Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 文法の誤り（例えば、"I feels"は"I feel"が正しい）を修正し、単数・複数の一致を意識しましょう。また、"my friend"よりも"my friends"の方が自然です。回答は簡潔で効果的ですが、より自然な表現を心がけてください。

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it makes me feel happy and relaxed. They often give me useful advice when I feel anxious, so I like to talk with them.

제안: 語彙の誤用（"collects"は不適切）や文法の誤り（"advices"は不可算名詞なので"advice"）を修正しましょう。また、内容をより具体的にし、話の流れを明確にするために接続詞を使うと良いです。

예시: I usually chat about my personal life and relationships because they are quite complex. Since I'm often unsure about certain things, my friends give me good advice.

제안: 繰り返しや言い間違い（"I I", "11 friend"）を避け、文を完結にしましょう。また、理由を明確に述べ、文法的に正しい文章を作ることが重要です。

예시: I prefer chatting with just one friend because in a group, I find it hard to express my true thoughts clearly.

제안: 繰り返し表現（"I can I can", "what what"）や誤った単語（"fear"は"feel"の誤り）を修正しましょう。より自然で流暢な表現を心がけ、理由を明確に述べてください。

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication because I can better understand my friend's feelings, which is difficult through social media.

제안: 繰り返し（"different different", "we have to, we have to"）を避け、文を簡潔にしましょう。"notions"よりも"opinions"の方が自然です。最後の文は文法的に正しく、より明確に表現してください。

예시: Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends because we have different opinions. However, resolving these differences makes our friendship stronger.

× I feels happy and relaxed.

✓ I feel happy and relaxed.

The subject 'I' requires the base form of the verb without 's'. 'Feels' is incorrect because it is used with third person singular subjects, not 'I'.

× I like chatting with my friend.

✓ I like chatting with my friends.

The question asks about chatting with friends in general, so the plural form 'friends' is more appropriate to indicate multiple people.

× My friends often give me some advice for my life, so if I feel anxious, I want to talk with my friend.

✓ My friends often give me some advice for my life, so if I feel anxious, I want to talk with my friends.

Consistency in plural form is needed. Since 'friends' is plural, 'my friend' should also be plural to match the context.

× Love and my life is very complex things so I'm not sure about the collects, so my friend often gives some good advices.

✓ Love and my life are very complex things, so I'm not sure about the details, so my friend often gives some good advice.

'Love and my life' is a compound subject and requires plural verb 'are'. 'Advices' is incorrect because 'advice' is an uncountable noun and does not have a plural form. 'Collects' seems to be a misuse; 'details' fits better.

× my friend often gives some good advices.

✓ my friend often gives some good advice.

'Advice' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized as 'advices'. Use 'some good advice' instead.

× I usually chat about my life and love with my friend.

✓ I usually chat about my life and love with my friends.

The plural 'friends' is more appropriate when referring to chatting generally, matching the question context.

× Love and my life is very complex things

✓ Love and my life are very complex things

Compound subjects joined by 'and' require a plural verb 'are' instead of singular 'is'.

× I I prefer to chat with only one friend.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend.

The repeated 'I' is a typographical error and should be removed.

× This is because when I talk in my in Group I can't I can't say about what I think, but if I talk with 11 friend I can talk about my.

✓ This is because when I talk in a group, I can't say what I think, but if I talk with one friend, I can talk about my thoughts.

The sentence has multiple errors: 'in my in Group' is incorrect; it should be 'in a group'. 'I can't I can't say about what I think' is repetitive and awkward; 'I can't say what I think' is correct. '11 friend' is a typo for 'one friend'. The sentence ends abruptly and needs completion for clarity.

× I prefer to communicate face to face rather than social media.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face rather than via social media.

The preposition 'via' is needed before 'social media' to indicate the medium of communication.

× I can I can feel what what my friend thinks so but if I use via social media I can't fear what they what they think.

✓ I can feel what my friend thinks, but if I use social media, I can't hear what they think.

Repeated words 'I can I can' and 'what what' are errors. 'Fear' is incorrect; the intended word is likely 'hear'. 'Use via social media' is incorrect; 'use social media' or 'communicate via social media' is correct.

× So I want to use face to face.

✓ So I want to use face-to-face communication.

'Face to face' should be hyphenated when used as an adjective or noun phrase. The sentence is incomplete without specifying 'communication'.

× Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends.

✓ Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends.

This sentence is correct; no change needed.

× My friends and I have different different notions.

✓ My friends and I have different notions.

The word 'different' is repeated unnecessarily; only one 'different' is needed.

× So we have to, we have to fix the difference and the difference makes me makes us more strong.

✓ So we have to fix the differences, and the differences make us stronger.

Repetition of 'we have to' and 'makes me makes us' is incorrect. 'Difference' should be plural 'differences' to match context. 'More strong' should be 'stronger' for correct comparative form.