Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中存在语法错误，如“usually chatting”应为“usually chat”，以及“frustrated”前应加介词“am”。建议注意动词时态和搭配的正确使用，同时避免重复表达“makes me feel much better and again new perspectives”，可以更简洁自然。

예시: Yes, I usually chat with my friends, especially when I am frustrated with work or facing difficult situations. Talking to them helps me feel better and gain new perspectives.

제안: 回答中“Sometimes we often”表达重复，建议简化为“we often”。“TV scenarios”表达不自然，建议使用“TV series”或“TV programs”。此外，回答可以更有条理，使用连接词使句子更流畅。

예시: We often discuss our future plans and interests, which makes our conversations more interesting. Additionally, we chat about common hobbies like TV shows and series.

제안: 回答中有语法错误，如“one only one friend”应为“only one friend”，“I enjoy I have”不通顺。词汇“casual chess”应为“casual chats”。建议注意句子结构和词汇准确性，表达更自然。

예시: I prefer chatting with only one friend because I enjoy having deep and intellectual conversations. It's more interesting to talk about meaningful topics with someone I trust rather than having casual chats in a group.

제안: 回答中缺少动词不定式“to”在“prefer communicate”前，应为“prefer to communicate”。句子结构不够流畅，“and which can help me understanding”应改为“which helps me understand”。建议注意语法和句子连贯性。

예시: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because I can see the person's facial expressions and body language, which helps me understand what they are saying better.

제안: 回答开头“You with friends?”不完整且不自然，应直接回答问题。重复词“this this this agreements”错误，应为“disagreements”。建议注意回答的完整性和词汇准确性。

예시: Do I argue with friends? Yes, definitely. I think it's normal and almost inevitable for friends to argue sometimes. In fact, I believe that these disagreements can actually help strengthen our relationship because they allow us to understand each other better.

× Yes, I usually chatting with my friends especially when I frustrated from work or face difficult situations.

✓ Yes, I usually chat with my friends especially when I am frustrated from work or face difficult situations.

动词通常后面接动词原形，'usually'后面应使用动词原形'chat'，而不是动名词'chatting'。此外，'frustrated'前应加助动词'am'构成现在时态。

× Yes, I usually chatting with my friends especially when I frustrated from work or face difficult situations.

✓ Yes, I usually chat with my friends especially when I am frustrated from work or face difficult situations.

表达现在的状态时，'frustrated'应使用现在时态，需加助动词'am'。

× Sometimes we often discuss our future plans and interests, which makes our conversations more interesting, and we often chat about our common hobbies like TV shows or TV scenarios.

✓ Sometimes we discuss our future plans and interests, which makes our conversations more interesting, and we often chat about our common hobbies like TV shows or TV scenarios.

'Sometimes'和'often'都表示频率，通常不同时使用，去掉其中一个使句子更自然。

× I prefer chatting with one only one friend because I enjoy I have deep and intellectual conversations.

✓ I prefer chatting with only one friend because I enjoy having deep and intellectual conversations.

'one only one'顺序错误，应为'only one'。此外，'enjoy'后应接动名词'having'。

× It's more interesting to talk about meaningful topics with someone I trust rather than having casual chess in Group.

✓ It's more interesting to talk about meaningful topics with someone I trust rather than having casual chats in a group.

'chess'应为'chat'，表示聊天；'Group'前应加冠词'a'。

× I prefer communicate face to face because I can know the person's facial expression and body language and which can help me understanding what he's saying.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because I can see the person's facial expression and body language, which can help me understand what he's saying.

'prefer'后应加不定式'to communicate'；'know'应改为'see'更合适；'and which'应改为'which'；'help me understanding'应为'help me understand'。

× You with friends? Yes, definitely.

✓ Do you argue with friends? Yes, definitely.

句子缺少动词，完整疑问句应为'Do you argue with friends?'。

× In fact, I believe that this this this agreements can actually help strengthen our relationship because it also allows us to understand each other better.

✓ In fact, I believe that these disagreements can actually help strengthen our relationship because they also allow us to understand each other better.

'this this this'重复错误，应为'these'；'agreements'应为'disagreements'，语义更符合上下文；主谓一致，'it'改为'they'。