Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you like chatting with friends?
수험생
Yes, absolutely. I love chatting with my friends whenever we meet on the street randomly or we meet in some parties. I always enjoy like catching up with my friends no matter we are just acquaintances or like close friends. So I love to just keep in touch with the all of my friends and knowing what's happening to them. And also I'm very glad to share what.
시험관
What do you usually chat about with friends?
수험생
Umm, because I'm asked, uh, I'm still a students. That's why I always talk about like academic progress or like what am I doing these days? Like what grade am I, uh, at Or like what papers I published recently, what kind of research I'm doing. And uh, yeah, my friends are also like same age as me. That's what we usually talk about.
시험관
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
수험생
Well, personally speaking, I'd rather chat with only one friend 'cause when you chat with a whole bunch of people, you're like, you don't know when to speak and you don't know like what to speak 'cause like sometimes the topic gets a bit general and it's something like, you can share a lot of things too, but you're like, you don't know who to talk to and if everyone's speaking together.
시험관
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
수험생
What I absolutely love to, uh, communicate face to face instead of chatting on social media because face to face, you can feel what kind of emotion the, uh, person you're talking to actually feels and their responses, You can feel them instantly. And this is very efficient way of communicating instead of just texting and you have to wait for their replies.
시험관
Do you argue with friends?
수험생
What? I rarely argue with my friends because I don't think there's any problems in the world that can harm my friendship with any of my friends. Cause like anything can be, I think anything in the world can be discussed calmly and we can compromise. A step back, take a step back and we don't have to argue. Umm, yes, I never argue with my friend.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you like chatting with friends?
점수: 75.0제안: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it contains some redundancy and informal fillers like 'like' and 'just'. Try to make your sentences more concise and avoid repeating similar ideas. Also, the last sentence is incomplete and unclear. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.
예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends whenever we meet, whether by chance on the street or at parties. I like to catch up with both close friends and acquaintances to stay updated on their lives. Additionally, I appreciate sharing my own experiences with them.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
점수: 70.0제안: Your answer addresses the question but includes many fillers such as 'like', 'uh', and 'umm', which affect fluency. Also, sentence structure can be improved for clarity. Try to organize your ideas logically and use linking words to connect points.
예시: Since I am a student, my conversations with friends usually revolve around academic progress. For example, we discuss our current grades, recent research projects, and papers we have published. Moreover, because my friends are of similar age, we share experiences related to student life.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
점수: 78.0제안: Your answer clearly expresses your preference and reasons, but it contains many informal fillers and some repetition. Try to use more formal language and concise sentences. Also, use linking words to improve coherence.
예시: Personally, I prefer chatting with a single friend because in group conversations, it can be difficult to find the right moment to speak. Additionally, topics often become too general, making it hard to share personal thoughts effectively.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
점수: 80.0제안: Your answer is relevant and provides good reasons, but the frequent use of fillers like 'uh' and some awkward phrasing reduce clarity. Try to speak more fluently and use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.
예시: I definitely prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to perceive the other person's emotions and reactions instantly. Moreover, it is more efficient than texting, where you often have to wait for replies.
Do you argue with friends?
점수: 75.0제안: Your answer conveys your attitude well, but it includes informal language and fillers such as 'like' and 'umm'. Some sentences are fragmented or unclear. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to organize your points.
예시: I rarely argue with my friends because I believe that any problem can be discussed calmly. By taking a step back and compromising, we can maintain our friendship without conflicts.
문법
× I'm still a students.
✓ I'm still a student.
The noun 'students' is plural, but the subject 'I' is singular. The correct singular form 'student' should be used to match the singular subject.
× I love to just keep in touch with the all of my friends and knowing what's happening to them.
✓ I love to just keep in touch with all of my friends and know what's happening to them.
The phrase 'the all of my friends' is incorrect; 'all of my friends' is correct without 'the'. Also, 'knowing' should be 'know' to maintain parallel structure with 'keep' in the infinitive form.
× I never argue with my friend.
✓ I never argue with my friends.
The context implies multiple friends, so the plural 'friends' should be used instead of singular 'friend'.
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