Part 1
시험관
Do you like chatting with friends?
수험생
Yes, I'd very like chatting with friends. I have a lot of friends and I when I chatting with him I feel like comfortable and is and so enjoy it.
시험관
What do you usually chat about with friends?
수험생
When I was in school, I have a lot of time to chatting my with my friend, but I'm great when I graduate I have don't enough time to chatting with my friend.
시험관
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
수험생
Uh, it's have different education because I think, uh, when I was in school, I usually chat with a friend to talk about our reference or something about uh, study. But now I really like uh, with only one friend is me is making me comfortable.
시험관
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
수험생
Yes, I'd like to communicate face to face because it can makes me see others people's face. It makes me more clear to understand what they say.
시험관
Do you argue with friends?
수험생
Actually not, because I think argue is a problem for each other and I think most questions we will talk about and I say it's necessary for argue.
Do you like chatting with friends?
점수: 50.0제안: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题,例如“I'd very like chatting”应为“I really like chatting”。建议加强语法基础,注意主谓一致和时态使用,同时避免重复和冗余表达。
예시: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it makes me feel comfortable and happy.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
점수: 40.0제안: 回答中时态混乱且表达不清晰,如“have don't enough time”应为“don't have enough time”。建议练习正确使用时态和句子结构,表达时要简洁明了。
예시: When I was in school, I used to chat with my friends a lot, but after graduation, I don't have enough time to talk with them.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
점수: 45.0제안: 回答中有很多语法错误和不连贯的表达,如“it's have different education”不符合语法。建议多练习句子结构,使用连接词使表达更流畅。
예시: It depends on the situation. When I was in school, I usually chatted with friends about study materials, but now I prefer talking to one friend because it feels more comfortable.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
점수: 60.0제안: 回答基本表达了观点,但存在语法错误,如“can makes”应为“can make”。建议注意动词形式和句子简洁性。
예시: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because I can see people's facial expressions, which helps me understand them better.
Do you argue with friends?
점수: 40.0제안: 回答表达不清晰,语法错误较多,如“argue is a problem for each other”表达不准确。建议学习如何清楚表达观点,使用正确的句子结构。
예시: Actually, I don't usually argue with my friends because I believe we can solve most problems by talking calmly.
× Yes, I'd very like chatting with friends.
✓ Yes, I'd very much like chatting with friends.
这里'd是would的缩写,后面应该用副词修饰like,very后面缺少副词much,正确表达是very much like。
× I have a lot of friends and I when I chatting with him I feel like comfortable and is and so enjoy it.
✓ I have a lot of friends and when I chat with them, I feel comfortable and enjoy it very much.
动词chat后面不应该用-ing形式,应该用一般现在时chat;feel后面形容词comfortable前不需要like;句子结构混乱,需调整顺序和代词him改为them以匹配复数friends。
× When I was in school, I have a lot of time to chatting my with my friend, but I'm great when I graduate I have don't enough time to chatting with my friend.
✓ When I was in school, I had a lot of time to chat with my friends, but now after I graduated, I don't have enough time to chat with my friends.
to后面接动词原形chat,不是chatting;时态应与时间状语一致,过去时had;句子中have don't应改为don't have;my friend应改为friends以匹配复数。
× Uh, it's have different education because I think, uh, when I was in school, I usually chat with a friend to talk about our reference or something about uh, study.
✓ Uh, it depends on different education because I think, uh, when I was in school, I usually chatted with a friend to talk about our references or something about study.
it's have不正确,应改为it depends;chat后面应使用过去时chatted;reference应复数references;about study前不需要介词about。
× But now I really like uh, with only one friend is me is making me comfortable.
✓ But now I really like chatting with only one friend because it makes me comfortable.
like后面应接动词的-ing形式chatting;with only one friend前不应有is me;句子结构需调整使表达清晰。
× Yes, I'd like to communicate face to face because it can makes me see others people's face.
✓ Yes, I'd like to communicate face to face because it can make me see other people's faces.
情态动词can后动词用原形make,不加s;others people's face应改为other people's faces,复数形式。
× It makes me more clear to understand what they say.
✓ It makes it clearer for me to understand what they say.
more clear应改为比较级clearer;动词understand前加介词for me使句子更自然。
× Actually not, because I think argue is a problem for each other and I think most questions we will talk about and I say it's necessary for argue.
✓ Actually not, because I think arguing is a problem between each other and I think for most questions we will talk about them, and I don't think it's necessary to argue.
argue作为动词,名词形式为arguing;for each other应改为between each other;句子结构混乱,需调整使表达清晰;necessary后接不定式to argue。