should be 'scared to be on social media'. 'Get get attack' is incorrect; it should be 'get attacked'. Also, 'the social media' should be 'social media' without 'the'.

× don't hide your face, my friends a lot

✓ I don't argue with my friends a lot

The phrase 'don't hide your face' is incorrect and likely a mishearing or error. The intended meaning is 'I don't argue with my friends a lot'. The pronoun 'I' is necessary as the subject.

× But if I feel something wrong with my friend, I tell them, 'cause I need to show, express. What do I feel to talk about my friends? Talk about it. I need to say my opinion

✓ But if I feel something is wrong with my friend, I tell them because I need to express how I feel and talk about it. I need to say my opinion

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Adding 'is' after 'something' corrects the sentence structure. 'Show, express' should be combined into 'express how I feel'. The questions 'What do I feel to talk about my friends? Talk about it.' are unclear and should be rephrased for clarity.