Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is good but try to avoid filler words like 'I guess' and make your sentences more concise and natural. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, instead of 'Also they are living in a foreign land so I could not possibly meet them,' you can say 'Since they live abroad, chatting helps us stay connected.'

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it is fun and helps us stay connected. Since they live abroad, we cannot meet often, so chatting is important to maintain our friendship.

제안: Your answer covers the topic well but could be improved by using linking words and more specific vocabulary. For example, use 'For instance' or 'Additionally' to connect ideas and replace 'new interesting things' with more precise descriptions.

예시: We usually chat about various topics. For instance, we talk about the time we spent together recently, the food we ate, and any interesting experiences we had. Additionally, we share funny stories and jokes to keep the conversation lively.

제안: Try to avoid repeating words like 'mood' and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words such as 'but' or 'however' properly and make your answer more concise and natural.

예시: It depends on my mood. Sometimes, I prefer chatting with just one friend because I don't always feel like socializing with many people. However, I also enjoy group chats with my friends when I feel more outgoing.

제안: Avoid filler words like 'uh' and incomplete sentences. Make your answer more structured by clearly stating your preference and giving specific reasons with linking words.

예시: I prefer both face-to-face communication and social media because staying connected is important to me. However, it depends on the situation; for example, when we are busy, social media helps us keep in touch easily.

제안: Improve grammar by using correct verb forms and avoid awkward phrases like 'the Breakers of the friendship.' Use linking words to explain your reasons clearly.

예시: I don't like to argue with my friends over small issues because it can damage our relationship. Therefore, I try to avoid conflicts to maintain our friendship.

× I am the type of person who do not like to conflict over small things and make it bigger.

✓ I am the type of person who does not like to conflict over small things and make them bigger.

The subject 'who' refers to 'person', which is singular, so the verb should be 'does' instead of 'do'. Also, 'make it bigger' should be 'make them bigger' because 'small things' is plural.

× Also they are living in a foreign land so I could not possibly meet them.

✓ Also, they are living in a foreign land so I cannot possibly meet them.

The modal verb 'could' is incorrect here because the situation is present and ongoing; 'cannot' is appropriate to express impossibility in the present.

× For me it actually depends on my mood honestly because I always do not have the mood to socialize with a lot of people.

✓ For me, it actually depends on my mood honestly because I do not always have the mood to socialize with a lot of people.

The phrase 'always do not have' is incorrect; the correct placement is 'do not always have' to express frequency properly.

× However, I do enjoy chatting with group of friends and I also do have a group chat of friends that I communicate.

✓ However, I do enjoy chatting with a group of friends and I also have a group chat of friends that I communicate with.

The phrase 'chatting with group of friends' is missing the article 'a'. Also, 'communicate' needs the preposition 'with' to be correct.