Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is relevant but could be more natural and concise. Avoid filler words like 'umm' and try to combine ideas smoothly using linking words. Also, use more precise vocabulary to express your feelings.

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me stay updated on their lives and also boosts my mood.

제안: Your answer lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence and support it with specific examples. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

예시: We usually talk about our daily experiences and any new events happening in our lives since we lead quite different lifestyles.

제안: Your answer has some vocabulary mistakes and awkward phrasing. Use correct verbs and clearer expressions. Also, try to explain your preference with more specific reasons and linking words.

예시: I prefer chatting with just one friend because it allows us to concentrate on the conversation, and we can enjoy our time together more fully.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors and filler words. Make sure to complete your thoughts and use proper sentence structures. Provide clear reasons and avoid ambiguity.

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication because I can read facial expressions, which helps me understand their feelings better than chatting on social media.

제안: Your answer is too brief and has grammatical mistakes. Try to give a complete and coherent response with linking words and specific details about how you resolve disagreements.

예시: Yes, sometimes we have different opinions, but we usually discuss calmly and find a balance in the end.

× Yes, of course, because chatting with my friends can get some updates from them.

✓ Yes, of course, because chatting with my friends can help me get some updates from them.

The original sentence lacks a verb to indicate the action of obtaining updates. Adding 'help me get' clarifies the meaning and corrects the modal verb usage.

× In addition, I also can umm, get more energy from them.

✓ In addition, I can also get more energy from them.

The placement of 'also' should be after the modal verb 'can' for correct word order in English modal verb usage.

× Since we have totally different life with each other, we like to check about our lives such as something happened in our life or new things.

✓ Since we have totally different lives from each other, we like to talk about our lives, such as things that happened or new things.

'Life' should be plural 'lives' to match the plural subject 'we'. Also, 'with each other' is better expressed as 'from each other'. 'Check about' is incorrect; 'talk about' is appropriate here.

× I prefer trade with only one friend because we can focus on each other's sentences.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because we can focus on each other's sentences.

The verb 'trade' is incorrect in this context; 'chat' fits the meaning. Also, 'prefer' should be followed by 'to' plus the base verb.

× Moreover, during that time, we can enjoy the time with each other most.

✓ Moreover, during that time, we can enjoy the time with each other the most.

The superlative adverb 'most' should be preceded by 'the' to be grammatically correct.

× I prefer to communicate face to face because I can learn their facial expression when we talking.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because I can learn their facial expressions when we are talking.

'Facial expression' should be plural 'facial expressions' to match the context. Also, 'when we talking' is missing the auxiliary verb 'are' for present continuous tense.

× If I, uh, chat with them by social media, maybe I can learn how they're really.

✓ If I chat with them via social media, maybe I can learn how they really are.

The phrase 'how they're really' is incomplete; it should be 'how they really are'. Also, 'by social media' is better expressed as 'via social media'.

× Yes, sometimes when my friends have opposite opinions with me, however we can reach. Balance in the end.

✓ Yes, sometimes when my friends have opposite opinions from me, however, we can reach a balance in the end.

The sentence is fragmented and incorrectly structured. 'Opposite opinions with me' should be 'opposite opinions from me'. Also, 'reach. Balance' should be combined into 'reach a balance'. Adding commas improves clarity.