Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时应避免语法错误和不自然的表达，例如“pretty enjoy”应改为“really enjoy”。此外，句子结构应更清晰，避免冗余。

예시: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends, but they are often busy, so we don't talk very frequently.

제안: 回答中应注意语法和表达的准确性，避免语句不连贯。内容应更具体，使用连接词使句子更流畅。

예시: We usually talk about fashion styles, new movies, and international news, such as decisions made by Europeans and Americans that might affect China.

제안: 回答应直接回应问题，句子结构需改进，避免语法错误和重复。建议使用连接词使表达更连贯。

예시: I prefer chatting with just one friend because I feel awkward around people I don't know well, and it's uncomfortable to talk with my friend while ignoring others.

제안: 回答应更具体，避免语法错误和模糊表达。应明确表达偏好并使用恰当的连接词。

예시: I enjoy both face-to-face communication and social media because both are convenient ways for me to stay in touch with others.

제안: 回答应注意语法正确性，如“a different opinions”应为“different opinions”。内容应更具体，表达更清晰。

예시: Sometimes we argue about different opinions, such as which movie to watch or the best designs by fashion designers.

× Yeah, I pretty enjoy the chatting time, but actually my friend doesn't like to chat with me often because they are busy.

✓ Yeah, I pretty enjoy the chatting time, but actually my friends don't like to chat with me often because they are busy.

这里的主语是复数朋友（friends），所以谓语动词和代词也应该用复数形式。原句中使用了单数my friend和复数they，造成主谓不一致。应统一为复数形式。

× We usually talk about some fashion style or some movies, newly movie and some news about international situation, like you were European and Americans decision which might influence that, uh, influence the Chinese.

✓ We usually talk about some fashion styles or some movies, new movies and some news about the international situation, like the European and American decisions which might influence, uh, influence the Chinese.

“fashion style”应为复数“fashion styles”，表示多种风格；“newly movie”应为“new movies”，形容词用法错误；“international situation”前应加定冠词“the”，表示特指；“European and Americans decision”应为复数“decisions”，且“Americans”前应为形容词“American”。

× No, I feel awkward when I stay with other people with my friends because I don't know them as well as I just feels uncomfortable when I talking with my friend but not talking with them.

✓ No, I feel awkward when I stay with other people with my friends because I don't know them as well and I just feel uncomfortable when I am talking with my friend but not talking with them.

“I just feels”中主语是第一人称单数，谓语动词应为“feel”而非“feels”；“I talking”缺少助动词，应为“I am talking”。

× I do enjoy this two way to communicate. It doesn't matter how the via, I think communicate is easy to to do with me.

✓ I do enjoy these two ways to communicate. It doesn't matter how, I think communicating is easy for me.

“this two way”应为复数“these two ways”；“how the via”表达不清，应简化为“how”；“communicate is easy to to do with me”结构错误，应改为“communicating is easy for me”。

× Sometimes we will argue about a different opinions like what's the movie we're going in to see and what's the perfect decision of the fashion designers design.

✓ Sometimes we will argue about different opinions like which movie we're going to see and what's the perfect design of the fashion designers.

“a different opinions”中“opinions”是复数，前面不应加不定冠词“a”；“going in to see”应为“going to see”；“decision of the fashion designers design”表达重复，应简化为“design of the fashion designers”。