Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时语法和表达不够自然，句子结构混乱，建议简化句子，直接表达喜欢与朋友和家人聊天的原因，并用连词连接句子，使表达更流畅。

예시: Yes, I like chatting with my friends and parents because it helps me learn new things and understand the world better. Also, talking with them gives me energy and makes me feel happy.

제안: 回答内容不够连贯，表达不清楚，建议直接说明通常聊宠物和日常生活中的小事，并用连词连接句子。

예시: I usually chat about my pet, Bobby, who is very cute. I often talk about what she eats in the morning and share small happy moments from my daily life.

제안: 表达不够准确，语法错误较多，建议简洁明了地表达喜欢与一个朋友聊天的原因，并说明有时也会和父母聊天。

예시: I prefer chatting with only one friend because I don't like large groups. I have one close friend who I can talk to about everything, and sometimes I also talk with my parents.

제안: 回答不连贯，表达含糊，建议明确表达喜欢通过社交媒体交流的原因，并用连词连接句子。

예시: I prefer to communicate via social media because it is interesting and fun. I like to share new things with my friends, which helps us stay connected.

제안: 表达有语法错误且不够自然，建议简洁表达不喜欢与朋友争吵，遇到问题喜欢沟通解决，并用连词连接句子。

예시: No, I don't like to argue with my friends because I am a peaceful person. If we get angry, I prefer to communicate and find ways to solve the problems.

× Yes I will be lecturing.

✓ Yes, I like chatting.

这里学生想表达的是喜欢聊天的习惯，而不是将来进行的动作，使用一般现在时更合适。未来时态用法错误。

× I like conversation with my friend and parents.

✓ I like conversations with my friends and parents.

conversation是可数名词，需用复数形式conversations；且应使用复数friends表示多个朋友。介词with使用正确。

× I like conversation with my friend and parents.

✓ I like conversations with my friends and parents.

conversation应为复数conversations，friend应为friends，表示多个朋友。

× In day conversation I can learn many things such as we can know the world and open my eyes and I I can know the words he says and he can give me some energy so I like.

✓ In daily conversations, I can learn many things, such as knowing the world and opening my eyes. I can understand the words he says, and he can give me some energy, so I like it.

句子结构混乱，缺少标点，时态和表达不清晰。应分句表达，调整词序和时态，使句子通顺。

× I obtained my pets I have a pet it's my car.

✓ I have a pet; it's my cat.

pets复数与后文单数pet不一致，且car应为cat，拼写错误。

× Her name is Bobby and she's very cute.

✓ Its name is Bobby, and it's very cute.

宠物通常用it代替，除非明确性别。此处应使用it。

× I often to say this I often say in morning what he eat and I often say in my Daily Times are small things such as I made a happy things and.

✓ I often say in the morning what he eats, and I often talk about small things in my daily life, such as happy moments.

介词使用错误，缺少冠词，动词形式错误，句子不完整。应使用in the morning，eat应为第三人称单数eats。

× Only one friends because I don't like the many friends.

✓ Only one friend because I don't like many friends.

friends复数与one不匹配，应为friend单数；the many friends中the多余，应去掉。

× I only have one friends but everything I can talk with she and I sometimes talk with my parents because she I am live in in there.

✓ I only have one friend, but I can talk with her about everything. I sometimes talk with my parents because I live there.

friends应为friend单数；代词she应为her；句子结构混乱，重复介词in，应简化表达。

× I sometimes talk with my parents because she I am live in in there.

✓ I sometimes talk with my parents because I live there.

介词in重复使用，且句子中she无意义，应删除。

× Social media pigs in social media, I mean some new things and it is so interesting and so funny.

✓ Social media is interesting; I mean it brings some new things, and it is so interesting and funny.

pigs无意义，应为is；代词使用不当，句子不完整。

× I like to. Share it for we stay it can continue us.

✓ I like to share it so that we can stay connected.

句子结构混乱，表达不清晰，应调整为完整句子。

× No, I don't like argue with friends.

✓ No, I don't like to argue with friends.

动词like后应接不定式to argue，而非动词原形argue。

× I am very peace and if we have some angry I like to communicate.

✓ I am very peaceful, and if we are angry, I like to communicate.

peace是名词，形容词应为peaceful；some angry用法错误，应为are angry。

× I think the organs to solve the problems.

✓ I think we should organize to solve the problems.

organs拼写错误，应为organize；句子缺主语，表达不完整。

× I want you to to find some ways to solve these problems.

✓ I want you to find some ways to solve these problems.

to重复使用，应删除多余的to，使句子通顺。