Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammatical accuracy and natural phrasing. For example, use 'appreciate spending time' instead of 'appreciate to spend time'. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'super useful for your mind' and replace them with clearer expressions.

예시: Yes, I do. I really enjoy spending time with my friends and talking about our lives and problems because I believe it helps relieve stress and keeps my mind healthy.

제안: Work on sentence clarity and structure. Avoid redundancy and unclear phrases like 'super sportist'. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and provide specific examples.

예시: Well, it depends on the friend, but usually we talk about personal problems, our life goals, and sports activities. For instance, since I am very into sports, we often discuss our training routines and competitions.

제안: Focus on grammatical accuracy and clearer expression. Use correct prepositions and avoid awkward phrases like 'you are more listen'. Also, clarify your ideas with linking words and examples.

예시: If I can choose, I prefer chatting with one or two people because it's easier to listen and have meaningful conversations in a small group. In larger groups, it's harder to hear everyone's opinions clearly.

제안: Improve fluency and sentence structure. Avoid repetition and use linking words to contrast ideas. Also, explain why face-to-face communication is beneficial with specific reasons.

예시: I definitely prefer face-to-face communication because it feels more personal and allows for better understanding through body language. Although social media is useful for sharing updates, it lacks the depth of real conversations.

제안: Work on fluency and clarity. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and unclear phrases like 'I am such a specific person'. Provide reasons or examples to support your answer.

예시: No, I usually avoid arguments with friends. When a controversial topic comes up, I prefer to change the subject because I value maintaining harmony in our relationships.

× I really appreciate to spend time with my friends and just speaking about our life and our problems.

✓ I really appreciate spending time with my friends and just speaking about our life and our problems.

The verb 'appreciate' is followed by a gerund (-ing form), not an infinitive. Therefore, 'to spend' should be corrected to 'spending'.

× I really appreciate to spend time with my friends and just speaking about our life and our problems.

✓ I really appreciate spending time with my friends and just speaking about our lives and our problems.

The word 'life' should be pluralized to 'lives' because it refers to the lives of multiple people (friends).

× because as I am super sportist, it's a difficult topic.

✓ because as I am very sporty, it's a difficult topic.

The word 'sportist' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'sporty'. Also, 'super' is informal and better replaced with 'very' for clarity.

× If I can, I would choose with one or two persons because I think that you are more listen when you just speak with a little group rather than a larger 1.

✓ If I can, I would choose one or two people because I think that you listen more when you just speak with a small group rather than a larger one.

'Persons' is less common than 'people' in this context. 'More listen' is incorrect; it should be 'listen more'. 'Little group' should be 'small group'. The number '1' should be spelled out as 'one'.

× So yes, I just enjoy more to speak and hear about them.

✓ So yes, I just enjoy speaking and hearing about them more.

The verb 'enjoy' should be followed by gerunds ('speaking' and 'hearing'), not infinitives. Also, 'more' is better placed at the end for clarity.

× So if it's a larger group you can hear everyone's.

✓ So if it's a larger group, you can hear everyone.

The possessive 'everyone's' is incorrect here; the correct pronoun is 'everyone'. Also, a comma is needed after the introductory clause.

× I am completely face to face team I I don't think that social media use is useful for communication, just it's nice to make some updates about your life but face to face is more personal and I would say beneficial.

✓ I am completely a face-to-face person. I don't think that social media use is useful for communication; it's just nice to make some updates about your life, but face-to-face is more personal and, I would say, beneficial.

'Face to face team' is incorrect; it should be 'face-to-face person'. The sentence needs to be split for clarity. Also, punctuation and conjunctions are corrected for better flow.

× I am such a specific person.

✓ I am a very particular person.

The adjective 'specific' is not commonly used to describe personality; 'particular' is more appropriate here. Also, 'such a' is less natural than 'a very' in this context.