Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is quite long and contains some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to make your response more concise and natural by directly answering the question and then briefly explaining your reason. Avoid negative or harsh words like 'hate' and 'fake' to sound more polite and natural.

예시: No, I don't enjoy chatting with many friends because I'm quite introverted. I prefer having a few close friends rather than many acquaintances.

제안: Your answer is relevant and provides specific details, but the grammar and sentence structure could be improved for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and avoid repetition. Also, try to use more natural expressions.

예시: As I mentioned, I'm quite introverted and prefer meaningful conversations. Usually, I talk with my friends about their life goals, future plans, and how we can make good use of our time together.

제안: Your answer repeats ideas and has some grammatical mistakes. Try to organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details, using linking words to improve coherence. Also, avoid redundancy and clarify your examples.

예시: I prefer chatting with just one friend because I have only a few close friends. For example, I still keep in touch with my childhood friend from nursery school. I don't enjoy group conversations much.

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant, but you can improve it by using more varied vocabulary and linking words to make it more fluent. Also, try to avoid repeating similar phrases and explain your feelings more naturally.

예시: I prefer communicating via social media because I often feel nervous during face-to-face conversations. Through chatting or video calls, I find it easier to express myself comfortably.

제안: Your answer is understandable but contains some awkward phrasing and grammar errors. Try to express your ideas more naturally and clearly, and avoid vague expressions like 'there won't be any seen'.

예시: No, I usually avoid arguments with my friends. If I disagree, I prefer to stay quiet or change the subject to keep the conversation peaceful.

× No, I don't like chatting with friend while I'm one of the introvert person you'll have ever met and I don't prefer making lots of friends and chatting with them since they're very much fake nowadays and I hate talking with people.

✓ No, I don't like chatting with friends while I'm one of the introverted people you'll have ever met and I don't prefer making lots of friends and chatting with them since they're very much fake nowadays and I hate talking with people.

The word 'friend' should be plural 'friends' because it refers to more than one person. Also, 'introvert person' should be plural 'introverted people' to agree with 'one of the'. Singular and plural agreement is important for clarity.

× No, I don't like chatting with friend while I'm one of the introvert person you'll have ever met and I don't prefer making lots of friends and chatting with them since they're very much fake nowadays and I hate talking with people.

✓ No, I don't like chatting with friends while I'm one of the introverted people you'll have ever met and I don't prefer making lots of friends and chatting with them since they're very fake nowadays and I hate talking with people.

The adjective 'introvert' should be 'introverted' to correctly describe a person with introverted characteristics. Also, 'very much fake' is incorrect; 'very fake' is the proper adjective phrase.

× Well, I've mentioned before I'm kind of introvert girl.

✓ Well, I've mentioned before I'm kind of an introverted girl.

The phrase 'introvert girl' should be 'introverted girl' to use the correct adjective form. Also, the article 'an' is needed before 'introverted' because it starts with a vowel sound.

× Well, I've mentioned before I'm kind of introvert girl.

✓ Well, I've mentioned before I'm kind of an introverted girl.

The adjective 'introvert' should be 'introverted' to properly describe the noun 'girl'. The article 'an' is also necessary before the adjective starting with a vowel sound.

× I usually prefer deep conversation with my friends, like what they are doing with their life, what's their future plan and what more fruitful thing we can do in order to utilize our time.

✓ I usually prefer deep conversations with my friends, like what they are doing with their lives, what their future plans are, and what more fruitful things we can do in order to utilize our time.

The nouns 'conversation', 'life', 'plan', and 'thing' should be plural to match the context of multiple friends and multiple topics. Plural forms improve clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I usually prefer chatting with only one friend. Like I have said before, I have very few friends and I prefer making very less friend.

✓ I usually prefer chatting with only one friend. Like I have said before, I have very few friends and I prefer making very few friends.

The phrase 'very less friend' is incorrect; 'very few friends' is the correct quantifier and plural noun form to express a small number.

× For example, I have got only one. For instance my nursery primary school.

✓ For example, I have got only one friend from my nursery primary school.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'friend' clarifies the meaning and connects the idea properly. Also, 'nursery primary school' is used as a location modifier.

× I don't like making much friend or talking with them in Group.

✓ I don't like making many friends or talking with them in groups.

'Much friend' is incorrect; 'many friends' is the correct plural quantifier. Also, 'Group' should be plural 'groups' to generalize the context.

× I prefer social media rather than communicate face to face.

✓ I prefer social media rather than communicating face to face.

After 'rather than', the verb should be in the '-ing' form to maintain parallel structure. 'Communicating' is correct here.

× I feel very nervous while I'm talking face to face.

✓ I feel very nervous when I talk face to face.

The phrase 'while I'm talking' is less natural here; 'when I talk' is more appropriate to express habitual action in present tense.

× If I don't agree with them then I just keep my mouth closed and just change the topic so there won't be any seen.

✓ If I don't agree with them, then I just keep my mouth closed and change the topic so there won't be any scene.

The phrase 'any seen' is incorrect; the correct word is 'scene' meaning a disturbance or argument. Also, a comma is needed after 'them' for clarity.