Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'we can uh'. Also, use more natural expressions such as 'a good way to relax and have fun' instead of 'a good way to do entertainment'. Keep your sentences concise and clear.

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it's a great way to relax and have fun. We often share personal experiences, which helps strengthen our relationships.

제안: Clarify unclear phrases like 'I'm telling an ambassador'. Use correct grammar and linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, say 'I usually chat about assignments and tests because it's a good way to help each other by sharing tips.'

예시: Currently, I am a student ambassador, so I usually chat with my friends about assignments and tests. This helps us support each other by sharing useful tips.

제안: Avoid repetition and filler words. Structure your answer clearly by stating your preference first, then giving reasons with linking words. Use correct grammar and complete your sentences.

예시: I prefer chatting with a group of friends because it allows us to share personal issues and ideas. This way, everyone can learn from each other and improve their knowledge.

제안: Reduce filler words and improve sentence flow. Use linking words to connect ideas and be more specific about why face-to-face communication is better.

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows us to meet in person and celebrate special occasions like birthdays. Moreover, it helps us understand each other better through non-verbal cues.

제안: Clarify your ideas and avoid confusing phrases like 'It's my bad manner' and 'It might like it's my bad time'. Use simple, clear sentences to express that you avoid arguments and maintain good relationships.

예시: No, I don't argue with my friends because I believe it's impolite. Instead, we help and support each other to maintain a good friendship.

× It's a good way to do entertainment and feel relaxed.

✓ It's a good way to be entertained and feel relaxed.

The phrase 'do entertainment' is incorrect because 'entertainment' is an uncountable noun and cannot be used with 'do'. Instead, use 'be entertained' to express the idea of enjoying entertainment.

× it also good way to help each other and we also share our tips.

✓ It is also a good way to help each other, and we also share our tips.

The sentence is missing the verb 'is' before 'also good way'. Adding 'is' corrects the sentence structure and makes it grammatically correct.

× we are going to chat with people with, uh, with only friend, with, uh, group of friend and friend.

✓ We are going to chat with people, with only one friend, with a group of friends, and with friends.

The singular 'friend' should be plural 'friends' when referring to groups, and 'only friend' should be 'only one friend' for clarity. Also, articles like 'a' are needed before 'group of friends'.

× So every people can improve their knowledge as well as enhance their.

✓ So everyone can improve their knowledge as well as enhance theirs.

The word 'people' is plural and cannot be used with 'every'. 'Everyone' is the correct singular pronoun. Also, 'enhance their' is incomplete; it should be 'enhance theirs' to refer to their knowledge.

× I prefer to communicate face to face because we can, uh, meet with friends as well as enjoy your birthday.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because we can meet friends as well as enjoy our birthdays.

The preposition 'with' after 'meet' is unnecessary. Also, 'your birthday' should be 'our birthdays' to maintain consistency with the speaker's perspective.

× It's my bad manner. It might like it's my bad time.

✓ It's bad manners. It might be my bad time.

'Bad manner' should be plural 'bad manners' as it is an uncountable noun. The phrase 'It might like it's my bad time' is incorrect; it should be 'It might be my bad time' to express possibility.