Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时应避免重复和语法错误，句子应更简洁自然。可以先直接回答喜欢聊天，然后说明原因，避免多余的犹豫词。

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because I can share secrets and feel relaxed, which I can't do with my parents.

제안: 回答应更连贯，避免重复和语法错误。可以用连接词组织内容，具体说明聊天话题。

예시: We usually talk about boys, dating, and interesting things that have happened recently.

제안: 回答时应注意语法完整，使用连接词使句子更流畅。表达观点时要清晰。

예시: It depends on the topic. For secrets, I prefer chatting with one close friend, but for interesting topics, I like chatting with a group of friends.

제안: 回答应避免语法错误，句子更自然。使用连接词表达对比，具体说明原因。

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication because, although social media is convenient, it doesn't allow me to observe my friend's mood or understand their thoughts clearly.

제안: 回答应更自然，避免生硬表达。可以用更地道的词汇和句式表达观点。

예시: Yes, I do argue with friends sometimes because discussions help me understand things better and gain new insights.

× So I think chatting with friends is a good way to tell some things that is very secret and chat, chatting with them are very relaxed.

✓ So I think chatting with friends is a good way to tell some things that are very secret and chatting with them is very relaxed.

这里的things是复数，谓语动词应该用复数形式are，而不是is；后半句中主语chatting是单数，谓语动词应为is，而不是are。

× like we can talk about a boy or talk about a boyfriend or dating and so and and even we can talk about an interesting things that they happened.

✓ like we can talk about a boy or talk about a boyfriend or dating and so on and even we can talk about interesting things that happened.

things是复数，前面不应加不定冠词an；短语so and and应为so on and；they happened中they指代不明，且时态不对，改为that happened更合适。

× Depend on the things because I think some secret things I will only chat with my best friend or chat with one friend, but some interesting things or some different things I will chat with a group of people that all my friends.

✓ Depends on the things because I think some secret things I will only chat with my best friend or chat with one friend, but some interesting things or some different things I will chat with a group of people that are all my friends.

主语Depend应为第三人称单数形式Depends；people后面缺少关系动词are。

× I prefer to communicate face to face, although social media is very good, but through the social media communicate we can't observation the friends mood and I don't know what he think.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face, although social media is very good, but through social media communication we can't observe the friend's mood and I don't know what he thinks.

短语through the social media communicate应改为through social media communication；动词observation应为observe；friends mood应为friend's mood，表示所有格；he think应为he thinks，主谓一致。

× I don't know what he think.

✓ I don't know what he thinks.

主语he是第三人称单数，谓语动词think应加s变为thinks，保持主谓一致。